WDYS RD 2 2shay vs Merkage

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to Round 2 of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

    VERSES are due Thursday, July 5th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!! 150 post limit...

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    Nice draw this one...
    Checkin' in
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  3. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    I'll Keep My Reputation For Postin' First N Choke This Perv,
    I Merc The Merk Without A Spoken Word...
    Check Out My Reflection n See The White Devil,
    Wit Merkage Moms Down At Japs Eye Level,
    He Aint An Emcee He's A Fuckin' Coke Head,
    He Heard 'Shay Was Givin Free Lines In A Dope Thread,
    How the Fuck You Gonna Beat Me?...Ya Whole Lines Is Filler,
    This Round Ya Fuckin' Wit A Whole New Cereal Killer,
    Im Clearly The Winner With Ease I Eat Emcee's,
    Ill Peel Off Ya Skin Call It Cannibal Strip Tease,
    Please...You See How Easily I RIP You, (That Rips Got Bout 4 Meanings LOL!)
    Out Of Five million Sperm How The Fuckd You Get Through?
    Not Even Takin' It Serious, I Leave You Delerious Still,
    I'll Burn Your Eyes Into Your Skull N Leave You Blinded By My Skill...
    Better Yet I Could Tear 'Em Out, Cut 'Em Up n Share Em Out,
    Then How The Fuck! You Gonna Come Up Here n Stare Me Out?
    But Then Agen At Least You Can Still Clearly Shout,
    Till I Use A Steel Plectrum On Ya Chords N Carve Em Out...
    See Even When I Use The Same Word 3 Out Of 4 Bars,
    It Still Has The Same Effect Removing Three or Four Parts...
    Fuckin' You Up But I Know Nothing About You,
    All I Know Is You Aint Makin' It Beyond Round 2,
    Disecting Emcee's Should Be Made 'Shays Brand,
    When I Remove Merk's Legs...Where Do You Stand?​




    gott be one of the worst verses ive ever dropped on RM for fucks sake...
    been goin thru alot of shit lately but no excuse.
    there it is....
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  4. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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  5. merkage

    merkage New Member

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    yeah okay.....

    blahh....listen

    ur unemployed,broke and ur writting's trash...i hope ur kidding me?
    well look on the bright side,atleast you still own your virginity
    ur whole crew's innactive,how the fuck they running the game?
    ur the only one left...pfftt,guess they all ran from the game
    up till now you only battled 'nobodies',cuz u really suck
    (i.e. your last opponent was 'incognito')hope that proves enough
    this dude aint tough,called himself shay cuz hes clearly gay
    i put a crack to this fag's funny bone while rockin a serious face
    but dont take my words outta place,cuz i like where u reside n live in
    ill even take ur spine,and bent it like beckham as an homage to england
    knowing you were going to face my rhymes,u coulda no shown...u retarded?
    i mean c'mon...i.aint never such a waste of lines,
    since ur rehabilitated mom threw coke in the garbage
    plus ur flow is just harmless,i coulda predicted ur words
    ''fillers,played concepts,weak multies''...sorry if i quoted ur previous verse
    ridiculous nerd,ur crew members are off doing better things
    they all left,how the fuck are still the weakest link?
    u reppin a crew that doesnt battle on the net,so let me think...
    yeah,forget princess diana's death,ur englands true damsell in distress
    point and blank.................
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  6. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    uppin'
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  7. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    plus ur flow is just harmless,i coulda predicted ur words
    ''fillers,played concepts,weak multies''...sorry if i quoted ur previous verse
    ridiculous nerd,ur crew members are off doing better things
    they all left,how the fuck are still the weakest link?

    ^^6 that right there won it for me my g


    Shay you came aight you had some good lines bout nuttin that really stood out to me

    good battle fellas ... vote merk
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  8. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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  9. N. Cognito

    N. Cognito As Himself

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    2shay ya might wanna read the link to the rules, #9..ima still give my full breakdown





    2shay your verse was strong, and you had some creative lines in there [R.I.P. you four times, and tha steel lines..]my favorite was tha cannibal strip tease..
    merkage u spelled my name wrong,but i wont hold that against u...your verse had punches like ive seen before...your flow wasnt as strong as shay's tho..
    my vote--> merkage..
    his verse was stronger
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  10. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    while I'd love to give merk the battle for coming more personal and hitting harder I just can't seem to do it. You see, 2shay's structure was so much better and therefore structure is everything in this tourney so I'm going to give shay my vote.

