"We Murderaz" - WhiteOut, Ether, DZK, Fury, Spice 1

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  1. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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  2. KnightMere

    KnightMere KnightMere

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    whooooooo first post...

    yo..the rapper that opened up the track..his flooow is siiiick....

    hook: shits on some other shit..but its fits for the song..

    2nd MC has a coo flow..decent lyrics not bad..


    DZ ur verse is dope..."i know out suckas with armored brass knuckles" haha....shit dope as usual..


    fury ur verse is tight man..nice flow..shits real descriptive nice verse..homie


    Last MC...haha nice verse man...sounds like all had fun with makin' this track...

    all together nice track..yall
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  3. JacThaRippa

    JacThaRippa New Member

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    white out's verse is nice... flow's on point.

    DZ, your hook's good, but the voice you used for it, kinda' got urked me.

    ether's flow is real dope.

    DZ, your verse is sick... as usual.

    fury's verse is nice, he sounds like k-nice kinda'. don't know why, but he does, at least to me.

    spice's verse has a real nice flow, but the lyrics aren't on par with the other guys. but as eddie izzard said in dressed 2 kill, it's the presentation... 70% presentation, 20% voice, 10% of what you actually say. haha.

    sick track overall.
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  4. DemonKllz

    DemonKllz ~DeMoN~

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    really liking this track..pretty fuckin' dope

    WhiteOut's verse was fuckin' ill...
    Ether...lyrics weren't as raw...flow was nice though.
    DZK ( verse ) - fresh as always...
    DZK (hook) - Didn't like the voice at first..but it seem to fit nice.
    Fury's verse - like the style...lyrics and flow were great.
    Spice 's verse - felt this one the least...but liked it...kinda reminds of Tech Nyne a bit though...
    Overall - Great Song.
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  5. ironkladdent

    ironkladdent I.K.E. B!TCH!!!

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    THE BEAT IS PSYCHO.

    THE EMCEE THAT SET IT OFF KILLED IT WITH HIS FLOW. NOT FEELIN THE HOOK THO. SECOND CAT WAS AIIGHT. DIDNT SOUND AS COMFORTABLE ON THE MIC AS THE FIRST EMCEE. 3RD EMCEE IS NICE. LIKE HIS VOICE AND CADENCE. 4TH EMCEE IS COOL. EMCEE #5 IS KOOL TOO. ONLY REAL COMPLAINT IS THE HOOK.


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1028341
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  6. K-Great

    K-Great Katastrofik Is KING

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    Yo The Beat Is Tight Man

    WhiteOut - His Verse is Pretty Crazy Yo, Sounds Real Grimey, Haha. Flow Is off the Chain

    Ether - His Style Is A Little Different, Sounds Like Bizarre to me a bit lol. he's nice Though

    DZK - You Sound The Clearest to Me.. I Like The Change Ups in ya Flow, And the Vocab In the beginning was Tight too.. Thats You On The Hook?

    Fury - He Sounds Aiight in the beginning, But When you Keep Listening, He Ripps It, Haha. Wheres He From?

    Spice 1 - Sounds Like Him And Fury Did Tracks Together b4. He Ended It Off Pretty Nice, Could Have Been A Lil More Interesting In The End..

    Overrall This is A Tight Track.. Nice Drop

    Reply to My track:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1028614
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  7. TwiztidHarmony

    TwiztidHarmony New Member

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    dammmnn thats hott
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  8. Enginear1

    Enginear1 Im Back

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    Agagahahahhahahaahahahahahahahah At The Hook
    Hahahah Wowowwww Ahahahhahhahahah

    Ahahaha Omfggggg
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  9. Enginear1

    Enginear1 Im Back

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    OMFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

    did u use one of those neck vibrators like the dude in southpark ?????
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  10. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    hahahahah
    nah, actually I just layered my voice
    I didn't use any FX on that shit
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  11. -Marxist-

    -Marxist- wtf r u thinking

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    Yo Is That The West Coast's 'Spice 1'? Same Kat Who Was On A Bunch Of Mainstream Joints In The 90's?
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  12. TWO M.C.S

    TWO M.C.S New Member

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    marxist - where ua t homie? spice still droppin em in the streets, he's got a record from 06



    big ups DZK - i been a spice fan since 92 - this is great

    keep it slappin
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  13. JRite

    JRite !3th @p0$TLe

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    ok.... beat is ok... decent

    WHITEOUT - damn, i thought it was Lloyd Banks... lol... flow is killin' ..nice
    rhyme scheme is dope...

    not feelin' the chorus... it's annoying as fuck... lol

    ETHER - ya swagger is decent... decent style... not really meshing with this type of beat though... decent verse though homey

    yuck @ the chorus

    DZK - lmao.. u sound the same on every track.. not a bad thing though, sometimes.. flow is coo'... decent verse here too dawg

    sh!t, this a long ass track.. lol

    FURY - don't like how u came in... now u kind'a comin' out a little... gettin' better... u almost don't sound like a rapper... lol, it's all good though... twistin' sounds decent... good verse...

    SPICE - comin' in ok... you're kindof like ETHER... voice and style doesn't really mesh with this beat... flow is coo' though...



    this was a solid collab

    now, ya'll go peep my sh!t... lol
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  14. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    yeah

    dude who worked with Tupac a bunch
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  15. Stash

    Stash R.I.P Point Game

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    the hook vocals are ugly as fuck, wtf is up with the voice singing on it


    first dude is fuckin amazing, 2nd dude is nice but didn't fit well, he had some dope flow moments, DZK u came nice, u coulda dropped alot better, fury is nice but is tryin too much to do some cliche flow shit, as for Spice1, nice start on his verse, some adlibs are fuckin annoyin as fuck, wtf is up with that eeeeeeeeeeee, all in all his verse is dope though, professional shit, but his adlibs is annoying

    most annoying shit is the hook vocals...

    nice song though

    7/10
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  16. 3rd Inf Soldier

    3rd Inf Soldier Bellwingah, hey! Hey!

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    Not Feelin The Hook On This At All..


    Loving Spice's Verse, I Have Pretty Much Every Album He Dropped...




    Beat Is Eh
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  17. MC_Masta_T

    MC_Masta_T Juxtaposition is a faggot

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    i'm feelin this beat

    First Verse:: flow is NICE on this...vocab is well placed...quality good

    Hook:: DZK hit the tone of the song perfect

    Second Verse:: need to put a bit of a swagger in the beginning...flow picked back up towards the end

    Third Verse:: THERE ya go DZ..now your rappin like when i first listened to you..nice switch up from "Now Now" ...nice work

    Fourth Verse:: not bad...fast flow didn't seem to work for you it sounded like...vocal quality is just slightly less than the other verses but you'd only pick that up if you were really scrutinizing the track

    fifth verse:: flow kinda fumbled just a little bit in the middle of the verse...quality is good

    Overall:: not bad..its nice to see a switchup in DZ's track lineup and this is the track to do it...all artists did theyre thing..sounds good...9/10
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  18. m1c_nificent

    m1c_nificent New Member

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    this is what i wanna know.
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  19. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    this track is cool but nothing I would bump, "murderaz" that's a corny hook/ song name

    good shit though

    ps you voice goes good with the guitars in that video
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  20. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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    your hook ruined this fucking track... wow are you serious? first emcee was dope and thats it...
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