WB: Round 1 - casper vs. Hallow Jack

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  1. Plumber

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    RapMusic.com/RBL Presents:

    Text Wars I (Text Tournament)

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    WELCOME to Round 1 of the Text Wars I text tournament. Before posting or throwing up a verse, please read the following rules of combat:

    CHECK INS are not mandatory, but are welcome.

    VERSES are due FRIDAY, April 28th, 2007.

    - Every battler must vote on 3 battles and provide links in this battle thread.
    - Every verse must be at least 14-20 lines.
    - NO EXTENSIONS will be allowed unless a case of emergency.
    - Battlers may up thread twice.
    - No feeding, biting, or recycling.
    - No picture battles UNLESS both competitors agree.
    - No editing after opponent puts up verse.

    THE FOLLOWING NON-COMPETITORS OF THE JUDGING PANEL MAY VOTE:
    1. ResiduaL
    2. DaTrusHurtz
    3. Mic Booth
    4. Inkwell
    5. Oz

    Official Rules & Regulations can be located here: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1041360

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  2. c@sp3r

    c@sp3r New Member

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    just got informed of the switch.. still going 14.

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  3. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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  4. c@sp3r

    c@sp3r New Member

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    aight, so first i′m battling who? i dunno, but i′ll numb this fuck
    but if he′s an Alias.. at least I know season six isn′t comin up
    okay listen.. playing roles with other dudes, that ain′t fly
    he still dressin′ up as a doctor, and October done passed by..
    i mean, so who you nursin′ on? yea you fag, and son it′s showin
    it′s like ya ass plays tennis, the way ya cheeks say keep U S Open
    no homo.. and you lame, so ya game ain′t stoppin me.. period
    name one adult in the world who really takes Halloween serious..
    and you a thug? with men callin u ''sweety?'' that′s gay manner,
    knew you was somebody′s ''pumpkin,'' cuz well.. ya names jack lantern
    forget any storybook endings, understand that i capture lames
    plus there′s the fact he left Jill.. and now it′s just Jack & James..
    who′s tryna hear that? and i should do 12 lines, really..
    but it says do 14.. so i can′t do 12, silly


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  5. Ja¢k £an†e®n

    Ja¢k £an†e®n Spirit of Vengeance

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    look...
    nigga, your rhyme skill is less than par/
    this fag be checkin' on males...
    like the surveys that ask you what sex you are/
    ...you don't fuck women...
    the only time you see ass...
    is when you re-read the verses you've just written/
    bitch, you've never touched puss in ya life, fruit/
    and its a shame... cuz as a ghost...
    thats still some walls you can't slide through/
    you tried, duke... but now you give up ya mouth, fag/
    n get rubbed on by more dudes than a frat house mousepad/
    just crawl n cover... you lost it brother/
    we both came out of Mass...
    thats my home state... but its also what they call your mother/
    you alter lover... every day he'd creep...
    to Priests Holmes... like the scouter for the KC Chiefs/
    your written flows withn a minute'll rupture/
    wit transparent punches...
    that lack less substance than ghosts physical structure/
    howl at me...
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  6. Plumber

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    Upping for votes.
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  7. Robby Digital

    Robby Digital New Member

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    Cool Battle. Kinda Funny Both Ya\'ll Got Halloween Type Names. Casper Came Nice.. The Keep U S Open Line Was Funny As Fuck, Nice Wordplay. I Know You Somebody\'s Pumpkin.. Lol, Laughs.. Nice Verse. You Had A Lot Of Hard Hitting Stuff That Stuck. Same Goes For Halloween Jack, He Had A Pretty Good Verse Too. The Slide Into Walls Ghost Line Was Fuckin Funny.. But Casper Outshined Hallow In This. And Casper Had The Line Of The Battle, And A Just Much More Rounded Verse.

    Vote = Casper
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  8. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    casper:

    i mean, so who you nursin′ on? yea you fag, and son it′s showin
    it′s like ya ass plays tennis, the way ya cheeks say keep U S Open

    no homo.. and you lame, so ya game ain′t stoppin me.. period
    name one adult in the world who really takes Halloween serious..

    hallow jack:

    you had some decent lines here and there
    but none of them were quotables, IMO
    it seemed like you rushed ya shit or somethin, iono

    vote = casper
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  9. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    mean, so who you nursin′ on? yea you fag, and son it′s showin
    it′s like ya ass plays tennis, the way ya cheeks say keep U S Open
    aight, so first i′m battling who? i dunno, but i′ll numb this fuck
    but if he′s an Alias.. at least I know season six isn′t comin up

    vs

    you alter lover... every day he'd creep...
    to Priests Holmes... like the scouter for the KC Chiefs

    good shit from casper, jack you need to eliminate the /'s and take your time with wording, but good shit from both'
    v/ casper
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  10. Baron Mynd

