[Week 15] [Champ] C. T.a.C(7-0) vs 2. Mrjdm998(2-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
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    A title wont change hands by no show
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  2. Mrjdm998

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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    12?

    Good luck bud
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  4. Mrjdm998

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    Tacky the last year of your life sucked but this one may be worse
    So for 2012 you should try something new...
    ...Like writing a creative verse
    You've got an over inflated ego, gassing yourself up with no bars
    T's always with an A.C...
    ...So of course he's a blow hard
    You always edge by each week, make us hope you come back strong
    Your name makes perfect sense now, 'cus your verses just feel TACked on
    Half your bars just feel like one liner jokes the novelty didn't last long
    'Cus when it comes to quality punches your verses/vs contain Zero...
    ...Marvel vs Capcom
    When TAC's not writing a battle it's 'cus he fucked up his wi-fi encryption
    Guy's a bitch from the Westside who uses keys...
    ...He's Cookie Kwan from the Simpsons
    When I insult you T it's well thought out and more than just a funny antic
    The plan's too play it like a chess game...
    ...And see what makes TAC tick/tactic
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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    You’re now in the big leagues, I hope you’re set to lose
    Call this league NAMBLA…
    …A group of men that wanna see this lil boy get abused
    Quit the ruse, Bitch, I have proof that you bend fo’ dick
    Cuz all your last title reigned showed is you give it up to Men-so quick

    I’ll send this simple faggot to die like your gottdamn leader
    You don’t struggle to write a simple diss…
    …but your simplicity has kept you a bottom feeder
    I bought a liter for your milestone this cursed week
    It’s a big deal to reach 2-1, so Sunday I’ma buy him his first drink
    You’re an atheist? I was too until I found some prayers
    After getting your mom pregnant with you…
    …I took up praying, I prayed that she’d fall down the stairs
    Even though you’re being slaughtered like cattle, smile
    Cuz truth is, I like you…
    …None of this is anything personal, you know, like your battle style
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  6. Gramur

    Gramur Yung Troy

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    this battle was nice..gon be hard to vote on this..Ima break this down step by step..

    MrJ,
    Tacky the last year of your life sucked but this one may be worse
    So for 2012 you should try something new...
    ...Like writing a creative verse
    ^simple diss right here but effective...probably because it was a good setup

    You've got an over inflated ego, gassing yourself up with no bars
    T's always with an A.C...
    ...So of course he's a blow hard
    ^some gonna say this was a little forced but I actually dug it...not bad

    You always edge by each week, make us hope you come back strong
    Your name makes perfect sense now, 'cus your verses just feel TACked on
    ^this was aite..not great

    Half your bars just feel like one liner jokes the novelty didn't last long
    'Cus when it comes to quality punches your verses/vs contain Zero...
    ...Marvel vs Capcom
    ^this was good...
    but would have been better like this...

    ...Marvel vs Capcom
    'Cus when it comes to quality punches your verses/vs contain Zero...

    When TAC's not writing a battle it's 'cus he fucked up his wi-fi encryption
    Guy's a bitch from the Westside who uses keys...
    ...He's Cookie Kwan from the Simpsons
    ^ehh...wasn't feeling this one much

    When I insult you T it's well thought out and more than just a funny antic
    The plan's too play it like a chess game...
    ...And see what makes a TAC tick/tactic
    ^coo concept..didn't hit very hard though

    but overall a pretty decent verse...you probably are the quickest learner RBL has ever seen...good job

    T.a.C
    You’re now in the big leagues, I hope you’re set to lose
    Call this league NAMBLA…
    …A group of men that wanna see this lil boy get abused
    ^this was coo..but saying 'league' in the first and second line kinda took away from it a little

    Quit the ruse, Bitch, I have proof that you bend fo’ dick
    Cuz all your last title reigned showed is you give it up to Men-so quick
    ^nicee

    I’ll send this simple faggot to die like your gottdamn leader
    You don’t struggle to write a simple diss…
    …but your simplicity has kept you a bottom feeder
    ^nice flow..concept was pretty simple though

    I bought a liter for your milestone this cursed week
    It’s a big deal to reach 2-1, so Sunday I’ma buy him his first drink
    haa..diggin this

    You’re an atheist? I was too until I found some prayers
    After getting your mom pregnant with you…
    …I took up praying, I prayed that she’d fall down the stairs
    ^was aite...had a lol factor to it..but not great though

    Even though you’re being slaughtered like cattle, smile
    Cuz truth is, I like you…
    …None of this is anything personal, you know, like your battle style
    ^ha good personal

    overall this was a pretty good match..each had their ups and downs and strong points..but I think I was diggin more stuff from T,a,C here. He just had a few that stood out more in this battle. Ima say

    v-Tacky
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  7. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    yea, i don't want to do a full break down, but it's pretty much what gramur said

    mrj
    you had a pretty good all around piece, but nothing was really really stand out in it, definitely not even close to bad, but it just lacked the wow factor, maybe if the flow and rhyming was amped up a bit, with the same punch concepts, it would've changed the outcome

    tac
    you had some really precise, on point punches, back by some nice lyricism, the inner rhymes make a lot...bottom feeder, bought a liter...…A group of men that wanna see this lil boy get abused
    Quit the ruse, Bitch, I have proof that you bend fo’ dick
    Cuz all your last title reigned showed is you give it up to Men-so quick
    it makes the flow segue so much smoother and read like, well, like it is actually readable
    you're "..." "..." stretch bar lines worked good, the pregnant one was almost too long though, but i liked it


    overall vote goes to TAC
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  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    T.a.C wins 2-0
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