WB: Round 2 - Trap. vs. Sound

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  1. Plumber

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    RapMusic.com/RBL Presents:

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    WELCOME to Round 2 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory, now as of Round 2.

    VERSES are due SUNDAY, May 6th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
    - NO EXTENSIONS will be allowed unless a case of emergency.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    THE FOLLOWING NON-COMPETITORS OF THE JUDGING PANEL MAY VOTE:
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    3. Mic Booth
    4. Inkwell
    5. Oz

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1041360

    Have a great battle.
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  2. whyfebeaterONE.

    whyfebeaterONE. New Member

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    Who's sound? Anyway I'm here. Probably go the max. Pce.
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  3. whyfebeaterONE.

    whyfebeaterONE. New Member

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    so now i gotta battle this fucking fake clown,
    & i don't need to travel barriers to break sound.
    no-one wants to face me, no matter if they nice,
    take it from dude;
    "trap'll murder you!" < now that's sound advice.
    if i heard you in my tapedeck, i'd either break it or pause it,
    a flawless victory here, so sound you out .. of the closet.
    i'm all about dollars & sense or some amounts,
    you can't write a soundcheck because that shit done bounce.
    which means you broke as fuck dog, probably livin' in hell,
    & the only sound you hearin' is the ringing of bells.
    after i knock ya bitch ass out in text wars, i'll riddle this G,
    i pound pussy .. you sound pussy .. literally.
    step up to get beat clown or else i'll lay ya deep down,
    where ya wack ass demos are, they don't even make a streetsound.
    as i stretch and yawn, you've just bored me out my gourd,
    so it's sounds like you're right at home, at lemonparty.org
    ...motherfucker.
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  4. Sound

    Sound ya heard?

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    lol give me 5 minutes.
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  5. Sound

    Sound ya heard?

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    Sound nameplays? please, cat i'll eat ya for lunch
    reading your verses is leavin Sound asleep - see how easy it comes?
    ya won last round but whack clown try n' beef it up
    so you mastered Rhyme.. but still can't produce a decent punch

    you got funny questions cuz i come with true game
    it's obvious no one knows Trap. even YOU went and got a new name
    and i heard you'sa snitch. i chill and be easy, while -
    you're such a mouse-Trap it's no wonder you got a cheesy style
    this is my easiest round, dawg this is barely a bout
    it's only right that ya names whyfe beater since i'm wearin you out
    i'ma pop slugs at em. ya won't find yaself ahead b.
    yeah you a whyfe beater. but ya hearts whats left a dead beat
    you a secretary at an office. it's outrageous bruh
    talkin bout you got war wounds.. when they really from paper cuts
    ya bars ain't worth shit, ya steez is phony n' such
    cuz misery loves company. and ya concepts is lonely as fuck

    knockout.
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  6. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    after i knock ya bitch ass out in text wars, i'll riddle this G,
    i pound pussy .. you sound pussy .. literally.

    vs

    i'ma pop slugs at em. ya won't find yaself ahead b.
    yeah you a whyfe beater. but ya hearts whats left a dead beat
    you a secretary at an office. it's outrageous bruh
    talkin bout you got war wounds.. when they really from paper cuts

    v/sound
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  7. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    okaaay.. this was weird.

    trap definitely overdid the nameflips, but it was written well as usual. very consistent. i'm sure sound probably heard lines like sound barrier and sound advice before, but he definitely set it up very smoothly.
    sound, came with nice 6 lines to start with. i thought u were gonna win at this point, without a doubt. and then u came with some of the corniest shit ever, like mousetrap and wifebeater / wear you out.. and then none of the lines really hit. it's really too bad that u overdid nameflips as well, especially after u knew trap overdid that. imo, i think u killed urself in this battle, cuz although trap came with lines that may not be new, he executed them well and -- sorry, wasn't corny.

    v/ trap

    ...and PS:
    "cuz misery loves company. and ya concepts is lonely as fuck"
    -that shit dont even make sense man. if his concepts are lonely, then it's not miserable. you got it the other way round.


