[Week 16] [Champ] C. T.a.C(8-0) vs 2. Gramur(2-1)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
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    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
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    First battler to post is allowed to edit their verse up until the second battler posts theirs. Once the second battler posts, they are allowed to edit their verse until the first vote is casted.
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    Disruptive members will be banned from the league will and have their posts moved to the garbage bin thread.
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  2. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    20 since this is the Champ match...
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Damnit. Ight. Good luck bud
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  4. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    LP beat you, technicalities are straight weak
    Oh, and did I mention that I’ve beaten him 3 times in the last 8 weeks?
    So pray freak, but the God cannot be threatened
    This battles the Springer show…
    …We’re here cuz you got lucky with my sloppy seconds
    He knew off the check-in he’d get his ass kicked
    Gave him top 3 in the power ranks…
    …Gassing him up are jus my Nazi T.a.Ctics
    Your mom’s mom was a cunt, I’m taggin, ma’am
    Drug dealer turned Forensic Scientist…
    …Cuz even coroners admire how I’m baggin Grams
    You only outsmart border-jumpers, stuck in trunks
    Did some research on you for this battle…
    …Now I get why foreigners say learning Gramur fuckin sucks
    Legends beat me, this week I cant be fretting
    Yeah, I lost my war with Drugs...
    …So why would a fuckin Gram have me sweating?
    I’m teeing off, last week G freaking lost
    So I’m taking it back to elementary…
    …Take notes, in this battle theres Gram ur getting taught
    You have no fans, and often s’posed to lose
    Time to take you out the league…
    …Not into spreading rumors, but I’ll Montreal Expo’s you

    http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-...eek-13-7-criticize-0-0-vs-8-gramur-0-0-a.html

    criticize-0-0-vs-8-gramur-0-0-a.html
    I hate to Criticize, but this battle was so blowed
    How you expect to be champ…
    …3 weeks after losing a battle the other dude no showed?
    Go home, this week you have no fuckin hope
    Drug sniffing dogs let him pass…
    …Cuz they smell Grams, but he never brings nothing dope
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  5. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    I'm bout to post..been busy as fuck..my bad
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  6. Gramur

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    I could give two fucks if you're a fighter or the writer who trends
    I'm like Bama...even the eye of the Tiger won't help you see a win
    we've BEEN doin this shit..I still punch through yo guard
    you've BEEN a crab...^and now you on Silentt's nuts So hard
    I'd test your G card...but dammit you're a pussy
    if we fought...I'd turn ya face the Color Purple...have you lookin like Whoopi
    you've beaten rookies...now your record's 8 and 0 but you're no great
    ^if you've gotten Proactiv...it's for the acne on your face
    you're such a contradicting fake....claim you're veteran but see
    that's like beating innocent fans..then changing your name to Metta World Peace
    T.a.C you've never been beast...lyrics so dead
    but here....take this line.... and maybe then you'll be a dope head
    this battle's truly gory...so Rapmusic's gonna sue me
    when I leave a T bloody...like a gangster in a movie
    I can make your bitch choose me..she'll hide it...and keep it private
    she say I can have the booty...got me feeling like a pirate
    keep it hype because I'm better...and the thread title is facts
    I been Grade A with this text...you just get a C. T.a.C
    stop the madness..ima put you in a hearse
    how the fuck you write a mag...and it's sicker than your verse?


    ok...lol I'm tipsy...good luck bro
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  7. ChopChoiceBeats

    ChopChoiceBeats a.k.a ESKIMO SPLIF

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    VS

    Vote - Edge to Gramur
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  8. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    this was pretty close, but i gotta give it to tac this time
    the felt the punch quality was about the same, gram had it a little the flow, but take had more on the multis, wordplay and nameplay, not that gram had a bad verse by any means, shit was nice, just had some inconsistencies

    vote TAC
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  9. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    LP beat you, technicalities are straight weak
    Oh, and did I mention that I’ve beaten him 3 times in the last 8 weeks?

    [I'm not gonna lie i sorta favor the fact you opened your verse up wih my name]

    So pray freak, but the God cannot be threatened
    This battles the Springer show…
    …We’re here cuz you got lucky with my sloppy seconds

    [loved the set up punch set up haymaker]

    He knew off the check-in he’d get his ass kicked
    Gave him top 3 in the power ranks…
    …Gassing him up are jus my Nazi T.a.Ctics

    [quoteable]

    Your mom’s mom was a cunt, I’m taggin, ma’am
    Drug dealer turned Forensic Scientist…
    …Cuz even coroners admire how I’m baggin Grams

    [quotable]

    You only outsmart border-jumpers, stuck in trunks
    Did some research on you for this battle…
    …Now I get why foreigners say learning Gramur fuckin sucks

    [almost a quotable]

    Legends beat me, this week I cant be fretting
    Yeah, I lost my war with Drugs...
    …So why would a fuckin Gram have me sweating?

