WB: Round 2 - Defc0n vs. V. Vega

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Plumber, May 2, 2007.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    RapMusic.com/RBL Presents:

    Text Wars I (Text Tournament)

    Hosted By:
    Plumber (J-Nyce)
    Oneduh
    Inkwell

    Sponsored By:
    Janitor and the good people of RapMusic.com

    [​IMG]


    WELCOME to Round 2 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS ARE mandatory, now as of Round 2.

    VERSES are due SUNDAY, May 6th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
    - NO EXTENSIONS will be allowed unless a case of emergency.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    THE FOLLOWING NON-COMPETITORS OF THE JUDGING PANEL MAY VOTE:
    1. ResiduaL
    2. DaTrusHurtz
    3. Mic Booth
    4. Inkwell
    5. Oz

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1041360

    Have a great battle.
    test
  2. King Defc0n

    King Defc0n New Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2007
    Messages:
    58
    Enter: "Master Peace", steppin' in for a loss
    How can I lose to someone who named himself after bbq sauce?
    Nigga think he an artist, maybe a french painter
    Screamin' "OOH LA LA" while you typin' ya verse aintchya?
    As you play with ya palette I'ma spray from my palette
    and spit some sick shit that's gonna land me this ballot
    Ya verse gonna suck and you ain't gettin' no mulligan
    You winnin' won't make sense like Em doin' a verse on Black Republicans
    You're ya own worst enemy like Siamese-twins that dont get along
    Ya verse is like Samson with a baldy: It ain't that strong...
    My wrath release tactful speech on Master Peace
    persuasive rap verse like how a pastor preech
    Any visions of you winnin' is a desert mirage
    Splash some water on ya face...now that image is gone
    A genie in a lamp couldn't get you this win
    You'd make a wish and he'd say "Nigga I ain't fuckin with him"
    I'ma smoke you with an uzi, watch me blast this fuck
    You'll need more than Nicoderm to come and patch you up
    Leave you leakin' worse than an old american car
    Cause ya bloodiest battle is weaker than how this veterans spars
    test
  3. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

    Joined:
    Sep 21, 2006
    Messages:
    22,307
    Creating an upset…Def groping at my dick like a Cup-Check
    Like those Painter and Sauce lines aint never been spun yet
    I entered this battle blind…I didn’t know what to expect
    A damn shame this so called “Vet” is so weak at his text
    c0n you aint never been clever…not even at your best
    Your flows sloppy, and about as choppy as a Chinese Chef
    Def try to stretch for a win but his verse won’t get it
    It lacks of interest, I stopped reading after those name play gimmicks
    Tryna read through the slew of those punchless connections
    Grew tedious like all those filler Gunplay refrences
    As far as you being on RM and your “Vet Status”…son don’t start me
    You bout as welcome as The Bush family at a Democrat party
    You rhyme nice?...hardly…your skills are so-so
    On your account Jeff need to bring back the Lyrical Dojo
    Your disses might leave a flesh wound, but my verses’ll leave you scarred
    Defs flow strength is about as hard as Shawshank’s Prison Bars
    test
  4. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    Nah, just key your verse up.

    His verse is considered as battling the name as it is, V. Vega.
    test
  5. King Defc0n

    King Defc0n New Member

    Joined:
    May 2, 2007
    Messages:
    58
    test
  6. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

    Joined:
    Sep 21, 2006
    Messages:
    22,307
    test
  7. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

    Joined:
    Feb 11, 2006
    Messages:
    221
    Enter: "Master Peace", steppin' in for a loss
    How can I lose to someone who named himself after bbq sauce?

    Ya verse gonna suck and you ain't gettin' no mulligan
    You winnin' won't make sense like Em doin' a verse on Black Republicans

    vs

    Creating an upset…Def groping at my dick like a Cup-Check
    Like those Painter and Sauce lines aint never been spun yet
    As far as you being on RM and your “Vet Status”…son don’t start me
    You bout as welcome as The Bush family at a Democrat party


    close battle i got both tied at 2 quotable apiece
    so ima base it on the strenght of those two, and im feeling def com shit a little harder for the fact that masters opener can be viewed as feeding even though it most likely isnt so that takes away from its strengh, good shit from both
    v/ def
    test
  8. c@sp3r

    c@sp3r New Member

    Joined:
    Apr 19, 2007
    Messages:
    43


    i don´t see this battle as being that close. it wasn´t an all star performance by either one of them, but defc0n verse was just fresher. his concepts were nicer, punches set up better, and he had an unmatchable swagger in this battle. master peace came decent, but his lines didn´t match up to the nice lines that defc0n dropped.

    vote = defc0n
    test
  9. warpath.

    warpath. New Member

    Joined:
    Apr 19, 2007
    Messages:
    72
    def got it.... pretty easy battle to pick a winner in.... master came cool, but def's swagger was just too ill.... he didn't come as ill as i know he can or has in the past, but i expect round 3 him to make a statement... master put up something decent, but it just didn't get the job done... sorry bro.... but yeah, see you in the 3rd defc0n, lol

    pz......
    test
  10. MakeShyft

    MakeShyft New Member

    Joined:
    Jul 11, 2005
    Messages:
    10
    Ya verse gonna suck and you ain't gettin' no mulligan
    You winnin' won't make sense like Em doin' a verse on Black Republicans
    You're ya own worst enemy like Siamese-twins that dont get along
    Ya verse is like Samson with a baldy: It ain't that strong...

    vs.

    nothing.

