WDYS final RD Mike Sullivan vs jack lantern

WELCOME to tha Final of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

VERSES are due Friday, July 20th, 2007.


- Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
- EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
- Battlers may up thread twice.
- No feeding, biting, or recycling.
- No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
- No editing after opponent puts up verse.

ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!! 150 post limit...

Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

Have a great battle.
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checkin in...

yup.

just out of respect, ima go first...


Jacks got the Crown, but Kings were meant to get Served
Judges give u a Shoutout ? no Honorable Mention this herb
i didnt wanna have to mention a word, depleting your clout
this being is foul he be using his tongue to flip penis around
just check his Name to find out what sucking semen about
before he was a 'Jack Lantern', he had Seeds in his Mouth
i guess you were meant to be gay you wreak of colon odor
when he was lil his mom put rainbow stickers on his stroller
so hurry scrap ima burry Jack in a coffin made wit his name...
shit even the Structure of my verse is the Shape of a Grave
everyday claimin ur the best mc, and number one in the top...
Halloween isnt the only day that u try to be sumthing ur not !
up in sum twat ? u lacks game, u aint baggin no Hoes, bitch
girls ask for ur Pet Peeves, Jack says "a Cat and a Goldfish"
yall wack and attrocious plus the Revolution-faries stay gay
your squad Down, can't see Rev-Up on a Nascar Race-Way
it's like u, LL cool j, big L, an L-boogie on a song together...
cause your CBR is about to have another 'L' on the Record
u got to Look the part to play the part, me in a Tux ? never
u might be Dressed to Win but Losing SUITS u much better
stop rapping and get a Job, cause none of what u write is ill
ur Resume Google based, you just never Applied the Skills
ur like a Vagina Feel...Pussy ! now am i making u Nervous ?
we all See the 'Bitch in Halloween', ur like Jamie Lee Curtis


early...

LOOK...
this tourney was the Road To Perdition for you, b
and we all know what happens to Mike Sulli at the end of this movie
that crew he reps, do they rep him? hardly...
chances of you winning are like your chances to find an f-in Godly
i get Pussy from fine Ass Bitches most certainly
stop tryna get Bold cuz i can picture 3 words that describe you perfectly
you serve the meat. c'mon, that's just gross n nauseous
you grope the sausage, n recieve more male... than a postal office
your flow is off, making it through isn't luck
for you, WDYS ain't Where Do You Stand... but rather Who Did You Suck
dude isn't tough, you a punk for starters
n gets shot in the face by dick, like one of Cheney's hunting partners
your mom has some big tits... yea i've seen 'em
her bra size is 'EE'...
but her descript has "_lephantin_" in between 'em
i'ma demon, i will tear this vermin...
& make this clown exit out of Windows™ quicker than Erick Sermon
Hallow Jack is a name you which you should NEVER seek war
cuz U only touchin H.J. cuz they're so close together on your keyboard
cheap whore with no job but pays a bi-weekly
shit. i'm LOSING more respect battling you then you'd gain if you beat me
cuz no one would've expected that you would get far
with lines that stretch almost as long as your periods between sex are
you'll never make it ANYWHERE with those poor rhymes
only way you'd get 5 mics... is if you clones yourself 4 times
howl at me...

well im fookin nackerd...
last night was crazy.

too tired to post a full breakdown...

i just felt mike came harder with his punches,
stayed consistant n flowed well.


Vote - Mike


sorry for the poor feed but im dyin LoL

very nice battle for tha champ

fav lines from mike

i didnt wanna have to mention a word, depleting your clout
this being is foul he be using his tongue to flip penis around
just check his Name to find out what sucking semen about
before he was a 'Jack Lantern', he had Seeds in his Mouth
i guess you were meant to be gay you wreak of colon odor
when he was lil his mom put rainbow stickers on his stroller
so hurry scrap ima burry Jack in a coffin made wit his name...
shit even the Structure of my verse is the Shape of a Grave
everyday claimin ur the best mc, and number one in the top...
Halloween isnt the only day that u try to be sumthing ur not !

u got to Look the part to play the part, me in a Tux ? never
u might be Dressed to Win but Losing SUITS u much better



fave lines from jack


i get Pussy from fine Ass Bitches most certainly
stop tryna get Bold cuz i can picture 3 words that describe you perfectly
you serve the meat. c'mon, that's just gross n nauseous
you grope the sausage, n recieve more male... than a postal office


dude isn't tough, you a punk for starters
n gets shot in the face by dick, like one of Cheney's hunting partners

cheap whore with no job but pays a bi-weekly
shit. i'm LOSING more respect battling you then you'd gain if you beat me



damn this was a close ass battle .. i think mic edge it out by a slight hair b/c he was a tad more consistent..to me


great battle and good read

vote mike

best battle i read since i been back, jack got better, reminds me of myself awhile back, mike wasnt bad either

