Waiting Too Long

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by -Steve Witz-, Jul 30, 2006.

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  1. art_associatez

    art_associatez f*ck you

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    returning feed....

    aiight beats ok nothing special, delievery is good voice is nice production is dope, the content is pretty good on some new ish dont sound like anything else swagger is pretty good flows dope beat riding is good I actually like this joint mixing is done plus its well written...good work
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  2. ?.?.?.?

    ?.?.?.? Not a Critic Just a Fan

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    waiting to long is kinda annoying
    besides that shits nice
    peace
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  3. -Steve Witz-

    -Steve Witz- ya dig

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    haha arite appreciated
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  4. -Steve Witz-

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    uppin this for now
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  5. Wrecktify

    Wrecktify New Member

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    "Kids can't add but they can count calories..sometimes it seems stable like a salary..sometimes unstable like a salary"

    I love your old school flow man....this beat is too nice too...takes me back to the old school days. My only gripe about this is that you used way too many punch ins..which indicates a possible breath control problem..I know the beat is fast..but..u can handle it..even if you have to change the scheme a bit or rehearse more. This is still some good stuff.....that Calories line was a real thinker.....Nice!

    You live in New York? Weird...you actually have a deep Midwest accent.

    I'm impressed, 9/10
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  6. -Steve Witz-

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    good looks man, appreciated, i dont hear a deep midwest accent tho
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  7. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    peepin... beat is kinda odd but its coo..voice is coo..i'm feelin it...delivery is good as well..flow is nice,..i like the hook...it was kinda simple but it was kinda catchy ...lyrically this was coo..

    the lyrics was there but the how ya flow n the beat mixed was what got my head noddin...props on this...this was a nice drop
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  8. -Steve Witz-

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    appreciate the return
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  9. TAB

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    I remember how horrible you were when you hit me up on AIM a long time ago. This shows a lot of practice and improvement. I was feeling most of the content here and how it was delivered. Good listen.

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  10. -Steve Witz-

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    haha thanks i guess
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  11. MC AK

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    verses were coo the beats hot but the chorus needs some work other than that good shit keep at it

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  12. -Steve Witz-

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    appreciate the feed
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  15. Mellow Madness

    Mellow Madness aKa sTaTiK

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    beat is nice.. i like the uptempo feel on it.. nice bassline..

    mixing is nice as well.. u got a nice flow.. the hook is coo.. would be better if "waiting to long" was dubbed to give it more feel.. but its all gravy.. still a nice track..
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  16. -Steve Witz-

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    good looks man, yeah we're gonna try to give that part a more full feel
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  17. -Steve Witz-

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    someone return the favor
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    white girls hair occasionally smells like wet dog word is bond uppin
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  20. Apoc725

    Apoc725 New Member

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    Damn I was diggin this whole song. I actually liked the beat off jump cause it sounds kinda old school. Lovin what u talkin about sounds like somethin u sat down and thought about first. this hook i could do without. The flow was onpoint too i was lovin that...good voice to me...delivery is sick to i like that little...well cant explain it but its hot lol... Good track fam
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