WB: Round 2 - Mercules vs. Ajax

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  1. Plumber

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    WELCOME to Round 2 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory, now as of Round 2.

    VERSES are due SUNDAY, May 6th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
    - NO EXTENSIONS will be allowed unless a case of emergency.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    THE FOLLOWING NON-COMPETITORS OF THE JUDGING PANEL MAY VOTE:
    1. ResiduaL
    2. DaTrusHurtz
    3. Mic Booth
    4. Inkwell
    5. Oz

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  2. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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  3. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    If I drop, it will be the maximum number of lines allowed.



    Chump.
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  4. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    You're out of your league, friend.


    Every verse I drop is part human and part holy;
    Pages treat your words like they were written by a student of Mark Foley.
    Plumber knew this shit was fixed from the jump...
    Puttin The Man 'gainst the textcee version of that kid from the Klumps.
    You're too fat and stupid to fight me...
    Only bringin counter attacks when Baskin Robbins refuses you ice cream.
    You really shouldn't mess with hip hop,
    I'm winning this. You got less chance of cuttin down the Nets than Chris Bosh.
    Ladies know the deal. They claim the right one.
    You strike out all the time, I bring that perfect game like Cy Young.
    Been writin forever - Its right in the depths of my soul..
    You're hopeless gettin out the pen like lifers that are sent for parole.
    ...this little nervous bitch can eat a nutsack.
    Can't put on shows without ado. He should join Britney Spears' comeback.
    I hit my peak. Now you're gettin clowned..
    Fuck the Bears. With this draft, I'm takin a Leak in the second round.
    Face it, you're hopelessly dead...
    You'd run the gamut from simple to stupid if I hadn't broken your legs.
    Now, get the fucc on.. You got Merc'd the first shot....
    I had a harder test with that no-show verse that germz dropped.



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  5. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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    riddle me this bitch.. I’m gonna make you an example
    my blade asks questions that’ll leave you stumped.. at the wrists and ankles
    Merc roll like Triple AAA on punks.. I guarantee you’ll hit some bumps
    but I’m equipped to fix all flats, the way I got 'Jax in my trunk
    kid, ya stuff last week was horrible.. I was incited over the mag
    ...only a Plumber can get excited over a piece of shit that bad
    called you a ‘legend’ and a ‘monster’.. haha, that’s fucking lie
    your name’s like wet clothes in the washer.. always stuck to the side
    act like your skill level is so advanced??? ..cmon, that's bold man
    truth is that ANY noob can catch up with you, like y'all are old friends
    cocky bastard ..out claiming that you “can’t be defeated”
    that’s such a stretch, a yoga-master would pull his groin trying to believe it
    I tower above…sniper rifle scope on ya soon-to-be dead face
    I have Ajax in the ‘hares.. like you did in your Eminen craze
    switched your name like a performer; cant hide when I’m coming for ya
    cause I’ll take out Roadblock quick.. like going thru my old Transformers
    pushing ya wack cd’s.. we wonder why you even tried to
    sales resemble nitelife in New Orleans… no one ever goes out to bayou
    you aint shit to me.. I hear that you’re a upn legend
    but I never seen your shit.. I guess kids only bite from Frac and Resin

    bum.
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  6. Plumber

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    Upping for votes.
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  7. c@sp3r

    c@sp3r New Member

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    ajax -
    Every verse I drop is part human and part holy;
    Pages treat your words like they were written by a student of Mark Foley.
    aight..
    Plumber knew this shit was fixed from the jump...
    Puttin The Man 'gainst the textcee version of that kid from the Klumps.
    lol, decent.
    You're too fat and stupid to fight me...
    Only bringin counter attacks when Baskin Robbins refuses you ice cream.
    lmao.. real nice.
    You really shouldn't mess with hip hop,
    I'm winning this. You got less chance of cuttin down the Nets than Chris Bosh.
    haha, this was dope.
    Ladies know the deal. They claim the right one.
    You strike out all the time, I bring that perfect game like Cy Young.
    cool.
    Been writin forever - Its right in the depths of my soul..
    You're hopeless gettin out the pen like lifers that are sent for parole.
    i was feeling this concept.. coulda been worded better though.
    ...this little nervous bitch can eat a nutsack.
    Can't put on shows without ado. He should join Britney Spears' comeback.
    lmao.. ill as fuck.
    I hit my peak. Now you're gettin clowned..
    Fuck the Bears. With this draft, I'm takin a Leak in the second round.
    haha, sports lines are ill. keep ´em coming.
    Face it, you're hopelessly dead...
    You'd run the gamut from simple to stupid if I hadn't broken your legs.
    decent..
    Now, get the fucc on.. You got Merc'd the first shot....
    I had a harder test with that no-show verse that germz dropped.
    nice closer.

