WB: Round 2 - wilmer_deryou vs. MakeShyft

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  1. Plumber

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    WELCOME to Round 2 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory, now as of Round 2.

    VERSES are due SUNDAY, May 6th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
    - NO EXTENSIONS will be allowed unless a case of emergency.
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    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

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  2. wilmer deryou

    wilmer deryou New Member

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  3. MakeShyft

    MakeShyft New Member

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  4. MakeShyft

    MakeShyft New Member

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    Mahfugin..

    Lonely bitch, rejected by every label known for wackness
    so RG Tried to join outcast..he thought he had their social status
    You rape the concepts you drop, dude.. just bury your face
    Roger only cries during sex cause the kids started carrying mace
    Broke ass.. you bunk & sleep at poor houses,
    I'd stave em' if i put the welfare cheque underneath his work outfit
    Your career is pathetic.. how you gon'a lose with hired voters?
    His times over..theres no coffee grinds involved when I Folgers
    You fucking mistake! Glock's birth wasn't planned..
    & I don't need'a father a cable company to son Roger on Demand
    This portable bumpkin can't move on me, I ain't humble to dorks g
    Only reason your a Mobil 1's cause your record looks like 5W- 40

    .
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    Fuck would you be in KID's room for? this gay reps with pride..
    & your only an unhappy camper, cause he didn't pitch your tent that night
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  5. Roger Glocks

    Roger Glocks New Member

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    YAWN

    ur horrible

    Thought I was getting comptetion this round but not from this un-hard prick
    I swear you got a promition for a night time job.. get ready for the Graveyard, Shift
    In reality everybody wants Glocks to merk u homie, I know the streets
    The voters will be like the Yankees front Office, begging Roger to throw heat
    He goes to mardi gras and gets no play, have beads but this clowns gross
    You see mad Flash games... but ur slow computer takes awhile to download
    Come out the closet and breath some fresh air, you been liking man
    His sex life is like a bad pool game...cant hold a stick and the balls always in his hand
    I'll chop off ur ligaments homie, dont think ur ever down
    Your head and shoulders above me ...with ur legs and chest on the ground
    Nice name dawg, WTF!! your juss a lame bitch
    David Ortiz,Keyboards, Me and your Mom
    ^^^these are three things that make shift's
    I'd hit the ground running and never come back, im sicker then duke
    Not even Construction workers making building could make an exit quicker then u
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  6. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    vote makeshyft...somehow. make was cool. the concepts were clean, worded properly...and moved along...

    i like roger glocks as a battler, but this was pretty bad for you. ..the only line i liked, and thought was executed properly, was the make shifts line...hahaha...other than that...the concepts that were okay ended up being poorly executed...no real flow...longer than usual lines...

    not your best, vote make..he gets by for consistency
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  7. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    Make, some cool lines in there that got a couple smiles from me. flow stayed on point which is always a plus in my book. pretty nice I think, the child molestin theme in a couple of ur lines were the strongest punches I see in it, but it was pretty cool all the way through and read smoothly.

    Rog, ur lines didn't didn't really start hitting until the last few ones in ur verse. it started really slow and worded badly with really long lines that messed up the flow a lot and made the read not the shit. there were a few lines that caught me though, like the make shift shit, but overall it doesn't seem like u tried to win really.

    Vote Make
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  8. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    Upping for votes.
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  9. MC_Rhapsody

    MC_Rhapsody New Member

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    & I don't need'a father a cable company to son Roger on Demand
    This portable bumpkin can't move on me, I ain't humble to dorks g
    Only reason your a Mobil 1's cause your record looks like 5W- 40

    lol at that last line that was nice one of the best finishers of round 2 if you ask me



    Thought I was getting comptetion this round but not from this un-hard prick
    I swear you got a promition for a night time job.. get ready for the Graveyard, Shift


    nice opening Wilmer, but overall i was feeling make more


    v-Make
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  10. c@sp3r

    c@sp3r New Member

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    MakeShyft

    Lonely bitch, rejected by every label known for wackness
    so RG Tried to join outcast..he thought he had their social status
    haha.. dope concept.
    You rape the concepts you drop, dude.. just bury your face
    Roger only cries during sex cause the kids started carrying mace
    this was aight..
    Broke ass.. you bunk & sleep at poor houses,
    I'd stave em' if i put the welfare cheque underneath his work outfit
    decent.
    Your career is pathetic.. how you gon'a lose with hired voters?
    His times over..theres no coffee grinds involved when I Folgers
    nah.. not feeling this.
    You fucking mistake! Glock's birth wasn't planned..
    & I don't need'a father a cable company to son Roger on Demand
    cool.
    This portable bumpkin can't move on me, I ain't humble to dorks g
    Only reason your a Mobil 1's cause your record looks like 5W- 40
    haha.. dope flip.

