WDYS RD 2 Jack Lantern vs Giftshop vs Bonnie

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to Round 2 of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

    VERSES are due Thursday, July 5th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!! 150 post limit...

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    clever clever mutha fucka.

    in... still 16.
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  3. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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  4. M-O-A Thug

    M-O-A Thug New Member

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  5. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    Jack carved my name into his arm with a razorblaze
    and took me on a date then put roofies in my Gatorade
    But I haterated and KABLOOEY! I smashed that pumpkinhead
    All over schooley high… (hes 22 but he still in special ed) =[
    Hes poopie pie! I hope he dies! With his creepy googley eyes
    Jack you win the dookie prize rappin with them goofy lines
    PHOOEY! You losing cuz YOU STINK like booze and B.O.
    And look like D-Bo on chemo after slammin half a kilo yoooo
    Bitch shop stop tryin to sell me a weave in a gift box
    Please… Kool Aid and Mac N cheese is ghetto man, not hip hop
    Caught you in lip lock with Jack, what a clit block!
    Its sad how you only catchin birds when you get flipped off =[
    If this was poker, itd be split pot cuz we both ridin Kings to get off
    You wearin lip gloss with ya ass in mo crotch than Kris Kross
    I’ll kick deez kids off my screen quicker than a Raven series
    Cuz clappin hands with Peter Pan couldn’t save these fairies

    ahaha =]
    <3
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  6. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    Bonnie's my best friend, we share secrets often
    so BB's not just her initials... its also the size she buys bra's in
    she's like the movie 'Descent', i should mention it
    they both have holes that contain creatures that'll KILL you if you enter it
    ha, just playin ma, i'm lucky. and the reason? just look, b
    yeah. above me aNd below me, all i see is some pussy
    f'real. i don't even think this shits right
    i SHOULDN'T be battling. i should be sittin back wachin these CHICKS fight
    wtf hiphopgiftshop sounds like a gay club
    shit. you probly can find MCemen imprInted on his tastebuds
    A.T. set you up. yup, he's playin Jigsaw, duke
    and i'm the trap, to make sure your win column never Saw II
    ur awful... r u dangrous? never. n that shit is plain as ever
    i'll main this feller have em tongue kissin a paper shredder
    He Has Gay Sex. thats what HHGS means, fag
    *OO* <----those are my hairy ass nuts...
    and whoever posts next is gettin teabagged
    HA!
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  7. M-O-A Thug

    M-O-A Thug New Member

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    What's the dealy par?, I'm bout to spit it silly hard/
    Make your "millibars", turn into, a plastic titty bar//
    this'll really scar, Here to take you out to the Sahara Desert/
    You can't "Hang with Me" not even if you was ridin' on some Jet Propellers'//
    Jet propel-ya, windward, Leeward equal a dry desert constricting/
    I'm sippin underground water, you sippin 50 cent's, "Formala 50"//
    I'm a tailor, after I freeze, ya style at 0 degreez/
    liquid anti-freeze, Gift is on that "Sub Zero" steez//
    watch me Take you back to the "Ice Age", but I'm not talkin' 'Mike Jones'/
    Ya'll just a bunch of mic clones in the Inter Tropical Convergence Zone//
    Gettin' Owned, spitting rhyme's that's, "Yawn"-felt/
    The only title you gettin' Bonny is "Soy Beans", Jack-o-Latern, the "Corn Belt"//
    I make the boards-melt, but in the wild with Giraffes, Zebras and Antelope/
    You would'nt be 'on my level' if ya "freestyled" on a catapult//
    Laugh at your results, your insults, I insult with thin chalk/
    Bring your battling career to an unprecedented extreme hault//
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  8. M-O-A Thug

    M-O-A Thug New Member

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    ^16 : ) I'm gonna post my links later..............
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  9. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    All over schooley high… (hes 22 but he still in special ed) =[
    Hes poopie pie! I hope he dies! With his creepy googley eyes
    Jack you win the dookie prize rappin with them goofy lines
    PHOOEY! You losing cuz YOU STINK like booze and B.O.
    And look like D-Bo on chemo after slammin half a kilo

    ^^nice
    she's like the movie 'Descent', i should mention it
    they both have holes that contain creatures that'll KILL you if you enter it
    ha, just playin ma, i'm lucky. and the reason? just look, b
    yeah. above me aNd below me, all i see is some pussy
    f'real. i don't even think this shits right
    i SHOULDN'T be battling. i should be sittin back wachin these CHICKS fight
    wtf hiphopgiftshop sounds like a gay club
    shit. you probly can find MCemen imprInted on his tastebuds
    A.T. set you up. yup, he's playin Jigsaw, duke
    and i'm the trap, to make sure your win column never Saw II
    ur awful... r u dangrous? never. n that shit is plain as ever
    i'll main this feller have em tongue kissin a paper shredder
    He Has Gay Sex. thats what HHGS means, fag
    *OO* <----those are my hairy ass nuts...
    and whoever posts next is gettin teabagged