    ajax had a dope verse. lot of lines i was feeling. the sports lines were killers, lol. i enjoyed your verse alot. baskin robbins and chris bosh lines were murder. nice to see you still got it. great job.

    mercules -
    riddle me this bitch.. I’m gonna make you an example
    my blade asks questions that’ll leave you stumped.. at the wrists and ankles
    cool.
    Merc roll like Triple AAA on punks.. I guarantee you’ll hit some bumps
    but I’m equipped to fix all flats, the way I got 'Jax in my trunk
    haha, dope nameplay.
    kid, ya stuff last week was horrible.. I was incited over the mag
    ...only a Plumber can get excited over a piece of shit that bad
    nice.
    called you a ‘legend’ and a ‘monster’.. haha, that’s fucking lie
    your name’s like wet clothes in the washer.. always stuck to the side
    not really feeling this..
    act like your skill level is so advanced??? ..cmon, that's bold man
    truth is that ANY noob can catch up with you, like y'all are old friends
    decent.
    cocky bastard ..out claiming that you “can’t be defeated”
    that’s such a stretch, a yoga-master would pull his groin trying to believe it
    alright..
    I tower above…sniper rifle scope on ya soon-to-be dead face
    I have Ajax in the ‘hares.. like you did in your Eminen craze
    nah.
    switched your name like a performer; cant hide when I’m coming for ya
    cause I’ll take out Roadblock quick.. like going thru my old Transformers
    decent nameplay.
    pushing ya wack cd’s.. we wonder why you even tried to
    sales resemble nitelife in New Orleans… no one ever goes out to bayou
    definitely no.. ''bayou'' lines are played..
    you aint shit to me.. I hear that you’re a upn legend
    but I never seen your shit.. I guess kids only bite from Frac and Resin
    good closer.

    mercules verse was kinda on and off to me. some parts were nice and he was being consistant with his lines, but other parts he slacked off and just threw in some fillers that didn´t really hit hard or make alot of sense to me. other than that, dope job.

    this was a nice battle. mercules came better than i expected him to and gave a decent showing. but i feel he was just beaten on consistancy really. ajax also had much better lines, and while mercules stuck with on some bars, others he just slacked and that cost him this.

    vote: ajax
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  8. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Every verse I drop is part human and part holy;
    Pages treat your words like they were written by a student of Mark Foley.
    dont think everyone caught the 'Pages' part. this was dope.
    Plumber knew this shit was fixed from the jump...
    Puttin The Man 'gainst the textcee version of that kid from the Klumps.
    this was alright
    You're too fat and stupid to fight me...
    Only bringin counter attacks when Baskin Robbins refuses you ice cream.
    made me laugh, havent seen this idea before.
    You really shouldn't mess with hip hop,
    I'm winning this. You got less chance of cuttin down the Nets than Chris Bosh.
    ya, solid
    Ladies know the deal. They claim the right one.
    You strike out all the time, I bring that perfect game like Cy Young.
    nice @ carryin the concept thru the entire line. the punch wasnt really hard, it was executed really well though.
    Been writin forever - Its right in the depths of my soul..
    You're hopeless gettin out the pen like lifers that are sent for parole.
    this was ok
    ...this little nervous bitch can eat a nutsack.
    Can't put on shows without ado. He should join Britney Spears' comeback.
    this was nice haha
    I hit my peak. Now you're gettin clowned..
    Fuck the Bears. With this draft, I'm takin a Leak in the second round.
    seen chris leak lines. this was fresh and worded well though.
    Face it, you're hopelessly dead...
    You'd run the gamut from simple to stupid if I hadn't broken your legs.
    well it was incredibly fresh. didnt really diss that hard though.
    Now, get the fucc on.. You got Merc'd the first shot....
    I had a harder test with that no-show verse that germz dropped.
    too simple for my taste



