Visually Loud...

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  1. Revo1

    Revo1 Rhythms & Sounds

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    This probably isn't my best bet to open this thread
    up with some of my Spoken Word material,
    but why not? This is the most recent Spoken Word
    that I've recorded, for however old this writing is.
    I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for your eyes and ears.

    Click the title to link to the download track.

    Multi-Dimensional (Visually Loud)

    I've heard a blind man walks where a deaf man talks
    out of no where, and some how it always gets to them
    that some way they know how they'll always get to where's
    going (or so it would seem as though). They never seem
    to give up for what simple chance of losing comes showing.

    The greater balance of the two is in the effort
    to show forth in how you were more than the challenge
    to know how to be more of a man than the risk that was involved
    if you wouldn't have resolved what problems, or if you
    wouldn't have overcome to find solution. Even in
    the blackest of lungs pollution still resides and fights
    for clean air. Oxygen may one day be sold
    by the bottlefull, but who really cares?

    Who knows, maybe even the blind man can share
    enough of your day in enough of your time to show you
    the way in which home direction your best destination
    is next set in. In this exact instance of essence even
    the deaf man can call to the catch of the tiniest of fraction
    of sound where the rest of us are clueless as to who,
    where, what, why, and even how, because we
    aren't listening or living for this moment.

    In this very moment we are not even seeing
    a way into what's close enough here in now.
    It seems that mentally we lack what's visually loud.
    We're still stuck in 3-D not inclusively wondering
    how, left wondering, but how?

    EJGH © 2003
    test
  2. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    very deep .....liked the word usage.......illness mos def..

    ~one love~
    test
  3. Revo1

    Revo1 Rhythms & Sounds

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    peaCe Mocha... Thx for your Time, poet...
    test
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