We Could Have Been (Drop Links I'll reply to all of them)

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  1. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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  2. Funboy

    Funboy lol whore

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  3. Sub 0

    Sub 0 Well-Known Member

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    I listened to your song.
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  4. BestMove

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    ight beat intro is soundin ill... you start it off dope wit the lyrics and flow... "made to be rejected" spittin nothin but real shit right now dope first verse

    hook is aight, i dunno its like missing something, but its cool

    2nd verse... theres not much i can say bro, you kno ur ill, powerful lyrics, delivery is hot,

    hook again..

    i was feelin how the hook went into the 3rd verse - the beat drop... dope ass story bro, overall this was a hot track

    hit me back: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=952732
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  5. Stranger

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  6. A R R O W

    A R R O W Emcees Propaganda

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    yo whud up non$ense whats good man. i got you

    yo yeah i did a lil verse to this track/beat.. dope shit.. aight lyrics is cool, feeling this man, lyrics and energy is on some real shit... loving the concept..haha word real shit... like the hook man...liek your delivery start off kinda slow and staedy then get really hype as the verses progress.. im feeling that man.. yo this id dope...liekt he concept, wish yuh quality was a bit nicer. but this is a great track

    Get at me man
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=952436

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  7. C-Money

    C-Money New Member

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    I Listened To This Yesterday

    Nice Beat....Nice Flow,Lyrics,Delivery....Beautiful Concept

    But Quality Ain't Too Good...Still Aight Tho
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  8. Emation

    Emation SPREAD THE iLLNESS

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    listening: I like the beat, you can tell it's a Rock It productions though haha. Quality is ehh, it could be better but unfortunately that costs money in today's world. Lyrics is SICK though, flow is perfect. Chorus is real hot, i like the echo effect on it, it comes of real strong and puts the point across the board. Is this a song to your ex? Nevertheless, I like it a lot, keep grindin and doin your thing!

    Please hit my link in my sig and drop some feedback - thanks.
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  9. ThEsPiTTiNiMaGe

    ThEsPiTTiNiMaGe StillBumpinOldSchoolGRBs

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    *listening* i liked the first song by the way alot...

    the opening bars are deep as fuck, i actually repeated em twice..your flows pretty solid, and ya deliverys nice as fuck too... proffesional sounding..
    i wish the vocals were a little louder actually... the mixing isn't the best..
    the chorus is basic, and does the trick.. nice job on that shit..

    "Day 1, we inseperatable" "now its only I" that verse was dope.. this shits gettin deep and emotioanl, my type of shit... good shit... from the second verse on, the song gets ill as shit..

    chorus grows on me alot..

    i felt this track alot overall.. please return good feeds..

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=13089869#post13089869
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  10. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    thanks y'all I'm hitting links now
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  11. b0rders

    b0rders EBO KNOWS

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    this neat is hott... feelin the intro ... the flow delivry is coo .. i can feel a hungrer in the flow dogg .. the chorus is alright .. sounds maybe a lil too loud campared to the verses... but everything else is pretty good ...
    much respect
    keep growin
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  12. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    good looks, I'mma re-record this in the studio as soon as I get the tracked out beat
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  13. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    i like ya rap voice...rite from the jump it caught me yo...n ya delivery...flow is nice...flashy lyrics...i'm usually not into those kinda songs but i'm noddin to this..quality aint bad really..i can hear u...i mean i can see what they sayin on how it can b improved but this works pretty good as is...lol...head is still noddin....i was feelin u on this tho...track was nice n the beat was 2...

    overall this was good n sence u gonna do it ina studio its gonna only b better....props yo

    return the feedback here....
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  14. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    word I'mma get ya link now
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  15. Magog

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    shit was hot nigga but as stated befo'..quality coulda been better..shiiit i got some deep thoughts i could drop to a beat like this too...keep ya head up bwoy..u gettin signed
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  16. midwestTHUG

    midwestTHUG New Member

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    raw ass beat

    delivery iz hott

    trigga kills or i cry feelin that

    lyrically killin
    damn...i can relate to this totally me and my lady jus broke up

    lol snappin

    but you had to FUCC UP lol
    hook iz killin it HOTT AS HELL

    rest of tha tracc iz off tha hook

    good shit jo on tha real
    -one-

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=954153
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  17. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    uppin this
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  18. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

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    whats good homie? I'm not gonna break it down and critique ya - we both know I've now heard enough Non$ense to know you're polished - beats dope - flow is fire throughout, lyrically you on some real RAW shit here which is dope - gotta love it gutta - track is ill homie - absolutely no complaints from me

    holla back

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=953132
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  19. Sick-Scripts

    Sick-Scripts Stylish Irish = McFly

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    beat is fuckin insane...build up is nice

    flow is coo...lyrics are on some Eminem "I'mma kill my mufuckin baby momma tonight if she looks at me wrong" type of shit

    hook is aight...i think the problem is, is that this song dosent really fit this beat to me...this beat is screaming heavy street shit to me, but i guess you tryin to flip it

    whole shit is bananas...you pulled it off man...great emotion, nice lyrics, good track overall

    PLEASE hit my track up man...return the love

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=953830
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  20. BZTactics

    BZTactics Up and Coming

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    Beat sounds dope, dope presence and flow so far. Hook is tight, sounds like it could used some extra layer and got panned to make it stand out more. So far I'm feelin this, can relate. "It's on my brain everyday yo I'm goin insane" Crazy ass ending bro, nice drop, one of the more talented cats I've peeped off this site.

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