WDYS final RD Mike Sullivan vs jack lantern

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  1. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    WELCOME to tha Final of the Where Do You Stand text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules :

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory,

    VERSES are due Friday, July 20th, 2007.


    - Every verse must be at least 14-24 lines.
    - EXTENSIONS will only be granted upon request.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    ALL VOTES ARE WELCOME!!!!! 150 post limit...

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1049608

    Have a great battle.
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  2. Mike Sullivan

    Mike Sullivan New Member

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    checkin in...
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  3. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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  4. Mike Sullivan

    Mike Sullivan New Member

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    just out of respect, ima go first...


    Jacks got the Crown, but Kings were meant to get Served
    Judges give u a Shoutout ? no Honorable Mention this herb
    i didnt wanna have to mention a word, depleting your clout
    this being is foul he be using his tongue to flip penis around
    just check his Name to find out what sucking semen about
    before he was a 'Jack Lantern', he had Seeds in his Mouth
    i guess you were meant to be gay you wreak of colon odor
    when he was lil his mom put rainbow stickers on his stroller
    so hurry scrap ima burry Jack in a coffin made wit his name...
    shit even the Structure of my verse is the Shape of a Grave
    everyday claimin ur the best mc, and number one in the top...
    Halloween isnt the only day that u try to be sumthing ur not !
    up in sum twat ? u lacks game, u aint baggin no Hoes, bitch
    girls ask for ur Pet Peeves, Jack says "a Cat and a Goldfish"
    yall wack and attrocious plus the Revolution-faries stay gay
    your squad Down, can't see Rev-Up on a Nascar Race-Way
    it's like u, LL cool j, big L, an L-boogie on a song together...
    cause your CBR is about to have another 'L' on the Record
    u got to Look the part to play the part, me in a Tux ? never
    u might be Dressed to Win but Losing SUITS u much better
    stop rapping and get a Job, cause none of what u write is ill
    ur Resume Google based, you just never Applied the Skills
    ur like a Vagina Feel...Pussy ! now am i making u Nervous ?
    we all See the 'Bitch in Halloween', ur like Jamie Lee Curtis


    early...
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  5. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    LOOK...
    this tourney was the Road To Perdition for you, b
    and we all know what happens to Mike Sulli at the end of this movie
    that crew he reps, do they rep him? hardly...
    chances of you winning are like your chances to find an f-in Godly
    i get Pussy from fine Ass Bitches most certainly
    stop tryna get Bold cuz i can picture 3 words that describe you perfectly
    you serve the meat. c'mon, that's just gross n nauseous
    you grope the sausage, n recieve more male... than a postal office
    your flow is off, making it through isn't luck
    for you, WDYS ain't Where Do You Stand... but rather Who Did You Suck
    dude isn't tough, you a punk for starters
    n gets shot in the face by dick, like one of Cheney's hunting partners
    your mom has some big tits... yea i've seen 'em
    her bra size is 'EE'...
    but her descript has "_lephantin_" in between 'em
    i'ma demon, i will tear this vermin...
    & make this clown exit out of Windows™ quicker than Erick Sermon
    Hallow Jack is a name you which you should NEVER seek war
    cuz U only touchin H.J. cuz they're so close together on your keyboard
    cheap whore with no job but pays a bi-weekly
    shit. i'm LOSING more respect battling you then you'd gain if you beat me
    cuz no one would've expected that you would get far
    with lines that stretch almost as long as your periods between sex are
    you'll never make it ANYWHERE with those poor rhymes
    only way you'd get 5 mics... is if you clones yourself 4 times
    howl at me...
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  6. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    well im fookin nackerd...
    last night was crazy.

    too tired to post a full breakdown...

    i just felt mike came harder with his punches,
    stayed consistant n flowed well.


    Vote - Mike


    sorry for the poor feed but im dyin LoL
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  7. A.T Tha Don

    A.T Tha Don HKG..TNM...GAP

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    very nice battle for tha champ

    fav lines from mike

    i didnt wanna have to mention a word, depleting your clout
    this being is foul he be using his tongue to flip penis around
    just check his Name to find out what sucking semen about
    before he was a 'Jack Lantern', he had Seeds in his Mouth
    i guess you were meant to be gay you wreak of colon odor
    when he was lil his mom put rainbow stickers on his stroller
    so hurry scrap ima burry Jack in a coffin made wit his name...
    shit even the Structure of my verse is the Shape of a Grave
    everyday claimin ur the best mc, and number one in the top...
    Halloween isnt the only day that u try to be sumthing ur not !