    [quotable]

    I’m teeing off, last week G freaking lost
    So I’m taking it back to elementary…
    …Take notes, in this battle theres Gram ur getting taught

    [not feelin the rhymescheme]

    You have no fans, and often s’posed to lose
    Time to take you out the league…
    …Not into spreading rumors, but I’ll Montreal Expo’s you

    [average wordplay but didn't understand the punch ]

    [Week 13] 7. Criticize(0-0) vs 8. Gramur(0-0)

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    I hate to Criticize, but this battle was so blowed
    How you expect to be champ…
    …3 weeks after losing a battle the other dude no showed?

    [ meh ]

    Go home, this week you have no fuckin hope
    Drug sniffing dogs let him pass…
    …Cuz they smell Grams, but he never brings nothing dope

    [quotable]


    -vs-

    I could give two fucks if you're a fighter or the writer who trends
    I'm like Bama...even the eye of the Tiger won't help you see a win

    not feelin this punch

    we've BEEN doin this shit..I still punch through yo guard
    Quote:
    T.a.C discussing Silentt If he takes 15 minutes to come up with a verse this run in the league, he’ll probably be spending too much time on it.
    you've BEEN a crab...^and now you on Silentt's nuts So hard

    [this was a sleeper punch.. but i got it.. it's quote worthy]

    I'd test your G card...but dammit you're a pussy
    if we fought...I'd turn ya face the Color Purple...have you lookin like Whoopi

    [idk if it's original or not but i liked this and it's a quotable ]

    you've beaten rookies...now your record's 8 and 0 but you're no great
    ^if you've gotten Proactiv...it's for the acne on your face

    [lool]

    you're such a contradicting fake....claim you're veteran but see
    that's like beating innocent fans..then changing your name to Metta World Peace

    [not feelin]

    T.a.C you've never been beast...lyrics so dead
    but here....take this line.... and maybe then you'll be a dope head

    [quotable]

    this battle's truly gory...so Rapmusic's gonna sue me
    when I leave a T bloody...like a gangster in a movie

    [meh..]

    I can make your bitch choose me..she'll hide it...and keep it private
    she say I can have the booty...got me feeling like a pirate

    [quotable]

    keep it hype because I'm better...and the thread title is facts
    I been Grade A with this text...you just get a C. T.a.C

    [this was okay]

    stop the madness..ima put you in a hearse
    how the fuck you write a mag...and it's sicker than your verse?

    [quotable]


    so t.a.c. had around 6-7 quotable vs grams 5

    vote=t.a.c.
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  10. KingNicholis

    KingNicholis New Member

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    GODDAMNIT WHY DO I HAVE TO VOTE ON THIS SHIT?


    vote = TAC cuz he didn't imply that i have crabs. BTW, a lot of this shit is really soft wordplay, TAC your lines are too long. And nothing seems to be too insulting throughout the entire battle.


    nazi line had potential....then ended flat. sloppy seconds never had potential, bagging grams was worded bad..learning gramur sucks, could've been nice if it wasn't a paragraph long, iono, maybe im just far removed.

    Gramur your closer had the most spark, a lot of weak/non connecting punches too. whoopi was used against me during my first rbl battle, and i won.

    vote = tac tho. step it up, just cuz i threw up some bullshit against mc unheardof doesn't mean i wanna be bored to death..
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  11. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    Shoulda reworded this line like this, cus it was too long lol.

    You only outsmart border-jumpers, stuck in trunks
    Did some research on you for this battle...
    Mexicans say learning Gramur fuckin sucks

    Not so long, and Mexicans are the "border-jumpers" anyway :scared:

    Some ok stuff, some of it was blah, but nothing that was bad.

    Gram had the closer

    stop the madness..ima put you in a hearse
    how the fuck you write a mag...and it's sicker than your verse?

    But the setup was blah. The rest was mostly played lines

    T.a.C you've never been beast...lyrics so dead
    but here....take this line.... and maybe then you'll be a dope head

    I can make your bitch choose me..she'll hide it...and keep it private
    she say I can have the booty...got me feeling like a pirate

    ^:dead:

    or, just bad

    keep it hype because I'm better...and the thread title is facts
    I been Grade A with this text...you just get a C. T.a.C

    Some was alright, but the concepts weren't so great. Some weren't really even dissing him all that hard.

    you're such a contradicting fake....claim you're veteran but see
    that's like beating innocent fans..then changing your name to Metta World Peace

    Kind of a stretch. I'll give you a "He was drunk" pass, cus I kinda liked your shit last week.

    Anyway..

    Vote - T.a.C
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  12. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    T.a.C wins 4 to 1
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