    ^ Your opener was alright, but you fed off his verse. I think that def took this battle. Master you fed off his verse alot and i didnt see any thorough connections. & Def, i seen some played out punches from you, but i thought what i quoted was alright & enough to take this battle. V/deff
    test
  11. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

    Joined:
    Sep 21, 2006
    Messages:
    22,307
    Up...

    You say it like my entire verse was a feed. Saying that I feed off of his verse alot in the battle makes me believe that you're not throughly reading the verses. I went off 2 things:
    I came off the Nameplay
    and the Gun reference

    Not tryna sway votes or Disrespect Def but it's like the opoular vote is the vet. If you're going to vote make sure you read the verses through.

    Good battle Defc0n

    0-4 Def

    But whateversclever
    test
  12. MakeShyft

    MakeShyft New Member

    Joined:
    Jul 11, 2005
    Messages:
    10
    I actually did thoroughly read your verses, and the tournament rules. 3 bars of yours were fed off.. lol
    test
  13. Mr. Ecks

    Mr. Ecks I'll suck ya cock for free

    Joined:
    Jan 16, 2004
    Messages:
    287
    Dunno what Masters probs are.. you really didnt win this battle man. If you did Id have no problem voting and giving it to you, but I just honestly dont feel you did. And I suppose 4 others feeling the same way means absolutely nothing to you. But Def got this. You could just tell he wrote enough to get by, but it was get enough to get him out of a rut against Masters verse.

    Vote: King Defc0n
    test
  14. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    5-0 Defc0n.

    Upping for votes.
    test
  15. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

    Joined:
    Sep 21, 2006
    Messages:
    22,307
    It's coo...i dont have a problem I was just makin sure yall was reading the verses. Im not trippin about the battle
    test
  16. Phenomenonymous

    Phenomenonymous picture perfect...

    Joined:
    Nov 25, 2001
    Messages:
    3,706
    honestly this was a lot closer than most make it seem...


    Def's verse was OK at best. but most of it was pretty simplistic and uncreative. although the flow was hot, and a couple punches were decent, nothing was really that great

    Master Peace, well i thought your opening line was clever. i know you are "feeding" or whatever, but you almost have a right to claim it as NOT feeding, considering the lines Def dropped were SO unoriginal that you could almost EXPECT them to be in his verse, and so Master wouldn't really be feeding, just assuming he'd post those lines. but in the end, you fed of his verse. lol

    other than the opening line, i thought the rest of the verse was ok and at some points pretty nice. i liked your swagger, but there were no real effective punches behind it. you were on point when you said he was washed up and how he claims to be a vet but posts trash, but the WAY you said it was pretty dull. you didnt really make it a true rhyme. everything was too straight-forward. decent concepts though...

    in the end, Def only won by a small margin. and i know he can post nicer shit, but i'ma have doubts going into next week...

    vote-c0n man
    test
  17. Knucklez!

    Knucklez! New Member

    Joined:
    Dec 30, 2003
    Messages:
    162
    wasnt close at all

    vote = def
    test
  18. DiC GeTs GuLLy

    DiC GeTs GuLLy Hello

    Joined:
    Feb 26, 2005
    Messages:
    2,962
    Def, there were some lines in there that were okay and u had some coo flow in a couple spots that caught my eye. some of the lines didn't do much for me though, all in all it was an okay verse I think. ur opener was ok and the mirage line was coo too.

    Master, ur verse didn't go to well. I was hoping u had some hard punches, but there really just wasn't any. u talked about his vet stats not meaning shit and how his verse sucks, but nothin really witty or funny and then using the republican line after Con used a republican line was just bad taste. there were a lot of lines that show u played off dissin his verse, which isn't cool cuz it lacks originality. gotta come with ur own shit man. too much of it sounded like the same kind of disses

    Vote Defcon
    test
  19. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

    Joined:
    Sep 21, 2006
    Messages:
    22,307
    Appreciate it. I did go off of the nameplay and gun reference. But for the record I had no idea about that republican line. I keyed all the rest of that. ut thanx for the feed Dic
    test
  20. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2004
    Messages:
    1,933
    You're ya own worst enemy like Siamese-twins that dont get along
    Ya verse is like Samson with a baldy: It ain't that strong...
    Any visions of you winnin' is a desert mirage
    Splash some water on ya face...now that image is gone

    vs.

    You rhyme nice?...hardly…your skills are so-so
    On your account Jeff need to bring back the Lyrical Dojo



    not really feelin the battle. defcon had alot of filler, the lines i quoted were solid tho. vega didnt drop very good here though, and he fed, which isnt that bad, but still.

    vote-defcon
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)