WB: Round 1 - Young Philly vs. Nebz

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  1. Plumber

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    WELCOME to Round 1 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS are not mandatory, but are welcome.

    VERSES are due FRIDAY, April 28th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
    - NO EXTENSIONS will be allowed unless a case of emergency.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    THE FOLLOWING NON-COMPETITORS OF THE JUDGING PANEL MAY VOTE:
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    Have a great battle.
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  2. Young Philly

    Young Philly Guest

    Yippee kai yay.
    What's good NEB?
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  3. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    hmmmm

    Chillin in my range rover
    Listening to TakeOver


    its meeeee snittchhheesss
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  4. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Ive seen ya raps, Ur Wack, No wonder ya in the thread
    For over a hour & Still no Post...
    Im the G.O.A.T but you already knew that
    So really theres no need Boast...

    Its Meeeee Bitchhheessss
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    Round for Round, Pound for Pound fuck it we can Spar
    The outcome is already Certain, why try? you boxing with God
    Im @ ya throat like a spartan, my Bars hard call me Warden'..
    U gets no Pardons', now ya dead body fertilizer to a garden..
    Im servin em shots but no need to Card him, Get ya rhymes up to par
    U Famous? Lookin thru a Telescope is the closest youll be to a Star
    By far, As for lines in this battle I say fuck it, I can drop any Amount
    Im gonna do the voters favor,& just Ban your IP then delete your account
    nigga u hold no clout, before u type slow down & pump ya brakes
    You'sa Jake, This is like lunch time, Everyday I eat PHILLY Cheese Steaks
    Nigga ya Fake
    We can Dirty Dance' like Patrick Swayze' to win youre gonna need a Ghost'
    U should know by now youre wack, Cuz Everytime U spit, Niggas turn DEF like Mos...
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  5. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    Haha LLLLooooooooo, you'll get spanked cuz your corny
    I didn't forget L's, ^I was laughing at how u rank in this tourney
    I SHOULD have murdered u last night & dumped u readily
    But I didn't sleep a wink...
    cuz all I did was give ur girl one and she jumped in bed with me
    To be honest the pussy was outta this world kid
    I got that ass, now I got the keister your girls crib
    Most girls plan dates before they let dude get
    Your dame has one too kid, it's called the two-step
    But your moms a BIGGGGER slut, she loves giving head
    She had no teeth, so I gave her two rows of white stuff instead
    I'm gonna win this tourney & make this fraily kid break
    I just bet Oneduh the 5 beans you call your daily intake
    WHY am I the best, start asking the dudes
    You'll get like 40 stories...somethin to jump off after u lose

    Seriously you're horrible. It's hard to only ONE-up a verse like that.
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  6. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    ^ rise..
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  7. Knowl 723

    Knowl 723 New Member

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    Nebz, verse was consistent but nothing hit really hard. You used a lot of unoriginal concepts like the "Star" line "Philly Cheese Stakes" and the "Mos Def". All been used before. I didn't care much for your simple rhyme scheme, flow was average, and even though the spelling is similar "warden" and "garden" done rhyme, at least not cleanly.

    Young Philly. I hated your opener. I mean the diss was cool, but "corny" and "tourney" don't rhyme together cleanly. I know this is text but you can't forget the basic element of rap, rhyming! The punch can never be more important than that. There wasn't much personal about your verse, seems like it could've been spit to anybody, but you did have a few hard disses. I thought the "wink" line was clever, "Dude get" and "two step" again don't rhyme cleanly. Your closer, the "40 stories" line, was the best line in the battle.