    Fuck would you be in KID's room for? this gay reps with pride..
    & your only an unhappy camper, cause he didn't pitch your tent that night
    decent closer.

    wilmer deryou

    Thought I was getting comptetion this round but not from this un-hard prick
    I swear you got a promition for a night time job.. get ready for the Graveyard, Shift
    cool flip.
    In reality everybody wants Glocks to merk u homie, I know the streets
    The voters will be like the Yankees front Office, begging Roger to throw heat
    aight..
    He goes to mardi gras and gets no play, have beads but this clowns gross
    You see mad Flash games... but ur slow computer takes awhile to download
    nah..
    Come out the closet and breath some fresh air, you been liking man
    His sex life is like a bad pool game...cant hold a stick and the balls always in his hand
    this was cool, worded badly though.
    I'll chop off ur ligaments homie, dont think ur ever down
    Your head and shoulders above me ...with ur legs and chest on the ground
    nah..
    Nice name dawg, WTF!! your juss a lame bitch
    David Ortiz,Keyboards, Me and your Mom
    ^^^these are three things that make shift's
    okay.. but worded badly..
    I'd hit the ground running and never come back, im sicker then duke
    Not even Construction workers making building could make an exit quicker then u
    aight..

    this was a decent battle. i think roger glocks underestimated makeshyft and that´s why he didn´t come like i´ve seen him come before, and makeshyft somewhat capitalized. this was a horrible verse by roger´s standards and if he does pass i hope he makes up for it next round, but yeah he caught a sleeper and it was really close but i just think roger kind of edged it.

    vote - roger glocks
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  11. King Defc0n

    King Defc0n New Member

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    Close battle. Neither really were that ill but wilmer had a better verse to me. Make was cool and he had maybe 1 or 2 lines, but I just liked wilmers verse more for some reason. It seemed better written and more creative. Make was real basic too.

    Vote - wilmer
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  12. Robby Digital

    Robby Digital New Member

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    This Battle Didn\'t Go So Well. Both Were Decent But Not That Dope. I Thought Make Had Some Nice Shit, But Alot Of His Verse Was Also Garbage. Wilmer Didn\'t Come That Nice Either But I Think He Edged It

    Vote: Wilmer
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  13. Mr. Ecks

    Mr. Ecks I'll suck ya cock for free

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    Decent battle. Makeshyft came aight but i think he didnt really close out that well. Had some cool shit, but otherwise just a kinda bland verse that wasnt really structured that good. Glocks wasnt that good either, and I know he can do better but he had enough to get this. Kinda boring battle though

    Vote = Roger Gocks
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  14. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    This portable bumpkin can't move on me, I ain't humble to dorks g
    Only reason your a Mobil 1's cause your record looks like 5W- 40

    what i was feeling from ya verse, alot of played stuff though like that folgers and camper line, social status was decent so was Roger on demand

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    Thought I was getting comptetion this round but not from this un-hard prick
    I swear you got a promition for a night time job.. get ready for the Graveyard, Shift
    In reality everybody wants Glocks to merk u homie, I know the streets
    The voters will be like the Yankees front Office, begging Roger to throw heat


    glocks you started hard too but i wasnt feeling the pool line or the head and shoulders, flash games was decent so was david ortiz
    overal roger takes this with more consistency
    v/ rg
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  15. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    i got Glocks winning this too.

    I liked his graveyard shift line. the roger line was cool too.

    Glocks is still rusty, but you can tell he's starting to shake it off.


    Shyft, your 5w-40 line was tight. the rest of your verse wasn't bad. your tent line was kinda cool too.

    vote-glocks
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  16. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    wilmer_deryou wins 6-3 and advances to Round 3.
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