(Week 16) 1. Linesman (8-2) vs. 2. DaTruthHurts (4-0) *Title Match*

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    III. RBL Rules

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  2. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    16 Line minimum in the Title Match
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  3. Linesman

    Linesman New Member

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    Check..16-20.
    Good luck.
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  4. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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  5. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    Extension? Sorry, I'm flyin' home today and prolly won't have time to write later tonight.
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  6. Revanon

    Revanon Comeback of the Year.

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    I don't get it...if you KNOW the week will be busy...why not post sooner?
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  7. Abn0rmal

    Abn0rmal Legend.txt

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  8. Linesman

    Linesman New Member

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    Its cool with me..just when you post, go 16, so your death is quick and painless. lol
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  9. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    DaTruthHurtz..

    But werd.. Lines ok'd it so I don't give a shit
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  10. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    Why didn't I post earlier? Cuz I was busy. Move over Linesman...

    Cuz ur a nothin' champ, not even worth a bit of a mention
    Ur not a big deal, if A-Rod saw u, he'd ask for a bigger extension
    Fuck I'm tired of these newbs, Grimet's got me so annoyed
    I'd go enlist reasons ur wack, but the army knows ur just a soldier, boy
    Ur name says it all, this lil shit ain't a threat
    Bitch ur ONLY a linesman cuz ur not good enough to be a legitimate ref
    Seen how u place, fuck u, u won't be winnin' this brawl
    U don't usually finish 2nd, ur whale of a girl can't get u to finish at all
    Do ya think u even have a CHANCE?!? Please yo
    Got so much trouble Trump'n me, I thought u was fat n' bankrupted casinos
    This lame'll get scarred, fuck it, this gay isn't hard
    U've reached a lotta milestones, but ur chevy can only take u so far
    Ur an asshole, u got no friends who come out to see ya
    Bitch, u got NO Seoul... like countries not named South Korea
    Weekend's comin' up, I got plans that I meant to
    Go get wassssttttedddd, like any good punch thats written against u

    Get yo shit up asap
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  11. Linesman

    Linesman New Member

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    Look, this shit is absurd..
    He spent an extra day fixin his words..
    ..just to get kicked to the curb..with filler for Purg.
    Hes a chump & he knows it..Imma body this cat, period.
    Fuck keepin up with the Jones's..he's not even half Serius!
    Hes prolly some metal-mouth buster..
    ..his last foe was 'Strict'?
    After this whoopin' I'll send him to bed without supper.
    I think a straight male is what he pretends to be like..
    Can't tell for sure, but hey..the Truth comes out eventually, right?
    In any case, my Gaydar is up 4 extra increments.
    My titles not changing hands..
    But after I beat him, it'll definitely hold less signifigance.
    Ugly as fuck, wonderin' why women are laughin..
    His face can break more mirrors than the climax of Enter The Dragon.
    I'm Couture, son. Always in a dominant position.
    And if Dana White read this..I'd probably be sponsored by Affliction.
    Fuck anyone who thought this kid would win somethin'.
    I ain't no paper champion..unless you hit the print button.
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  12. Nonpareil

    Nonpareil It's Whateva

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    1. "Ur name says it all, this lil shit ain't a threat
    Bitch ur ONLY a linesman cuz ur not good enough to be a legitimate ref"
    2. "This lame'll get scarred, fuck it, this gay isn't hard
    U've reached a lotta milestones, but ur chevy can only take u so far"
    3. "Ur an asshole, u got no friends who come out to see ya
    Bitch, u got NO Seoul... like countries not named South Korea"

    against

    1. "Hes a chump & he knows it..Imma body this cat, period.
    Fuck keepin up with the Jones's..he's not even half Serius!"
    2. "Ugly as fuck, wonderin' why women are laughin..
    His face can break more mirrors than the climax of Enter The Dragon."
    3. "Fuck anyone who thought this kid would win somethin'.
    I ain't no paper champion..unless you hit the print button.

    This battle wasn't as strong as I expected it to be. I felt linesman could
    have done so much better, since I am more familiar with his verses.
    Here and there, there were a few good punchlines, but the rest seemed
    week and somewhat "forced". All in all I feel that this battle and my vote
    better belongs to


    DaTruSHurtz
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  13. Vivify

    Vivify New Member

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    Cuz ur a nothin' champ, not even worth a bit of a mention
    Ur not a big deal, if A-Rod saw u, he'd ask for a bigger extension
    Seen how u place, fuck u, u won't be winnin' this brawl
    U don't usually finish 2nd, ur whale of a girl can't get u to finish at all
    Weekend's comin' up, I got plans that I meant to
    Go get wassssttttedddd, like any good punch thats written against u

    vs.