    u got to Look the part to play the part, me in a Tux ? never
    u might be Dressed to Win but Losing SUITS u much better



    fave lines from jack


    i get Pussy from fine Ass Bitches most certainly
    stop tryna get Bold cuz i can picture 3 words that describe you perfectly
    you serve the meat. c'mon, that's just gross n nauseous
    you grope the sausage, n recieve more male... than a postal office


    dude isn't tough, you a punk for starters
    n gets shot in the face by dick, like one of Cheney's hunting partners

    cheap whore with no job but pays a bi-weekly
    shit. i'm LOSING more respect battling you then you'd gain if you beat me



    damn this was a close ass battle .. i think mic edge it out by a slight hair b/c he was a tad more consistent..to me


    great battle and good read

    vote mike
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  8. voltron

    voltron get money, fuck newbies

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    best battle i read since i been back, jack got better, reminds me of myself awhile back, mike wasnt bad either

    but for the breakdown, the flow in mikes verse was choppy at times, but overall decent, i dont like readin verses with no punctuation cos the writer is supposed ta tell the reader when to stop, pause, or whatever, but overall the verse was steady, look like he sacrificed some better wordage jus to make the whole box effect, punches were fairly decent, some played, some ineffective and seemed more like filler, others were pretty good and hit there mark, the seeds line was okay, the shape of the grave line landed only cos i was thinkin i know this nicca did not make a box out of his verse and after that it made sense, the halloween line was dope, the L line couldve been flipped much better, and the closer was ight

    jack on the other hand came out hittin from the beginning, his flow appealed to me more, much easier read straight through, some punches, again, still werent fresh, others didnt hit as hard, but overall he had better punches and better flow, plus he was way more consistent, the erick sermon line was corny as hell tho, that happened like 6 years ago and was not a big story, very far fetched, but his good lines outweighed the bad lines, and outpunched the competition, the first 2 lines were decent, bold lines was funny, post office and WDYS lines hit hard, bi-weekly line hit, and the closer was decent

    with that said, vote - jack
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  9. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    This was nice...

    First off, I'ma be frankly honest. Hallow Jack is my favorite dude on here. However, I've been following Sulley for some weeks now. These two emcees are really talented. However, we stand here, and both of you have some shit to catch for these verses.

    Mike:


    Besides this...

    "i guess you were meant to be gay you wreak of colon odor
    when he was lil his mom put rainbow stickers on his stroller"

    Yo verse would've killed Jack's. Frankly, the line aboved sucked...

    Jack:

    When I saw the quote at the beginning of your verse, I thought this shit was a wrap. HOWEVER!!!! We would later see otherwise. I read through your verse, and it was flawless....that is until we got to this line:

    "cuz U only touchin H.J. cuz they're so close together on your keyboard"

    ...If I may remind you my nig, and this ain't outta hate, but you definately used that in yo battle against Broady Bless (look that up). So with that being said...

    V~Mike Sullivan
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  10. Ric Casino

    Ric Casino high roller

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    Yeah! Shit was an ill battle ••••••! Iwas wondering what happened with all the torneys and shit lol this shit was alot closer than I had expected it to be. Mike Sulli is nice I never even seen dude battle but hes got some flow there whodie. Jack is just ill lol. Here's what i liked from both:
    i didnt wanna have to mention a word, depleting your clout
    this being is foul he be using his tongue to flip penis around
    so hurry scrap ima burry Jack in a coffin made wit his name...
    shit even the Structure of my verse is the Shape of a Grave
    it's like u, LL cool j, big L, an L-boogie on a song together...
    cause your CBR is about to have another 'L' on the Record
    ur like a Vagina Feel...Pussy ! now am i making u Nervous ?
    we all See the 'Bitch in Halloween', ur like Jamie Lee Curtis
    word.

    Heres what i liked from Jack:
    that crew he reps, do they rep him? hardly...
    chances of you winning are like your chances to find an f-in Godly
    i get Pussy from fine Ass Bitches most certainly
    stop tryna get Bold cuz i can picture 3 words that describe you perfectly
    you serve the meat. c'mon, that's just gross n nauseous
    you grope the sausage, n recieve more male... than a postal office
    your flow is off, making it through isn't luck
    for you, WDYS ain't Where Do You Stand... but rather Who Did You Suck
    dude isn't tough, you a punk for starters
    n gets shot in the face by dick, like one of Cheney's hunting partners
    your mom has some big tits... yea i've seen 'em
    her bra size is 'EE'...
    but her descript has "_lephantin_" in between 'em
    cheap whore with no job but pays a bi-weekly
    shit. i'm LOSING more respect battling you then you'd gain if you beat me
    you'll never make it ANYWHERE with those poor rhymes
    only way you'd get 5 mics... is if you clones yourself 4 times
    lol
    Iono I thought this was close but Jack came harder overall the EE shit had me laughing hard man I ain't get the shit at first. But I thought he just came with it, better punches and better enjoyment and some funny shit. And i checked that batle with broady yeah Jack flipped an old line kindof but at least he didn't bite it from someone else lol he just came harder to me.
    Vote goes to Hallow.
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  11. Mc_Revolver

    Mc_Revolver Rapmusic.com Audio Champ

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    Read both verses twice just to be fair with the votes. I saw some played out lines and some fillers to call it a wrap.

    Mike Sulli -

    The only thing that I didn't like about your verse was the part with the rainbow sticker and calling jack gay. I remember when these forums first became popular mad cats would call each other faggots and use rainbow references and that shit is just too played out and fucking annoying. I thought we got over that age but it seems we still stuck in the past.

    I dig the rest of the verse. I thought you had some nice punches and you kept it consistent excluding the whole fag name calling.


    Jack Lantern -

    That keyboard line is kinda old and used and abused. Though I digged some nice punches that you put out!

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    Conclusion - I like both verses and I enjoyed reading both of you. I can't seem to make mind on whom to vote for because I felt both made my day.

    So I'm going to vote- a TIE



    peace!
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