VOCAL WARS FINALS - DISHONOUR vs RAPTER2K - BOTH VERSES ARE IN! - Vote Now

Discussion in 'the Onslaught' started by castro'DAMUS, Jul 7, 2004.

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  1. A.S.K

    A.S.K ...

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    ^^

    cheers for the comments man

    im improving slowly, though im much better at track than battles you know

    but i couldnt give 1 fuck bout this battle, i just realised that

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  2. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    Than punches in a battle?
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  3. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    punches arent the only thing to look for IN AN AUDIO BATTLE

    lets get some more votes please
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  4. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    4-3 or 5-3

    I dont think that Nyphite kid's vote should count, it wasnt even a line.

    But your call.
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  5. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    on an overall level castro took this, rapter ight and gettin better but truth is ya flow needs to get better, u kinda just makin it sound like one long line for an audio, theres no breaks, your punch-ins are comin in the very next second after each line, and its killin ya flow. if you got ya breath control better, and wrote a structure with opening for ya breath you could come off a lot nicer, ya lines ight but nothin great, "you a white dude tryin to be a white dude/ the reason i sound white is cause i am white/ what the fucks up with u?".. he is white, and he sounds it, so i didnt get that.
    castro, flow is nice, beat choice is ehh haha, its cool tho, good beat just not for a battle if u ask me, feelin ya voice ionno i think its cool, ya delivery is good, ya charisma is pretty hot, feelin the way u bringin some, the lyrics pretty good, you came better then rapter but i think u could do better.
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  6. serge

    serge Well-Known Member

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    lmao, rapters breath dont lettim breath enough.

    damn brits.
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  7. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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  8. Geh Snot

    Geh Snot New Member

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    i dont like DH's voice sounds whiter being black type im gangster but gay
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  9. Blackheart-DP

    Blackheart-DP New Member

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    ASK-
    First thing I noticed was the weird voice/accent, where you from? The punchlines were pretty weak if you ASK me. (hah)
    In all realness though I just can't get into this too much, there is talent there...
    Flow was decent.

    CASTRO-
    Intro was nice, already got into him.
    Flow was on point and punches were pretty good. I like the part where you imitated his accent.

    vote- CASTRO
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  10. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    5-4 me

    when you wanna stop voting?
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  11. A.S.K

    A.S.K ...

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    i kinda see nyphite vote counting

    i dont even know the kid, so you cnat say it was bias

    some people dont type much, some do

    thanks for the responses on improvement.....im much better at songs. good looking
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  12. A.S.K

    A.S.K ...

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    This closed at 10pm last night

    whihc means The Storms vote sdont count cos it was late

    but your call
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  13. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    United Kingdom Of England?

    Wheres that?
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  14. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    it wasnt explained though, and I said that WAY before deadline ...

    I dont care, you can take the win then *shrugs*
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