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  1. Chavvah

    Chavvah New Member

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    YAH, please save me
    from this salvation
    that they gave me,
    They told me to pray on my knees
    with clenched hands so they could receive
    my blessings.
    The reception of their subtle misfortune
    has given validation to my victory
    victory is mine....

    We've been so blind
    by their POWER TO DEFINE
    Yes you Greco Roman
    your schemes and your lies
    your themes and your bribes.
    Your deception was perfect
    the Truth was disguised,
    but the The Lost sheep
    of the house Of Israel
    will create the event of your demise

    The cross that you created
    Jesus Christ became it
    But why must you hide the truth
    Yeshua was hung from a tree
    by way of a noose

    You were that bishop in the
    council of Nicaea
    in 325 A.D.
    how did you know that my
    people in which you've
    indoctrinated first,
    would relay that lie to me?

    Within these obscurities
    you've created your own family.
    I am the daughter of YAH,
    so Aristotle is not my daddy.
    In fact, he's shaped your daughters to rely
    on reason as the basis
    for establishment of religious truth...
    For in YAH'S KINGDOM
    TRUTH NEEDS NO PROOF!

    Aristotle's same policy and doctrine has impregnated
    infatuation of religion upon the masses,
    Christians prayed before wooden images and
    were merited of the Mussulmans that
    reigned at Damascus

    I can't believe that Heaven is in the sky
    That heaven is a lie
    YAH is Heaven, and Heaven is YAH
    and I'm going to see him
    HALLELUYAH!

    I'm gonna live and see
    You in Heaven
    I SHALL SEE A NEW HEAVEN....
    I shall see You...
    I've seen You Heaven..
    I dream You being a woman of virtue
    How can I not when I am You

    I wait for nothing in the clouds
    For the pie has been consumed
    and I have not a crumb
    I'm allergic to the thought
    but i don't need to be medicated
    for that part of my brain has been numbed....
    ERADICATED
    for the word of Yah is enough to
    heal this rash that has spread
    throughout the Diaspora of my people...
    who are dead...

    Brain wash me O YAH
    wash my brain clean of all parasidic dwellings
    dwell Ye in my burdonsome paths where
    the fame of dreaming is ever present and swelling,
    its opulence submerges my reality,
    I've witnessed its fatality...

    My entity is derivative and
    dependent and exists necessarily....
    Exists necessarily? Momentarily? or Eternally?
    I choose life everlasting
    incapable of being defeated
    in conflict or contest

    The Socratic theory will not reign,
    for I'm tired of living in vain

    They told me to pray on my knees
    with clenched hands so they could receive
    my blessings.
    The reception of their subtle misfortune
    has given validation to my victory
    victory is mine....
    test
  2. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Well I see someone went deep with this piece

    I enjoyed every line especially this one:

    YAH, please save me
    from this salvation
    that they gave me,
    They told me to pray on my knees
    with clenched hands so they could receive
    my blessings.
    The reception of their subtle misfortune
    has given validation to my victory
    victory is mine....

    We've been so blind
    by their POWER TO DEFINE
    Yes you Greco Roman
    your schemes and your lies
    your themes and your bribes.
    Your deception was perfect
    the Truth was disguised,
    but the The Lost sheep
    of the house Of Israel
    will create the event of your demise

    The cross that you created
    Jesus Christ became it
    But why must you hide the truth
    Yeshua was hung from a tree
    by way of a noose

    You were that bishop in the
    council of Nicaea
    in 325 A.D.
    how did you know that my
    people in which you've
    indoctrinated first,
    would relay that lie to me?

    Within these obscurities
    you've created your own family.
    I am the daughter of YAH,
    so Aristotle is not my daddy.
    In fact, he's shaped your daughters to rely
    on reason as the basis
    for establishment of religious truth...
    For in YAH'S KINGDOM
    this TRUTH NEEDS NO PROOF!

    Aristotle's same policy and doctrine has impregnated
    infatuation of religion upon the masses,
    Christians prayed before wooden images and
    were merited of the Mussulmans that
    reigned at Damascus

    I can't believe that Heaven is in the sky
    That heaven is a lie
    YAH is Heaven, and Heaven is YAH
    and I'm going to see him
    HALLELUYAH!