    [sQ]
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  8. Robby Digital

    Robby Digital New Member

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    Trap Had A Lot Of Nameplays. But Even Though He Did A Lot Of Them Were Fresh. I Liked The Sound Barrier Line. And The Verse Was Nice As Well. It Wasn\'t As If He Just Had A Bunch Of Nameplays And A Boring Verse, But His Shit Was Coolio. Sound Was Good Too. That Whyfebeater/dead Beat Line Was Nice To Me. I Just Feel His Verse Wasn\'t As Good As Trap\'s Though. I Just Enjoyed And Felt Trap Was Funnyer

    Vote = Trap
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  9. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    I felt that Trap overdid the Nameplay thing. It was coo the first couple of bars but after reading the whole verse he had sound something in every bar. It just got boring. Sound used alot as well but it wasn't as much as traps. They both had decent verses but Sound pulled this out in the end.

    vote-Sound
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  10. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    i'ma pop slugs at em. ya won't find yaself ahead b.
    yeah you a whyfe beater. but ya hearts whats left a dead beat
    you a secretary at an office. it's outrageous bruh
    talkin bout you got war wounds.. when they really from paper cuts

    vs


    after i knock ya bitch ass out in text wars, i'll riddle this G,
    i pound pussy .. you sound pussy .. literally.

    sound takes this with more consistency
    v/ sound
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  11. c@sp3r

    c@sp3r New Member

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    this battle was pretty close. definitely a dope battle, and both heads definitely pulled out some ill shit. i didn´t enjoy the fact that sound was somewhat feeding off trap's verse, but still he had some cool lines and a pretty good verse. but trap also had a nice verse, and though it was full of nameplays, they were hard hitting nameplays. nice battle, but i made my decision.

    vote = trap
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  12. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    so now i gotta battle this fucking fake clown,
    & i don't need to travel barriers to break sound.
    no-one wants to face me, no matter if they nice,
    take it from dude;
    "trap'll murder you!" < now that's sound advice.
    if i heard you in my tapedeck, i'd either break it or pause it,
    a flawless victory here, so sound you out .. of the closet.
    i'm all about dollars & sense or some amounts,
    you can't write a soundcheck because that shit done bounce.
    which means you broke as fuck dog, probably livin' in hell,
    & the only sound you hearin' is the ringing of bells.
    after i knock ya bitch ass out in text wars, i'll riddle this G,
    i pound pussy .. you sound pussy .. literally.
    step up to get beat clown or else i'll lay ya deep down,
    where ya wack ass demos are, they don't even make a streetsound.
    as i stretch and yawn, you've just bored me out my gourd,
    so it's sounds like you're right at home, at lemonparty.org
    ...motherfucker.

    You started out cool, and yo punches had me rollin. However, after the third line you got repetetive with the name play, and it became annoying...really. Sound advice line was my favorite...

    Sound nameplays? please, cat i'll eat ya for lunch
    reading your verses is leavin Sound asleep - see how easy it comes?
    ya won last round but whack clown try n' beef it up
    so you mastered Rhyme.. but still can't produce a decent punch
    you got funny questions cuz i come with true game
    it's obvious no one knows Trap. even YOU went and got a new name
    and i heard you'sa snitch. i chill and be easy, while -
    you're such a mouse-Trap it's no wonder you got a cheesy style
    this is my easiest round, dawg this is barely a bout
    it's only right that ya names whyfe beater since i'm wearin you out
    i'ma pop slugs at em. ya won't find yaself ahead b.
    yeah you a whyfe beater. but ya hearts whats left a dead beat
    you a secretary at an office. it's outrageous bruh
    talkin bout you got war wounds.. when they really from paper cuts
    ya bars ain't worth shit, ya steez is phony n' such
    cuz misery loves company. and ya concepts is lonely as fuck

    knockout.

    This verse spoke for itself. I mean...you started using the names too much too, however, you never failed to keep it fresh. It was hard to find a favorite line in this shit cause it was that decent...

    v=Sound
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  13. warpath.

    warpath. New Member

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    aight battle fa sho.... both came pretty nice, i enjoyed both verses actually... now that we in round 2,.... i guess cats just comin better...

    trap
    so now i gotta battle this fucking fake clown,
    & i don't need to travel barriers to break sound.
    ...haha...nice nameplay...i was hoping u wasn't gonna have sound nameplays, i was wrong... and alot of them were fresh, don't get me wrong... but i felt this one stood out the most,....just a real ill concept.. dunno if it's played or not.....