but for the breakdown, the flow in mikes verse was choppy at times, but overall decent, i dont like readin verses with no punctuation cos the writer is supposed ta tell the reader when to stop, pause, or whatever, but overall the verse was steady, look like he sacrificed some better wordage jus to make the whole box effect, punches were fairly decent, some played, some ineffective and seemed more like filler, others were pretty good and hit there mark, the seeds line was okay, the shape of the grave line landed only cos i was thinkin i know this nicca did not make a box out of his verse and after that it made sense, the halloween line was dope, the L line couldve been flipped much better, and the closer was ight

jack on the other hand came out hittin from the beginning, his flow appealed to me more, much easier read straight through, some punches, again, still werent fresh, others didnt hit as hard, but overall he had better punches and better flow, plus he was way more consistent, the erick sermon line was corny as hell tho, that happened like 6 years ago and was not a big story, very far fetched, but his good lines outweighed the bad lines, and outpunched the competition, the first 2 lines were decent, bold lines was funny, post office and WDYS lines hit hard, bi-weekly line hit, and the closer was decent

with that said, vote - jack

This was nice...

First off, I'ma be frankly honest. Hallow Jack is my favorite dude on here. However, I've been following Sulley for some weeks now. These two emcees are really talented. However, we stand here, and both of you have some shit to catch for these verses.

Mike:

Besides this...

"i guess you were meant to be gay you wreak of colon odor
when he was lil his mom put rainbow stickers on his stroller"

Yo verse would've killed Jack's. Frankly, the line aboved sucked...

Jack:

When I saw the quote at the beginning of your verse, I thought this shit was a wrap. HOWEVER!!!! We would later see otherwise. I read through your verse, and it was flawless....that is until we got to this line:

"cuz U only touchin H.J. cuz they're so close together on your keyboard"

...If I may remind you my nig, and this ain't outta hate, but you definately used that in yo battle against Broady Bless (look that up). So with that being said...

V~Mike Sullivan

Yeah! Shit was an ill battle ••••••! Iwas wondering what happened with all the torneys and shit lol this shit was alot closer than I had expected it to be. Mike Sulli is nice I never even seen dude battle but hes got some flow there whodie. Jack is just ill lol. Here's what i liked from both:
i didnt wanna have to mention a word, depleting your clout
this being is foul he be using his tongue to flip penis around
so hurry scrap ima burry Jack in a coffin made wit his name...
shit even the Structure of my verse is the Shape of a Grave
it's like u, LL cool j, big L, an L-boogie on a song together...
cause your CBR is about to have another 'L' on the Record
ur like a Vagina Feel...Pussy ! now am i making u Nervous ?
we all See the 'Bitch in Halloween', ur like Jamie Lee Curtis
word.

Heres what i liked from Jack:
that crew he reps, do they rep him? hardly...
chances of you winning are like your chances to find an f-in Godly
i get Pussy from fine Ass Bitches most certainly
stop tryna get Bold cuz i can picture 3 words that describe you perfectly
you serve the meat. c'mon, that's just gross n nauseous
you grope the sausage, n recieve more male... than a postal office
your flow is off, making it through isn't luck
for you, WDYS ain't Where Do You Stand... but rather Who Did You Suck
dude isn't tough, you a punk for starters
n gets shot in the face by dick, like one of Cheney's hunting partners
your mom has some big tits... yea i've seen 'em
her bra size is 'EE'...
but her descript has "_lephantin_" in between 'em
cheap whore with no job but pays a bi-weekly
shit. i'm LOSING more respect battling you then you'd gain if you beat me
you'll never make it ANYWHERE with those poor rhymes
only way you'd get 5 mics... is if you clones yourself 4 times
lol
Iono I thought this was close but Jack came harder overall the EE shit had me laughing hard man I ain't get the shit at first. But I thought he just came with it, better punches and better enjoyment and some funny shit. And i checked that batle with broady yeah Jack flipped an old line kindof but at least he didn't bite it from someone else lol he just came harder to me.
Vote goes to Hallow.

Read both verses twice just to be fair with the votes. I saw some played out lines and some fillers to call it a wrap.

Mike Sulli -

The only thing that I didn't like about your verse was the part with the rainbow sticker and calling jack gay. I remember when these forums first became popular mad cats would call each other faggots and use rainbow references and that shit is just too played out and fucking annoying. I thought we got over that age but it seems we still stuck in the past.

I dig the rest of the verse. I thought you had some nice punches and you kept it consistent excluding the whole fag name calling.


Jack Lantern -

That keyboard line is kinda old and used and abused. Though I digged some nice punches that you put out!

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Conclusion - I like both verses and I enjoyed reading both of you. I can't seem to make mind on whom to vote for because I felt both made my day.

So I'm going to vote- a TIE



peace!