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  1. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    lately its like nothins right
    all we do is fuckin fight
    cuss and strife, theres no trust and i...
    feel like were just a shell of a husband and wife
    we both have made choices
    each of us have raised voices
    pained annoyances, insane rejoices
    eyes stayed moistened and i have this clairvoyance
    that we should split and go our separate ways
    absence makes the heart grow stronger, the legend says
    but less than seven days away and im left in pain
    stressed away, ill send you a text today that im blessed to say
    youre the best babe, dreamt about you all last night an
    the one i always have where youre the one im wifin'
    im an emotional storm, youre the metal that attracts lightnin
    i come back and we just end up back fightin

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    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes

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    i come home, end up at my friends house that night
    this will be the last time, this will be our last fight
    i broke a bottle and used a shard as a glass knife
    to threaten you, tell you to get your ass right
    i didnt stab you, i didnt have to
    you grabbed your bags and called me a psycho ass dude
    i grabbed you, shook you with such rage
    threw you down, you took it well i must say
    cuz we end up laughin, fuckin like jack rabbits
    like nothin bad happened, you trust me, thats bad shit
    cuz anger problems, i have it and thats a bad habbit
    i grab your hand, clamp it and feel bad at your sadness
    my madness is tragic, i dont mean it, believe that
    i dont deserve you, maybe you need to see that
    my parents got a bed i could sleep at, if i decide to leave back
    but theres no point cuz tomorrow i'll be back

    hook

    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes

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    cupid, why did you impale her heart
    i can only give her a future in a trailer park
    our relationship is just a storm of rain or dark
    flooding, im tryna be her savior but i build her a failure arc
    im no Noah but i know ya are prolly better off
    if i left ya, but i cant stay forever gone
    i never thought i would be this fuckin nuisance
    would said youre insane if you said id be somethin abusive
    but its true shit, happiness seems to be elusive
    i die a little inside every time i do this
    so i bite my tongue, any time you would speak
    one day at a time, yeah, we had a good week
    the anger with the passion has been sucked out
    we say Hi and go about our day, feeling shut down
    we have no idea what to do, what now
    so i pick a fight and you tell me to get the fuck out

    hook

    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes
    you want me to go?
    ill run
    but ill be back before the morning comes



    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1238097-what-gets-me-closer-my-dreams.html

    http://board.rapmusic.com/open-mic/1237336-close-call.html
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  2. dsp2k5

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    ately its like nothins right
    all we do is fuckin fight
    cuss and strife, theres no trust and i...
    feel like were just a shell of a husband and wife
    -- nice opener for this peice ..

    i didnt stab you, i didnt have to
    you grabbed your bags and called me a psycho ass dude
    i grabbed you, shook you with such rage
    threw you down, you took it well i must say
    cuz we end up laughin, fuckin like jack rabbits
    --- nice twist lol

    very nice drop ... way better, imo, that the other one u just dropped ... nicely done
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  3. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    lol thanks homie. join back up for the rstl man
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  4. mr.redeyez

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    dis was on point tac u went in i like how u put evry detail down on da 2nd verse i could visualize dat shit happn good drop fam stay up 1
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  5. T.R.C....

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    yeah good shit man emotional an real you could have killed but you didnt ha ha keep it up man
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  6. Tacky Jones

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    thanks fellas.

    lmao, trc, when i was reading your response i thought you said you could have killed this but didnt. i was like =/ damn lmfao
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  7. cram oremor

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    Nice flow, I think u wrote a joint about me and my lady bout 10 years ago!!!. The hook is aight but I would tweek it a bit and give some variation to each bar instead of sayin the same thing over and over but all in all dis is hot
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  8. T.R.C....

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    shit my bad ha ha i meant you could have killed HER but didnt
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  9. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    haha nah i caught it. i misread shit a lot
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    lol i am as soon as I get more time homie, i promise ..

    i just nominated this one OM of the week for week 2 ... this does qualify for week two right? Anyway I voted for it and decided it may be early in the week to vote, but i will stick with it ...

    you guys get to votin lol ... plenty of dope drops already ...
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  11. Tacky Jones

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    lol thanks homie
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    he predicted he would not only get nominated but win the spot The Assholes Clairvoyant ha ha ha
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  13. Tacky Jones

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    lmfao. you two hit me up for a collab
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  14. dsp2k5

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    I just did homie ... check your PM ... lets all three do one together ...

    TaC: the 49ers are gonna loose anyway lol ... stop watchin ...
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  15. IgloS

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    I dig this.. it has some cool emotion impact.. the hook was felt

    im an emotional storm, youre the metal that attracts lightnin
    ^fire

    you grabbed your bags and called me a psycho ass dude
    -forced imo

    cupid, why did you impale her heart
    i can only give her a future in a trailer park
    our relationship is just a storm of rain or dark
    flooding, im tryna be her savior but i build her a failure arc
    -shit was dope there

    I dug this homey
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  16. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Thanks man. How've you been?
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    TaC: you got that hook yet homie? lol ... that idea got all kinda ideas floatin through my insane brain lol
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  18. Tacky Jones

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    i got an idea. ill actually write it out later. doing homework -.-
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    ahh good deal ... hit me up ... i will be around ...
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  20. lyricalpriest

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    this was really good.. i slept on this one so i gotta come thru..

    flow=great
    multis=great
    storeyline=great

    some of the lines seemed stretch, but i didnt mind it, thought it added closuer
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