Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Non$en$e, Dec 18, 2005.
ight I'm hitting y'all links now!!
ight getting the last link
definitely a song I can feel, cuz I been in suttin close to this situation.....interesting beat choice for this type of concept, but I'm feelin it....flow and delivery is solid in most parts, only a few section that could use some work. nice drop
this is tight- i like the beat- your flow on it is good- good ass confident delivery too- i like the concept of this track- topic stuck on point too- she gotta feel the pain that im feeling no doubt- damn this story got mad intresting- im loving the creativity-!!wow deep shit-
i love the hook- nice shit boo- peep my siggy post it there - they would love it- and you win $ for chart position- peace
Whooa at the opening bar.
I can see what I'm getting myself into by clicking play. Voice threw me off for a minute, but im back on track now. Delivery is nice as hell man. You really made lines stand out. Whooa @ this chorus, really catchy with a message - effective. Flow is hott, but you know that. Second verse lyrics are nearly amazing. I don't see shit wrong with this.
The beat was cool, it had the rock it signature sound.
Ooh this pretty nice...The Lyrics are crazy nice, and the flow is on point. The chorus is arranged nicely. Quality is ok. Nice Song.
good looks I'm about to hit those links
whts nonsense i been peepin ur shit for a min ..ur music is tight as hell...i havent been on RM for a min so that y i havent replied to ealier links.. im feelin this alot...the openling lines are ill..emotion is ill..you ride the beat nice...beat is sick...overall this is a nice track man concept is sick... keep it up dawg
leave some feed back on my music if you get a chance:
Listening.. Love those types of beats, major props for that one.
Quality - could be a little better.. try a little highend boosting (high boost)
flow - ON POINT
hook - ON POINT
lyrics and content - you stayed consistent and it came together really nice, nice emotion
dope song overall
hit up the link
i like ya voice, this beat ight im feelin it, ya voice tho.. reminds me of someone, did you used to have the name woo child, or somethin like that?? yaa u gotta be homie i got this 1 older track like 2 years back by someone, i used to bump that shit sounds like its you. unless he was pushin your shit or whatever u kno, cause the way you say "live" is what caught me. the song was called "live nikka shit"
anyways your flow on this is tight, delivery is nice your voice is powerful cause it stands out, lyrically you holdin it down i like this concept, story and shit is hot 3rd verse im feelin how u end it thats sick, stay up homie you doin the thing, hit me back i got you friended on myspace www.myspace.com/jayo holla sometime there to
Ight I hit all links
listening again, beats nice, flows on point and delivery, lyrics are tight, feeling the chorus too, dope track..
no doubt good looks
feelin this shit nice emotion shows well beat sick as always from rock it love the story tellin good topic sounds like the typical bitch lol na overall hell of a track very nice drop hit me back
pay back homie
thats the dumb funny but it needs 2 feed lol i also got more tracks floatin around thats more serious pz keep em bangin
good looks checking you now
Your voice is very similiar to Big L's....
Anyway...like the beat choice...reminds be of some 96 mobb deep vibe.......
Lyrically nice..topic stayed on point...emotion very good....
flow and delivery very ill...
another solid one from you..
peep if you would
good looks, checking you now..
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