    Hes prolly some metal-mouth buster..
    ..his last foe was 'Strict'?
    After this whoopin' I'll send him to bed without supper.
    I think a straight male is what he pretends to be like..
    Can't tell for sure, but hey..the Truth comes out eventually, right?
    In any case, my Gaydar is up 4 extra increments.
    My titles not changing hands..
    But after I beat him, it'll definitely hold less signifigance.
    Ugly as fuck, wonderin' why women are laughin..
    His face can break more mirrors than the climax of Enter The Dragon.
    I'm Couture, son. Always in a dominant position.


    trus had more creative concepts, but his execution/wording was bad, like the bankrupt casinos lines. some lines was stretched, and there was barely any flow at all, and didn't come off as hard as they could have. and the soldier boy line didn't make any sense.....if the army knows he's a soldier, why wouldn't they enlist him? I can see what you were trying to do, but it wasn't executed well.

    lines was kind of the opposite. his concepts were bland or only okay, but his wording was nice, like his opener. the concept itself wasn't spectacular, but the flow was dope, and I almost quoted it. serious jones lines was weak.


    this battle was reallly decided by lineman's better technique. creativity needs some beefing up, but otherwise, I think he won this battle.

    vote-lines
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  14. Vivify

    Vivify New Member

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    I forgot to mention.....the Arod line was dope, and that line was actually pulled off well. that definately needs to be a top ten punch
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  15. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    vote - da trus

    linesman had half filler, and da trus actually gave more content and more quality.
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  16. Realness

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    DaTrus


    Cuz ur a nothin' champ, not even worth a bit of a mention
    Ur not a big deal, if A-Rod saw u, he'd ask for a bigger extension
    decent
    Fuck I'm tired of these newbs, Grimet's got me so annoyed
    I'd go enlist reasons ur wack, but the army knows ur just a soldier, boy
    not bad
    Ur name says it all, this lil shit ain't a threat
    Bitch ur ONLY a linesman cuz ur not good enough to be a legitimate ref
    forced, but a good personal nevertheless
    Seen how u place, fuck u, u won't be winnin' this brawl
    U don't usually finish 2nd, ur whale of a girl can't get u to finish at all
    not bad but i just didn't feel it particularly
    Do ya think u even have a CHANCE?!? Please yo
    Got so much trouble Trump'n me, I thought u was fat n' bankrupted casinos
    good set up, bad execution on the punch
    This lame'll get scarred, fuck it, this gay isn't hard
    U've reached a lotta milestones, but ur chevy can only take u so far
    not really
    Ur an asshole, u got no friends who come out to see ya
    Bitch, u got NO Seoul... like countries not named South Korea
    straight wack
    Weekend's comin' up, I got plans that I meant to
    Go get wassssttttedddd, like any good punch thats written against u
    below average closer

    - overall an ok verse, but nothing that hints that this is a title match


    linesman

    Look, this shit is absurd..
    He spent an extra day fixin his words..
    ..just to get kicked to the curb..with filler for Purg.
    ok i guess
    Hes a chump & he knows it..Imma body this cat, period.
    Fuck keepin up with the Jones's..he's not even half Serius!
    good
    Hes prolly some metal-mouth buster..
    ..his last foe was 'Strict'?
    After this whoopin' I'll send him to bed without supper.
    witty, but not particularly hard-hitting
    I think a straight male is what he pretends to be like..
    Can't tell for sure, but hey..the Truth comes out eventually, right?
    NICE!!
    In any case, my Gaydar is up 4 extra increments.
    My titles not changing hands..
    But after I beat him, it'll definitely hold less signifigance.
    haha dope
    Ugly as fuck, wonderin' why women are laughin..
    His face can break more mirrors than the climax of Enter The Dragon.
    ok, noting special
    I'm Couture, son. Always in a dominant position.
    And if Dana White read this..I'd probably be sponsored by Affliction.
    no, wack
    Fuck anyone who thought this kid would win somethin'.
    I ain't no paper champion..unless you hit the print button.
    good closer

    overall linesman takes this, i feel like he either posted enough to win and didn't try hard, but theres some good lines in there and he takes this over trus

    Vote - Linesman
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  17. Final Chapta

    Final Chapta End of Story

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    iono what happened lines.

    dont know if you didnt take this guy seriously ..
    .. or if you rushed it or whatever , but he got at you

    no seriously , as in serious jones - ly ..he got at you

    better punches man , dude was hungry and you werent

    Vote to Trus Funds

    Chap.
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  18. LiL Man

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    hmm....

    battle of the week...and the toughest to vote on...


    truth had a LOT of dope concepts...opener four were pure fire...finish second line was nice as well, and I liked your closer a lot. Lines had some pretty serious ones as well..Strict line was nice, truth comes out was fire, less significance was dope...and that enter the dragon line had me rolling...love those comedic ones...

    at first I thought truth was taking this no doubt, but he ever so slightly fell off as the verse progressed, despite the moneyshot closer. Lines started off kind of slow, but picked up the pace and dropped a verse that was a little more consistent as far as creativity and hard-hittingness goes. Kudos to the two of you...you guys put on a hell of a show...easily the most enjoyable read of the week, except for maybe the baron-koolaid battle. If I had to give the slight edge to someone...it'd have to be...

    vote - linesman
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  19. Linesman

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  20. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    lol...you just want your rematch....


    oh sorry for not voting here guys...i read both verses...couldnt find a clear winner...so sorry...
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