    mercules -
    riddle me this bitch.. I’m gonna make you an example
    my blade asks questions that’ll leave you stumped.. at the wrists and ankles
    i liked this
    Merc roll like Triple AAA on punks.. I guarantee you’ll hit some bumps
    but I’m equipped to fix all flats, the way I got 'Jax in my trunk
    instinct tells me he's seen alot of these, but i havent. was nice.
    kid, ya stuff last week was horrible.. I was incited over the mag
    ...only a Plumber can get excited over a piece of shit that bad
    hahaha
    called you a ‘legend’ and a ‘monster’.. haha, that’s fucking lie
    your name’s like wet clothes in the washer.. always stuck to the side
    saw this from you once, it wasnt my fav. then
    act like your skill level is so advanced??? ..cmon, that's bold man
    truth is that ANY noob can catch up with you, like y'all are old friends
    cool line, i read it last week from you though
    cocky bastard ..out claiming that you “can’t be defeated”
    that’s such a stretch, a yoga-master would pull his groin trying to believe it
    1st line i didnt like
    I tower above…sniper rifle scope on ya soon-to-be dead face
    I have Ajax in the ‘hares.. like you did in your Eminen craze
    nah
    switched your name like a performer; cant hide when I’m coming for ya
    cause I’ll take out Roadblock quick.. like going thru my old Transformers
    wasn't bad. was a fresh nameplay
    pushing ya wack cd’s.. we wonder why you even tried to
    sales resemble nitelife in New Orleans… no one ever goes out to bayou
    didn't like this one
    you aint shit to me.. I hear that you’re a upn legend
    but I never seen your shit.. I guess kids only bite from Frac and Resin
    bland, but sometimes bland works. this was a pretty good personal.



    this was a good battle. Ajax was more creative out of the two. Some of the concepts he used had alot of creativity and were worded great, although the diss in them wasn't always very hard. Merc started off fast with the first 3. Then unfortunately, it makes it difficult, not because you used some of these lines before, but only because it was within the last week that i saw you use them. If they were you know, a couple month old lines i hadn't just read i would maybe feel them more. I thought you tailed off a little bit with the stretch and hares lines. Roadblock nameflip was solid. Bayou wasn't. Closer was a nice personal. Ajax had the Pages, counter attack and britney spears lines i liked alot. The nets line was cool. Leak and Perfect game weren't bad either. The gamut line was really fresh and original, but I thought the diss half of the concept wasn't very hard.

    This is though, Merc dropped some fire though. But it's not fair for me to view 2 of his lines as brand new concepts, considering I had just read them last week. This was a really good battle though, I liked Ajax' creativity though, and he was also consistent and really didn't have any lines other than his closer that I thought were wack.


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  9. DaTrusHurtz

    DaTrusHurtz Member

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    Every verse I drop is part human and part holy;
    Pages treat your words like they were written by a student of Mark Foley.
    fresh concept, great way to open
    Plumber knew this shit was fixed from the jump...
    Puttin The Man 'gainst the textcee version of that kid from the Klumps.
    honestly ain't seen it so i don't really get this
    You're too fat and stupid to fight me...
    Only bringin counter attacks when Baskin Robbins refuses you ice cream.
    lol, saw a counter attack line just last week, but this was fresh
    You really shouldn't mess with hip hop,
    I'm winning this. You got less chance of cuttin down the Nets than Chris Bosh.
    simple, but nicely executed and worded
    Ladies know the deal. They claim the right one.
    You strike out all the time, I bring that perfect game like Cy Young.
    nahh, no need for self glory here
    Been writin forever - Its right in the depths of my soul..
    You're hopeless gettin out the pen like lifers that are sent for parole.
    Seems too statementish n' not that harsh
    ...this little nervous bitch can eat a nutsack.
    Can't put on shows without ado. He should join Britney Spears' comeback.
    lol, this was funny, i liked this
    I hit my peak. Now you're gettin clowned..
    Fuck the Bears. With this draft, I'm takin a Leak in the second round.
    ehhh, wasn't feelin' the concept but u executed it nicely
    Face it, you're hopelessly dead...
    You'd run the gamut from simple to stupid if I hadn't broken your legs.
    lol, never seen this, pretty cool
    Now, get the fucc on.. You got Merc'd the first shot....
    I had a harder test with that no-show verse that germz dropped.
    nah, weak way to close this

    vs.