    I'm gonna live and see
    You in Heaven
    I SHALL SEE A NEW HEAVEN....
    I shall see You...
    I've seen You Heaven..
    I dream You being a woman of virtue
    How can I not when I am You

    I wait for nothing in the clouds
    For the pie has been consumed
    and I have not a crumb
    I'm allergic to the thought
    but i don't need to be medicated
    for that part of my brain has been numbed....
    ERADICATED
    for the word of Yah is enough to
    heal this rash that has spread
    throughout the Diaspora of my people...
    who are dead...

    Brain wash me O YAH
    wash my brain clean of all parasidic dwellings
    dwell Ye in my burdonsome paths where
    the fame of dreaming is ever present and swelling,
    its opulence submerges my reality,
    I've witnessed its fatality...

    My entity is derivative and
    dependent and exists necessarily....
    Exists necessarily? Momentarily? or Eternally?
    I choose life everlasting
    incapable of being defeated
    in conflict or contest

    The Socratic theory will not reign,
    for I'm tired of living in vain

    They told me to pray on my knees
    with clenched hands so they could receive
    my blessings.
    The reception of their subtle misfortune
    has given validation to my victory
    victory is mine....
    __________________

    Keep up the nice work …Peace sixfeetground…
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    Oh man another great piece by you. I'm becomin a fan. I'm not really into religous type stuff, but I loved this one. You started of strong and kept it up the whole way. Kinda reminds me of sizzla when i read this in a way. You should check out some of his pieces sometime.

    One luv
    test
  4. Wicked5744

    Wicked5744 Last I awoke, it was morn

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    You are deep man. This is the first piece I've ever read by you and I'm definately gonna be looking for more. Very nice drop on this.
    test
  5. Chavvah

    Chavvah New Member

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    thanx a bunch!!!

    test
  6. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    are u sizzla..thats what i thought when i read the piece

    anyhow

    the piece was great...i was kind of confused b/c i wasnt sure if the piece was really about religion or not..i beilve at one point u said i am yah..that was when i thought it was about something other then religion or god.....

    again great piece..always enjoy reading stuff like this

    welcome and pls take the time to share the love with some other poets

    UP
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  7. illpoetical

    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    deeep...tight what more can i say

    1ne
    test
  8. SIZZLA

    SIZZLA New Member

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    berr'ra'sheet beer'so'nay le'kalock kavode le YAH SHDIE HaMashiahk, kole Nisekhav ve Sarrave, ve aturave atirote ve kole kasidave bemalkoot YAH... ahnee mevereckit oatkim beShalom... selah.


    my dear sista, i am humbled... while at the same time, i am Holy Bold... i am so honnored to have you come off like this... i am so at a lost for words so, feel my Spirit, i am at awe.... Tsurielah Alyshadie and Mechiyah will be proud! even as proud as me! how can i place in words the feeling of a Spirit that is: has become bone of my bone and flesh of my flesh... our art work, in all areas will be profound... Holy. we will answear the call Mortay.... we will make YAH shine forever more... todah rebah for giving reason and substance to so much pain... to what ive thought to be a loss, you will: have made a vitory... be of great courage... and never give in or up... HalleluYAH for the kingdomofyah.com
    selah.


    no... this is not me yawl, but, i thought that it was also! wow~ what a poem... this is POETRY!


    UP!
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  9. Chavvah

    Chavvah New Member

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    WE will make YAH shine forever more
    WE will answer the call
    For when the spirit is humbled and contrite,
    YAH changes the heart.....
    test
  10. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    wow this was a great piece structured nice good flow and all great job on this piece
    test
  11. Saph

    Saph New Member

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    This was amazing. It gave me the feel I got the first time I heard Ras Kass' Nature of the Threat. Mos definately tight, I enjoyed reading it.

    I wait for nothing in the clouds
    For the pie has been consumed
    and I have not a crumb
    I'm allergic to the thought
    but i don't need to be medicated
    for that part of my brain has been numbed....
    ERADICATED

    That's education.
    test
  12. HeIsYAHsRock

    HeIsYAHsRock New Member

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    promises... promises. forever seems so far away when it could come today. in fact, it has come.
    test
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