[Week 10] [Champ] C. ShadowWarriorfs(6-3) vs 2. TheInkwell(1-0)

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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008


    VERSUS DUE: Every Friday @ 11:59 PM PST
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    •Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics or pictures
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    T.a.C- thedude8125
    ShadowWarriorfs- ShadowWarriorfs
  2. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

    May 6, 2011
  3. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004
  4. TheInkwell

    TheInkwell New Member

    May 6, 2011
    Posting this via. My phone while driving to tahoe for the weekend. So sorry for any formatting errors.

    “A forever sunset, orange, for the rest of our lives”
    The newspaper headlines read, ‘cause Father Time died
    No more hours to waste, the end of age and daylight
    World’s a stage fright-and the hourglass’ on it’s side

    Yet the sandstorm in the glass rages and the hands still tick
    Sun is clearly done setting, Cuckoo birds assume shifts…


    The greatest lie, Father Fraud’s the alliteration
    Of the generation, pitchforks and social media defamation
    Mother Time committed suicide with the daggers of allegations
    The couple poorly estimated what the staggering consequence is
    Pity the pastor who presided over the service amongst hatred
    Trying to honor a life of malice, though it’s one that he broke bread with
    The coffin - lay open with the truth, though - it lay frozen
    Spit on by his victims, coffin became an aqueduct - housing an ocean
    So now time ebbs or rather, Time ebbed – we mean the person
    Used time as a prison to imprison the world in his rhythm
    Dumbledore looking man profited off his name brand
    You can’t sell time, but you can sell endorsement plans
    Dirt is shoveled with malice, a courtesy grudgingly given
    And if Hell is a palace, they wished him whippings in the dungeon
    They buried Father Time and now they’ve got nothing but time
    Their fury subsided as the moon shined, people went back to their lives

    Topic: Father Time dies
  5. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

    Apr 11, 2004

    Always Cold To Me

    People say that she controls the waves of the sun
    Like cracks of a whip, we react like slaves to god’s son
    Her eyes carried a blaze like the furnace of Hell
    To guide our ways while being earnest as well
    I could tell that the populace envied her majesty
    Flocking like sheep to avoid their sinful travesty
    Perhaps it was their instinct that they would follow
    Inhaling the foods that their throats couldn’t swallow
    Mindless drones being controlled like dogs in heat
    They reach for her hoping to ease the fogs of sleep
    They begged her, “Please remove the chill in the air that we see”
    They sounded pathetic, desperate in their quests for clarity
    Showering her with compliments and affectionate gifts
    Just so she would smile at them, proclaiming it uplifts-
    Them and gives them the strength to fight on
    “Idiots” I whispered, watching without the lights on
    While she responded in song causing them to sway
    Her voice was perfect even I could not turn away

    They all felt her warmth but she was always cold to me
    Her blue eyes felt like icicles drifting in the artic sea
    The people said “If you give yourself to her, your heart would melt”
    But I was skeptical; I didn’t feel the warmth that they felt
    Perhaps I was naïve I thought as the winter swept in
    I continued watching them as the snow crept in
    My window began to freeze, forming ice on the glass
    Suddenly her image was different unlike it did in the past
    Her skin was now pale and her eyes burned with fire
    Her hair was scorched and she was dressed in the devil’s attire
    I opened the window and she looked as she did before
    I looked through an ice cube and saw a demon once more
    “They were all fools,” I whispered as I began to smile
    She intended to lead them to Hell, one by one, single file

  6. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

    Oct 8, 2008
    This is excellent work by both authors! I want to vote on this, but it's going to be really hard. Both of yall went all the way in on this one. Can I vote a tie?
  7. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

    Nov 24, 2004
    Dope shit from both! I really think Shad took this with his imagery. You can paint vividly

    That whole second stanza/verse was outstanding. I thought you were both equal until that portion. Have to give it to Shad on that. The flow was smooth and verse was very good.

    I liked this from Ink

    Dope! You also have a good flow, imagery is good, too. I'd love to see you two work some narratives, your imagery would be amazing in that context.

    vote - Shad
  8. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

    Feb 25, 2008
    Shadow wins
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