    riddle me this bitch.. I’m gonna make you an example
    my blade asks questions that’ll leave you stumped.. at the wrists and ankles
    i used a line like this awhile ago, its kinda played
    Merc roll like Triple AAA on punks.. I guarantee you’ll hit some bumps
    but I’m equipped to fix all flats, the way I got 'Jax in my trunk
    haha, dunno if its been done on him, but nice nameplay
    kid, ya stuff last week was horrible.. I was incited over the mag
    ...only a Plumber can get excited over a piece of shit that bad
    lol i don't think plumbers get EXCITED to clean shit, they just have to do it so i dunno.. seems like a stretch to me
    called you a ‘legend’ and a ‘monster’.. haha, that’s fucking lie
    your name’s like wet clothes in the washer.. always stuck to the side
    decent comparison here, not bad
    act like your skill level is so advanced??? ..cmon, that's bold man
    truth is that ANY noob can catch up with you, like y'all are old friends
    lol, surprised i ain't seen this.. it was simple, but pretty cool
    cocky bastard ..out claiming that you “can’t be defeated”
    that’s such a stretch, a yoga-master would pull his groin trying to believe it
    seen a bunch of stretch lines before, decent flip, but only average concept
    I tower above…sniper rifle scope on ya soon-to-be dead face
    I have Ajax in the ‘hares.. like you did in your Eminen craze
    ehh just doesn't seem like that great of a diss
    switched your name like a performer; cant hide when I’m coming for ya
    cause I’ll take out Roadblock quick.. like going thru my old Transformers
    alright, but u coulda done much more with this
    pushing ya wack cd’s.. we wonder why you even tried to
    sales resemble nitelife in New Orleans… no one ever goes out to bayou
    decent wordplay here, this was alright
    you aint shit to me.. I hear that you’re a upn legend
    but I never seen your shit.. I guess kids only bite from Frac and Resin
    nah, weak way to close

    Nice battle here fellas, definately was worth the read and it was pretty close. You both had some pretty fresh shit in here and both ended weakly. Ajax had a few self-glory lines I wasn't feelin', but other than that, almost everything was pretty good and either quotable or close to it. Mercules came nice too, a lot of good shit in there, but I felt he was slightly less consistent and landed fewer haymakers. Washer, stretch, roadblock, bayou.. i dunno, all those lines were decent, but weren't up to par with some of the lines that Ajax landed. Car jack and old friends lines were the only lines which I thought were really dope and stood out. Like I said, good job to both of you, but I got Ajax winnin'.

    Vote - Ajax
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  10. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    You're out of your league, friend.
    --shut up, ha.

    Every verse I drop is part human and part holy;
    Pages treat your words like they were written by a student of Mark Foley.
    Plumber knew this shit was fixed from the jump...
    Puttin The Man 'gainst the textcee version of that kid from the Klumps.
    --not feeling the 2nd line, dope execution, not hard hitting tho.
    You're too fat and stupid to fight me...
    Only bringin counter attacks when Baskin Robbins refuses you ice cream.
    You really shouldn't mess with hip hop,
    I'm winning this. You got less chance of cuttin down the Nets than Chris Bosh.
    Ladies know the deal. They claim the right one.
    You strike out all the time, I bring that perfect game like Cy Young.
    --too referencing stuff, I dont keep up with it, lol.
    Been writin forever - Its right in the depths of my soul..
    You're hopeless gettin out the pen like lifers that are sent for parole.
    ...this little nervous bitch can eat a nutsack.
    Can't put on shows without ado. He should join Britney Spears' comeback.
    I hit my peak. Now you're gettin clowned..
    Fuck the Bears. With this draft, I'm takin a Leak in the second round.
    Face it, you're hopelessly dead...
    You'd run the gamut from simple to stupid if I hadn't broken your legs.
    consistent.
    Now, get the fucc on.. You got Merc'd the first shot....
    I had a harder test with that no-show verse that germz dropped.
    -seen this kind of shit before

    Wasn't your greatest verse, either. But you still had that clowning/condescending feel to it - the concepts were there, annnd execution/wording, it's just you lacked a killing strike.

    Next.
    -indeed.

    riddle me this bitch.. I’m gonna make you an example
    my blade asks questions that’ll leave you stumped.. at the wrists and ankles
    simple, yet effective.
    Merc roll like Triple AAA on punks.. I guarantee you’ll hit some bumps
    but I’m equipped to fix all flats, the way I got 'Jax in my trunk
    not direct.
    kid, ya stuff last week was horrible.. I was incited over the mag
    ...only a Plumber can get excited over a piece of shit that bad
    called you a ‘legend’ and a ‘monster’.. haha, that’s fucking lie
    your name’s like wet clothes in the washer.. always stuck to the side
    nooo
    act like your skill level is so advanced??? ..cmon, that's bold man
    truth is that ANY noob can catch up with you, like y'all are old friends
    ok.
    cocky bastard ..out claiming that you “can’t be defeated”
    that’s such a stretch, a yoga-master would pull his groin trying to believe it
    I tower above…sniper rifle scope on ya soon-to-be dead face
    I have Ajax in the ‘hares.. like you did in your Eminen craze
    switched your name like a performer; cant hide when I’m coming for ya
    cause I’ll take out Roadblock quick.. like going thru my old Transformers
    pushing ya wack cd’s.. we wonder why you even tried to
    sales resemble nitelife in New Orleans… no one ever goes out to bayou
    you aint shit to me.. I hear that you’re a upn legend
    but I never seen your shit.. I guess kids only bite from Frac and Resin