    i'm all about dollars & sense or some amounts,
    you can't write a soundcheck because that shit done bounce.
    hahaha.... another ill nameplay. this one was just a funny line....fresh concept... decent creativity in this one....

    after i knock ya bitch ass out in text wars, i'll riddle this G,
    i pound pussy .. you sound pussy .. literally.
    ...lol, this was the line of you battle... creativity was there, i just loved the whole way you set this up...

    sound
    and i heard you'sa snitch. i chill and be easy, while -
    you're such a mouse-Trap it's no wonder you got a cheesy style
    ...lol nice line... not sure if this is played on trap or not, it probably is... but this was just a decent flip to me... dunno, i'm not favorable of too many nameplays because you never know... but this was fresh....

    i'ma pop slugs at em. ya won't find yaself ahead b.
    yeah you a whyfe beater. but ya hearts whats left a dead beat
    lol... cool line... never seen trap on this name before so it's to me.... good wordplay off the alias or codename.... or whatever that name is to trap.... nice job...

    you a secretary at an office. it's outrageous bruh
    talkin bout you got war wounds.. when they really from paper cuts
    this was decent.... at first i didn't really like it, but reading over it did kind of stand out in your verse.. imagery and content was there, but i dunno the set up line kind of made it slack off..... but still decent.....

    this was a nice battle..... both ya'll came good.... i was feelin trap's verse, the swagga in it was nice.... but i feel sound countered good..... u could argue he fed, but i dunno... but if that was his intentions, wack job.... but other than that, i just think sound got the win......

    pz.......
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  14. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Trap had so many nameplays his verse got boring fast. Some of them were just half assed flips, only one i even felt was the opener. Sound haad that mousetrap line, wifebeater shits were nice too, but rest was a bit blah. Either way sound had like 3 bars i felt while trap had 1, plus i felt he was less consistent.

    Vote - Sound
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  15. Mr. Ecks

    Mr. Ecks I'll suck ya cock for free

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    Nice battle. I see people complaining over the nameplays but they were pretty sharp on both sides. Trap had some cool ones and so did Sound, so I cant really count either out as far as nameplays go

    As far as just having a nice verse though, I think Trap got that catagory. Sound was cool, but Trap was very consistant. I enjoyed alot of his verse aside the maybe 4 filler lines that just wasnt doing it for me. Sound was cool and had a nice verse but some of his nameplays and shit were just corny as hell to me. Like the wife beater line.. I got it, but nah I wouldnt suggest using it. Good verse though

    Vote: Trap/Whyfebeater
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  16. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    6-4 Sound.

    Upping for votes.
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  17. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    I think trap overdid them sound nameflips.. seein "sound" in every 2 lines made it kinda repetitive an boring.. it jus seemed uncreative... i mean, some of the nameplays were aight, but i wasnt feelin some.. sound came more personal outside of nameplays, an i was likin his style more. he had more variety in his verse, different types of punches.. they were hittin harder.

    Cool battle to read...

    VOTE: Sound
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  18. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

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    Trap, the first few sound lines were cool, then it just kept going and I there was something about sound in every other line to setup a name punch. I agree, it was a bit much, some other angle needed more play on this verse. some of the sound references didn't really hit imo, but some of em did. ur closer didn't even rhyme though, that wasn't a strong way to end it. it was ok overall

    Sound, some nice punches in there that made me smile a bit more. the worn out wife beater line was cool and ur closer was pretty nice too. ur flow stayed cool for the most part and u flipped some decent name plays, but kept some other shit to make it read a bit better imo

    Vote sound
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  19. x - calibur

    x - calibur Guest

    very nice battle.. lets see

    trap had a good verse, flowed nice..

    after i knock ya bitch ass out in text wars, i'll riddle this G,
    i pound pussy .. you sound pussy .. literally.

    ^that was my favorite line out of all this.

    sound had a much better structure... and both of yall punches were pretty evenly matched.

    trap had the best line of the battle, and sound didnt.. but trap relied a little much on name plays and sound was more varied, but then i like traps textflow

    it really comes down to whos style comes across better to me.. and i prefer the way trap throws down

    close 1, but my vote is
    trap/whyfebeater
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  20. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    Sound wins 8-5 and advances to Round 3.
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