Vivid - "The Letter V" - Yea Yea!!!

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  1. Scribe

    Scribe IMQ8

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    hot shit.
    test
  2. D-Cipher

    D-Cipher New Member

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    shit this is sick....crazy V's ahaha ....more alliteration then a grade 5 poetry lesson haha..... feelin ya style bro....flow is tight as shit on this....never heard the original ....man i dont know what to tell you, shit is soundin crazy on point

    hit this when u get a chance
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=963318


    if u ever need a beat, hit me up on aim s/n - flipzwizdomz

    i got some self produced tracks on my SC if u wanna hear a sample VVVVV
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  3. Sever

    Sever Sever that Leash

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    damn.

    Shit woke me up a little bit.. beat is hot.. I'm not good at annuciating v's with my jaws all braced up.. so this is impressive.. you ride this fantastically for using the same letter.. gets a little monotonous.. damn CHORUS is HOT.. this the best track I been heard from you.

    you know what though.. I'd almost rather have heard you just rip a concept track that matched the beat.. I mean this was dope, don't get me wrong.. but I can't really vibe this on the constant, this on that strictly intellectual shit.

    Going to cut this feed short, I apologize bro.. this was good.. but I'm just so fucking tired I'm barely awake now. 9.0 out of 10.0, be easy, speak easy, keep ripping.. if you wanna hit up Sever Rap I'll give you the rest of the feed.

    If you're interested http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=963471 - my storytelling joint lol
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  4. Vividescription

    Vividescription New Member

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    Thanks a lot for the feed...very much appreciated...ill get at you soon..
    test
  5. Forward Thought

    Forward Thought New Member

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    mad skillz.... this is definately one of the best tracks ive heard on here.

    youve got some serious mixing skills too... quality production.

    dope ass beat, dope ass flow, dope ass lyrics too
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  6. Vividescription

    Vividescription New Member

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    First and only time i ever mixed and mastered a track...guess it came out pretty straight..good lookin out...appreciate all the feed...
    test
  7. Dru-P

    Dru-P Alaskan Assassin

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    This is tight how you used all of the V's... Voice isn't that great in my opinion.. Hook is weak.. But the flow is pretty tight... The only problem is that how your words flow together you don't hear the words you just hear the flow.. It's tight cuz the flow is smoothe, but it's a straight track...
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  8. Vividescription

    Vividescription New Member

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    lmao..too funny...i love your track...the way you are on beat is amazing..lol..thanks for the feed..lol (my stomach hurts)
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  9. Dru-P

    Dru-P Alaskan Assassin

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    You're a clown.. I said you had a nice flow.. Just wasn't very appealing to me.. My opinion.. The lyrics were tight well the lyrics you pronounced... Using the letter V a lot, tight little concept.. But it's not something I'd really listen to.. My opinion.. No feeling in your voice at all..
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  10. Vividescription

    Vividescription New Member

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    no doubt alaskan assassin..like i said thanks for the feed bro...lol...well i would say the same for yours with puttin in feelin..but since delivery is off..it kinda defeats the purpose...lol...appreciate checking out my track...did the same for yours..favor returned..1
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  11. ? THA RIDD ?

    ? THA RIDD ? New Member

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    Yea this shit goes hard homie....a beast up on this track.....im feelin this joint more then the last joint and thats sayin suntn cause i was diggin the last joint aswell homie..

    you tend to do the same thing i do on some tracks, when killen the flow ya pronunciation isnt as clear....but on the real i dont really look at it as a problem nah mean...i feel like it just makes the listener play ya shit a couple more times to try and really hear it out word for word....

    any how solid track playa...keep droppin bangas....

    pzzz

    ? THA RIDD ?
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  12. Extacy

    Extacy Better Known As Lantz

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    i like ur voice n flow alot, lyrics are nice as well... beat's hot too, u deff have to've been at this shit 4 a while, shit sounds polished. my least fav part is the hook but it's not bad.

    leep it up man.
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  13. ..milkman..

    ..milkman.. Randy Savage

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    returnin the feed...

    uh oh...

    mos def feelin this. your voice is nasty, and the topic is tight. flow was done nicely... beat was cool, but there was just somethin about it that i wasnt feelin.... maybe its just me.

    definately some fiyer tho... keep it up homie
    test
  14. midwestTHUG

    midwestTHUG New Member

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    beat sound straight
    quality sounds smooth as fucc tho
    KILLA lyricism playa
    feelin it feelin it
    we gotta get down on some shit
    you gotta holla at me ASAP JO
    aim-NSAINN187

    nigga this joint hot as hell

    hook iz hott as hell too nigga

    returned tha peep
    -one-
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  15. Vividescription

    Vividescription New Member

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    thanks a lot for the feed...def feelin the love or anything opposite of that..will be droppin some new shit for hip hop game ..Keep on the lookout...

    if i havent returned feed yet...let me know...

    good looks
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  16. E.K.O.B.A.H.

    E.K.O.B.A.H. ItsArtic.com!

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    yooo this shit is crazy u can def push this on mixtapes and build ur name off it...hot shit

    good looks peepin my joint
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  17. Vividescription

    Vividescription New Member

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    thanks man..that means a lot bro...be safe
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  18. iDeaL..

    iDeaL.. New Member

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    when i saw the title, it made me think of Saigon and Kool G, but i was like, naaaaaa i doubt he did a whole song on the letter V, cus that shit would be hard lol
    I notice some good techniques u took, such as saying "in...VIGORATING" lol, if u woulda done that the whole way through, it woulda taken away from the concept, but to do that a handful of times was a good idea. I dont think u did it much at all., though
    Vinni vidi vici (sp?) was a good ass idea.

    Omg...to violated u with a VIbrator...u siad that as the beat drop, and it came off so raw. Good shit.

    Hook is a little too fast for my taste, but u held it down.

    v6 volkswagon to vegas, lmfao.

    vital vinyls.

    Liked the "2nd chorus"? or it was kinda like a sub-hook where ur saying V-i-v-i-d, and all that, real appealing.
    This beat is fuckin raw, it almost makes me wanna do one of these lol...but the thrill is gone already.
    Good shit, homie.
    test
  19. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    First thing I noticed is how hot the beat was, WOW with the pianos and stuff.. flow is DOPE your scheme on this ish is just great.. you also have a nice vocab. Your energy and delivery is shinin' on this mess.. I could listen to this a few more times man hahaha nice job
    peace
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  20. Vividescription

    Vividescription New Member

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    thanks man...much appreciated..
    test
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