    I'd say your verse could of been better to match Donis'. I mean, you kinda have to post some incredible lines consistently to beat him, lol. It just wasn't on the same level of wit & creativity. It was ok, good effort and good match.


    vote- Ajax.
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  11. Robby Digital

    Robby Digital New Member

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    Vote = Ajax

    He Just Took This One. Better And Better Worded Lines,punches, Ajax Just Dominated This. Mercules Came Nice As Well, But Too Much In His Verse Just Dragged On To Me. Some Lines Were Cool, But Then Right After It\'d Be Some Shit I Just Was Like Ugh Too. Ajax Had A Dope Verse, Almost Line For Line Except I Few I Felt Was Wack. Coo Battle Though
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  12. yo logic

    yo logic its globalken yall :)

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    Vote - Ajax/roadblock

    whats with the new name god?

    anywho. Ajax was spittin fire. His style is addictive and I wanna see it around next round. Keep that fire comin. Pz.

    Mercules - that verse woulda beat some other heads on here. It had some dope parts too. nah, actually the whole thing was dope. Ajax was just on another level here.

    Britney spears line was the line of the battle. Baskin robbins was second. lol.

    Good shit ron.
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  13. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Mecules had the jax in the trunk line and i also liked that roadblock shit but a lot of your verse was similies that just didnt hit perfect which ruined the verse for me, like that stuck to the side line was weak. Jax had that britney line which i actually was gonna drop in the first round but i think your wording was sick as it can get. Counter attack was nice too. Gd battle.

    Vote - Ajax
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  14. Residual

    Residual I'm Gay

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    This was actually a nice battle.
    I'd close this though so people just don't keep piling on votes when it's been decided and everything.

    Ajax - some good lines in there like expected.

    You're too fat and stupid to fight me...
    Only bringin counter attacks when Baskin Robbins refuses you ice cream.
    You really shouldn't mess with hip hop,
    I'm winning this. You got less chance of cuttin down the Nets than Chris Bosh.
    Ladies know the deal. They claim the right one.
    You strike out all the time, I bring that perfect game like Cy Young.
    Been writin forever - Its right in the depths of my soul..
    You're hopeless gettin out the pen like lifers that are sent for parole.
    ...this little nervous bitch can eat a nutsack.
    Can't put on shows without ado. He should join Britney Spears' comeback.

    ^^^THat segment was pretty dope.
    Cy Young line a little simple, I actually dug that writin/pen line though.
    And of course the ado/britney spears line was a sick flip on that concept. I'd say that was the line I felt most in this entire battle.


    Actually your next four lines were pretty good too:

    I hit my peak. Now you're gettin clowned..
    Fuck the Bears. With this draft, I'm takin a Leak in the second round.
    Face it, you're hopelessly dead...
    You'd run the gamut from simple to stupid if I hadn't broken your legs.

    ^^^Some of the lines weren't worded as well as you normally do but hard hitting none the less.

    Overall impressive verse. I'd say probably top 3 nicest I've seen this round.



    Mercules:

    I actually liked your verse and thought you made this a match.

    kid, ya stuff last week was horrible.. I was incited over the mag
    ...only a Plumber can get excited over a piece of shit that bad
    called you a ‘legend’ and a ‘monster’.. haha, that’s fucking lie
    your name’s like wet clothes in the washer.. always stuck to the side

    ^^^Solid lines, Plumber line was iight and then the flip on the second line was pretty decent.

    Next segment was also enjoyable man:

    act like your skill level is so advanced??? ..cmon, that's bold man
    truth is that ANY noob can catch up with you, like y'all are old friends
    cocky bastard ..out claiming that you “can’t be defeated”
    that’s such a stretch, a yoga-master would pull his groin trying to believe it
    I tower above…sniper rifle scope on ya soon-to-be dead face
    I have Ajax in the ‘hares.. like you did in your Eminen craze
    switched your name like a performer; cant hide when I’m coming for ya
    cause I’ll take out Roadblock quick.. like going thru my old Transformers

    ^^^I thought the catch up line was well executed but a little old, and the Roadblock personal I've seen before but you keep this whole area consistent with decent lines.

    Unfortunately the last four lines to me were just ehhh.

    I liked your verse though, I thought you gave a match here.
    I feel Ajax had too many dope lines for you though.
    You probably would be advancing to round 3 if you were against most any other person this round, you got stuck with a tought opponent and just fell short.

    Good match kids.


    VOTE = Ajax in a good one
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  15. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    Ajax wins 10-0 and advances to Round 3.
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