    ^^^ didnt like ya opener... but tha rest was hot



    Gettin' Owned, spitting rhyme's that's, "Yawn"-felt/
    The only title you gettin' Bonny is "Soy Beans", Jack-o-Latern, the "Corn Belt"//


    ^^ nice



    Vote jack... but if bonnie want yall dqed... she gets tha win
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  10. merkage

    merkage New Member

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    bonnie : your verse was really cool in my eyes,made me laugh at times.You also stayed consistent in dissing both of you're opponents and u went equally as hard on them

    jack : Your verse was nice overall, i know you could of came a bit harder on bonnie even though you're cool with her...it felt as though u were dissing hhgs 50% of the time...and dissed them both 20% of the time...and dissed bonnie the rest of the time....still a nice verse though.

    gift shop :I wish you used the same strategy as both....u failed to be consistent in dissing you're opponents...most of your lines were generic and i saw u mention jack and bones name twice at most....in my eyes you could of came harder

    so my vote goes to bonnie for being more consistent....

    no8,just my opinion
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  11. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    good battle lol
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  12. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    But I haterated and KABLOOEY! I smashed that pumpkinhead
    All over schooley high… (hes 22 but he still in special ed) =[
    Caught you in lip lock with Jack, what a clit block!
    Its sad how you only catchin birds when you get flipped off =[
    If this was poker, itd be split pot cuz we both ridin Kings to get off
    You wearin lip gloss with ya ass in mo crotch than Kris Kross

    alot of the bars were personals that I couldn't relate to, verse was dope as hell none the less

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    onnie's my best friend, we share secrets often
    so BB's not just her initials... its also the size she buys bra's in
    she's like the movie 'Descent', i should mention it
    they both have holes that contain creatures that'll KILL you if you enter it
    ha, just playin ma, i'm lucky. and the reason? just look, b
    yeah. above me aNd below me, all i see is some pussy
    f'real. i don't even think this shits right
    i SHOULDN'T be battling. i should be sittin back wachin these CHICKS fight
    ur awful... r u dangrous? never. n that shit is plain as ever
    i'll main this feller have em tongue kissin a paper shredder
    He Has Gay Sex. thats what HHGS means, fag
    *OO* <----those are my hairy ass nuts...
    and whoever posts next is gettin teabagged

    this shit was hilarious, basically I got the most enjoyment out of this verse, it was all pretty straight forward

    vs

    I make the boards-melt, but in the wild with Giraffes, Zebras and Antelope/
    You would'nt be 'on my level' if ya "freestyled" on a catapult//

    dude has potential but couldn't hang with Jack and Bonnie who obviously have more experience, good effort though

    I hate to vote for someone in my crew, makes me feel corny inside, but he definately won in my eyes, maybe if it was a pic battle bonnie's verse would be the best but again, I couldn't relate to her punches knockin on Jack's apppearance so I gotta

    vote- Jack
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  13. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    you don't have to count it but that's my unbiased opinion and I had to vote on 3 battles
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  14. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    I vote gift shop because he had the best structure and from what i've seen structure wins overs disses. Bonnie's verse was consistent and made me laugh and Jack didn't even bring his A game so my vote is Gift Shop.

    vote= HipHopGiftShop
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  15. Londo

    Londo Fuck You

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    ^^^WacK vote....


    Anyway....

    I think that it definately comes down to Jack and Bonnie....HHGS or whatever....ya' verse was pretty good but didn't stay consistent as your opponents....

    Bonnie - Nice to see you in round two ) lol... Nice verse...I see that you took it easy On jack and really saved the harder hitting shit for the other dude....Although some of the lines aimed at Jack were prettt good as well....the clit block thing was prettt funny and really most of ya verse was pretty damn funny.....Another good drop...

    Jack - Shit was pretty good fam....Original punches...all around a good verse...Felt you did the same thing as Bonnie with the taking it easy shit lol...you two.....anyway...I really felt you got at the other dude harder than Bonnie did so that is why my vote will be for you....I think that your lines were funnier and just harder hitting than Bonnie's.Both were good verses tho....

    Vote - Jack...

    Nice battle..
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  16. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    whack vote.... now u kno how i felt last round londo....so shit I jus vote the way I see it gettin voted........
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  17. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    jack advances
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