    Baron Mynd Swaggersaurus Rex

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    I dunno, maybe I'm just reading a different battle to all you cats, but speaking as someone who's been doing this a while - Jack got this easy to me. Just far better with the wordplays at what not,

    look...
    nigga, your rhyme skill is less than par/
    this fag be checkin' on males...
    like the surveys that ask you what sex you are/

    That was dope as FUCK to me! Haha, pretty fresh line.

    bitch, you've never touched puss in ya life, fruit/
    and its a shame... cuz as a ghost...
    thats still some walls you can't slide through/

    Cool personal. The transparent punches line was cool too, fairly solid verse overall. I just wasnt really feeling Casper in all honesty, his style reminds me a lot of Ski Masks only without the originality. That US Open line was horrid, and there wasnt a whole lot I actually DID like to his verse. It was straight, but it had nothing that really stood out to me humour wise. I seriously thought Jack got this, and fairly easily too...

    Vote - Mr. Lantern
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  11. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    3-1 casper.

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  12. Mr. Ecks

    Mr. Ecks I'll suck ya cock for free

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    Vote - casper

    Just a better verse and better lines. That U S open line was pretty damn good. Witty and creative at the same time, I like it. But anyway, casper just had a better verse. He was pretty polished in the areas that mattered. Hallow Jack was cool, but I just didnt enjoy all of his verse. Some lines were decent and made sense, some even gave me a laugh, but he just didnt have that certain edge you need to actually take the battle. So in the end, I feel casper just outshined Hallow and took an easy round one match.

    - ECKS.
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  13. x - calibur

    x - calibur Guest

    casper had a good flow, some decent lines, put together well.

    but hallow jack.. not only a tight rhyme scheme, but hit with alot of punches, good similes, kept it more humorous.

    word @ what baron said

    vote -- - hallow jack/jack lantern
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  14. warpath.

    warpath. New Member

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    decent battle right chea... both ya'll came pretty aggressive, i like that.. i felt casper had more of an edge, but hallow jack was also trying to throw alot of lines out there.. on both sides some hit hard, but let's break it down....

    casper
    aight, so first i′m battling who? i dunno, but i′ll numb this fuck
    but if he′s an Alias.. at least I know season six isn′t comin up
    okay listen.. playing roles with other dudes, that ain′t fly
    he still dressin′ up as a doctor, and October done passed by..
    i mean, so who you nursin′ on? yea you fag, and son it′s showin
    it′s like ya ass plays tennis, the way ya cheeks say keep U S Open

    this beginning of the verse was hilarious... i mean the only real real standout line was the u.s. open, but the whole setup to it and shit was magnificent... thus the entire thing was quality, good job...

    and you a thug? with men callin u ''sweety?'' that′s gay manner,
    knew you was somebody′s ''pumpkin,'' cuz well.. ya names jack lantern
    forget any storybook endings, understand that i capture lames
    plus there′s the fact he left Jill.. and now it′s just Jack & James..

    these were two witty lines.. it's cool you threw em in there, but the first just didn't hit that hard... dunno maybe it's cause of how you worded it, but it was just a cool line. not a great one. the second punch was nice though... lol... not sure if it's played against him... but good anyway...

    good verse... you had some decent lines that stood out..

    hallow jack

    and its a shame... cuz as a ghost...
    thats still some walls you can't slide through/
    you tried, duke... but now you give up ya mouth, fag/
    n get rubbed on by more dudes than a frat house mousepad/

    this was a pretty impressive part.... that walls line was ill, maybe the best of the whole battle... good job right chea...

    you alter lover... every day he'd creep...
    to Priests Holmes... like the scouter for the KC Chiefs/

    good punchline.. it was ill, i felt it.. but it was just semi hard hitting, was like an all that line.. nice job though...

    overall i feel this was a pretty solid battle... hallow jack probably had the illest line, but casper easily was more consistent. his verse was filled with more laughs.. and at the same time produced some average punches that hit hard... hallow was cool, but he didn't win this one... so my vote is casper....

    pz...
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  15. Plumber

    Plumber Guest

    casper wins 5-2 and advances to Round 2.
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