    Vote: Young Philly, he had the harder hitting lines easy.
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  8. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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  9. warpath.

    warpath. New Member

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    nebz
    We can Dirty Dance' like Patrick Swayze' to win youre gonna need a Ghost'
    U should know by now youre wack, Cuz Everytime U spit, Niggas turn DEF like Mos...

    nebz had a pretty mediocre verse.. wasn't many standout lines in there, and this wasn't the old naughty nebzer i remember... ...he was supposed to come much harder than this, and i wish i could compliment his verse more...i put this line because it was about the only punch i actually felt was decent in your verse. dunno, maybe that a was a no show key but you lacked the spark in this battle..

    young philly
    I SHOULD have murdered u last night & dumped u readily
    But I didn't sleep a wink...
    cuz all I did was give ur girl one and she jumped in bed with me

    But your moms a BIGGGGER slut, she loves giving head
    She had no teeth, so I gave her two rows of white stuff instead

    philly came cool...he had a nice flow and came kind of consistant, but some lines just had me like ???...but overall he had a smooth verse. i liked those two lines, the second one is a cum line, but hey it's a funny one... sleep a wink line was real creative...easily line of the battle...

    this battle was kind of lopsided.. while both didn't have outstanding verses, nebz pretty much didn't match up against young philly that well.. so i'm going to have to vote young philly. he took this one...

    pz...
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  10. Young Philly

    Young Philly Broad Street Bully

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    wassup wit ur verse dude?
    you got some weird shit edited in it.

    2-0 and whatnot.
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  11. yuppi

    yuppi da raisin

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    its so cute how nebsz keeps uppin this shit like he stands a chance. roflz nigga you got slumped
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  12. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Weird. I was expecting more from nebz. Wasnt feelin that style at all, some played wordplay and stretched ass lines. Philly was just more witty, the wink line, the opener was cool, basically wittier and better in every way. Vote - YOUNG P|HILLY.
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  13. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    lol its cute how you come in here &
    figure your opinion actually means sumtin
    & its also funny how u figured I really gave a fuck
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  14. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    damn, nebs. what happened? this was a surprise.
    nebs used to be real nice a while ago.. and i guess he really didnt give a fuck. philly was okay, the closer was probably the best line. upset

    v/ philly


    [sQ]
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  15. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    Haha LLLLooooooooo, you'll get spanked cuz your corny
    I didn't forget L's, ^I was laughing at how u rank in this tourney
    I SHOULD have murdered u last night & dumped u readily
    But I didn't sleep a wink...
    cuz all I did was give ur girl one and she jumped in bed with me
    To be honest the pussy was outta this world kid
    I got that ass, now I got the keister your girls crib


    vs

    By far, As for lines in this battle I say fuck it, I can drop any Amount
    Im gonna do the voters favor,& just Ban your IP then delete your account


    philly started his verse killer, i was digging most of the verse just feel off at the end, nebz iunno is you rusty or whatever but i felt that ip shit about it
    v/ philly
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  16. wilmer deryou

    wilmer deryou New Member

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    nebz

    By far, As for lines in this battle I say fuck it, I can drop any Amount
    Im gonna do the voters favor,& just Ban your IP then delete your account

    We can Dirty Dance' like Patrick Swayze' to win youre gonna need a Ghost'
    U should know by now youre wack, Cuz Everytime U spit, Niggas turn DEF like Mos...

    vs

    Young Philly

    I SHOULD have murdered u last night & dumped u readily
    But I didn't sleep a wink...
    cuz all I did was give ur girl one and she jumped in bed with me

    But your moms a BIGGGGER slut, she loves giving head
    She had no teeth, so I gave her two rows of white stuff instead
    I'm gonna win this tourney & make this fraily kid break
    I just bet Oneduh the 5 beans you call your daily intake



    philly got this one easy..that wink punch was bwahaha and some other nice punches....nebz verse aight..punches weren't as hard as philly tho

    vote-philly
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  17. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    vote Young Philly. i know this nebz isnt THEE nebs, but even so, he fell off. pointless lines that didnt go anywhere battle wise. no wit, no wordplay.


    philly,

    To be honest the pussy was outta this world kid
    I got that ass, now I got the keister your girls crib

    whole verse was attacking....some was funny, but you got at dude
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  18. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    7-0 Young Philly.

    Upping for votes.
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  19. Janitor

    Janitor Guest

    this isnt the real nebz is it???
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  20. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    Nebz is not Nebs aka Nebulotic the one and only the guy we all loved.

    Thus Nebz i have never ever seen write text or try to rap.

    So don't worry guys this isn't an upset, philly is actually beating a nobody.
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