    Vote= Shay
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  11. merkage

    merkage New Member

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    lol@n.cognito

    it was nothing personal,i just flipped ur name cuz the opportunity came.

    And im not saying you are nobody,i was only saying your name in the litteral form means ''unknown/nobody''...and thats why i also spelled your name in the litteral form

    its really nothing personal
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  12. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    Im Clearly The Winner With Ease I Eat Emcee's,
    Ill Peel Off Ya Skin Call It Cannibal Strip Tease,
    Please...You See How Easily I RIP You, (That Rips Got Bout 4 Meanings LOL!)
    Out Of Five million Sperm How The Fuckd You Get Through?
    Not Even Takin' It Serious, I Leave You Delerious Still,
    I'll Burn Your Eyes Into Your Skull N Leave You Blinded By My Skill..

    vs

    ur unemployed,broke and ur writting's trash...i hope ur kidding me?
    well look on the bright side,atleast you still own your virginity
    (could've been worded better)
    up till now you only battled 'nobodies',cuz u really suck
    (i.e. your last opponent was 'incognito')hope that proves enough
    this dude aint tough,called himself shay cuz hes clearly gay
    i put a crack to this fag's funny bone while rockin a serious face

    tough decision

    this could go either way, I was feelin the punches equally but at the end of the day 2shays flow was slightly better

    vote- 2shay
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  13. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    considering i aint unemployed or broke kinda kills his opener Lolz.
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  14. Bonnie Bathory

    Bonnie Bathory New Member

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    ^ dont knock his verse on the thread =\
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  15. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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  16. merkage

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  17. Halloween Jack

    Halloween Jack Heavens Demon

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    He Aint An Emcee He's A Fuckin' Coke Head,
    He Heard 'Shay Was Givin Free Lines In A Dope Thread,
    Im Clearly The Winner With Ease I Eat Emcee's,
    Ill Peel Off Ya Skin Call It Cannibal Strip Tease,
    Please...You See How Easily I RIP You, (That Rips Got Bout 4 Meanings LOL!)
    Out Of Five million Sperm How The Fuckd You Get Through?
    See Even When I Use The Same Word 3 Out Of 4 Bars,
    It Still Has The Same Effect Removing Three or Four Parts...
    Disecting Emcee's Should Be Made 'Shays Brand,
    When I Remove Merk's Legs...Where Do You Stand?

    vs.

    ur unemployed,broke and ur writting's trash...i hope ur kidding me?
    well look on the bright side,atleast you still own your virginity
    up till now you only battled 'nobodies',cuz u really suck
    (i.e. your last opponent was 'incognito')hope that proves enough
    this dude aint tough,called himself shay cuz hes clearly gay
    i put a crack to this fag's funny bone while rockin a serious face
    plus ur flow is just harmless,i coulda predicted ur words
    ''fillers,played concepts,weak multies''...sorry if i quoted ur previous verse

    damn this was a good battle.
    it was hard to pick a clear winner but after readin through the verses a second time i think shay edged it out a little. merk had some hard hitters but overall i think shays verse was a little more consistant.so i've got shay by like a fuckin half a hair.

    vote shay.



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  18. Londo

    Londo Fuck You

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    Nice battle fellas...

    Was feelin' Shay's verse a little bit more after readin' them like 3 times...lol
    Merks shit was nice...punches landed, flow was good and was overal a good verse but I felt Shay had a little bit more when it came to who's punches hit the hardest...Gotta give it to Shay by just a fuckin' half a hair like Jack said...

    Vote - SHay'

    Dope battle.
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  19. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    shay advances
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  20. Mike Sullivan

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    2 shay was just more consistant.

    i thought merk was more clever and had better quotables, but some of lines just didnt do it for me. and some of his fillers ruined his verse

    ur whole crew's innactive,how the fuck they running the game?
    ur the only one left...pfftt,guess they all ran from the game - this shit sucked.

    knowing you were going to face my rhymes,u coulda no shown...u retarded?
    i mean c'mon...i.aint never such a waste of lines,
    since ur rehabilitated mom threw coke in the garbage - ok i see where you were goin, but this was badly stretched.


    merks verse was pretty much a hit or miss to me, the lines that hit were clever as hell but the ones that missed were really awful to his verse.
    and although i thought merk had more quotable lines, 2 shay gets my vote for overall consistancy.

    vote - shay
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