Vinny vs. Fac3

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Vinny Diesel, Jul 17, 2009.

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  1. Vinny Diesel

    Vinny Diesel Venni Vetti Vicci

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    first to five votes (which'll probly take forever)
    everything else is what ever u just gotta post tonight...
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  2. -Fac3-

    -Fac3- Will punch the shit out u

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    Allllrighty.....Check, check...
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  3. Vinny Diesel

    Vinny Diesel Venni Vetti Vicci

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    let's fac3 facts i understand u really dont want it man
    lay low before i inflict wounds that make coroners go "Damn!"
    fall back like its ya plan 'fore I click clack at ya mans
    take ya bricks cash an ya grams smash ya chicks snatch n then scram
    you justa, flash in the pan i'm more like a forest fire
    your only knowledge of the streets comes from, watching "The Wire"
    lying and testifying are two things you know well
    this aint second grade dog real life ain't show and tell
    i did time in a cell but thats the past among other things
    it's scary how this canary fits right in with the underlings
    it stings dont it but let's let the truth unfold
    break the mold and leave this faggot stiff and cold
    truth be told i heard that you aint much of a fighter
    so retreat 'fore you catch a left hook from a chorus writer
    I could give a fuck about you however which way you word it
    I'll still leave your mama screamin' "MY BABY DIDNT DESERVE IT!"
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  4. -Fac3-

    -Fac3- Will punch the shit out u

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    It's pimps up, Hoe's down, so figure the shit out you dick sucker
    Play ya position.....
    ...............And keep lookin' up to me like im a fuckin big brother
    The kid's butta, this kids a fudge packer, guys don't have to force him
    He doesn't toot his own horn....
    ..........Dan...........Joey...........Goearge....well, they all do it for him
    Ya style's more than bore-in, so is that sig quote that's chosen
    Lloyd Banks should trademark it...
    ..................So this faggot ass bitch can't pretend like he wrote it
    Face it punk, Fac3 takes this one, you just one to fake the funk
    Only time people are checkin' for Diesel is at gas station pumps
    I bet ya' verse is played and dumb, but what can you expect
    from a fuckin reject...
    ............That would put a Ja rule album as his fuckin custom text
    Aka..PasswordZ...........What a nerd, Heres a word of advice from Meeeee
    Mua' fucka' the way voters sleep on you, you shoulda added more ZZZZ's
    Oh well tho, you fail ho, read my custom text as it just applies so much...
    So it's no suprise why my verse could be recognized as one big punch


    Tired of writing, your 16 to my 14...
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  5. Restproof

    Restproof Clockwork

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    VD: Flow was decent and it bobbed well. Nice rhyme scheme and all, but I wasn't really impressed by any punches. Best line was probably the fourth because of the ryhme structure.

    Fac3: Not really down with the flow. The punch idea structure was okay, how you tried to lead me one way and jerk me another in some cases, but I often felt it ultimately led to nowhere. Lloyd Banks lines are OLD. Lines 10& 11 had more complicated rhyme structure.


    All in all, a tough battle to judge. I want to vote it a tie, but that's dumb. I like VD's flow better at least, though I feel like Fac3 had more punch attempts. Then again I feel that Face3's punch attempts ended up failing more so...

    Vote: Vinny
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  6. -Fac3-

    -Fac3- Will punch the shit out u

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    Ok, normally I have no problem with votes going against me, and even in this one it's no different, however, the LLoyd Banks line was about his signature....how could that be old exactly? I clearly won this battle and it was a keystyle lol. taking nothing from you Vinny, I just don't think you know what a proper punch is. I know my shit wasn't the greatest, but in battles punches are what ultimately decides the winner......I feel like niether of you realize that or know that.....Sorry, cuz I do know this battle means absolutely nothing and was just for fun, I feel like I should let you know.....if you go in the leagues and vote somebody for having a better flow when the other person had way more punches......you'll get laughed at....I know what flow is, go check my rstl pieces.....No hate guys, just feel like you both are mis guided when it comes to battle verses....that structure I was using was just something to have some fun with....not how I usually write it...oh well, just a heads up though as this battle won't reach 5 votes before 3 years pass lol....

    anywho 0-1 vinny
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  7. Blitz_krieg

    Blitz_krieg SAY WHA.........

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  8. AKIDO

    AKIDO My Spirit Has Awakened

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    yeah I gotta agree with restproof. Vinny's rhyme scheme was very nice. It was difficult reading Face's verse, it kind of thrown a nigga off a lil. I didn't know where he was trying to get at. His verse didn't have any structure to it. I enjoyed reading Vinny's verse because it was str8 to the point and his words rhyme perfectly.

    I gotta go with......VINNY!!!!

    Face- try to work on your structuring because your verse was very confusing. The more you loose the better you'll become. God Bless

    Face it punk, Fac3 takes this one, you just one to fake the funk
    Only time people are checkin' for Diesel is at gas station pumps

    ^^^^I like this one Face, really flowed well^^^^
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  9. excedrin

    excedrin THE 8-BIT APE

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    Vote=Fac3
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  10. SwampThingSD

    SwampThingSD New Member

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    vote = fac3

    vinny - your verse was alright....no punches really stuck out at all..id hate to say that it was 100% filler and forced punches..but it was

    fac3 - not too bad...flow was hella choppy at parts for sure. the gas station line was decent. your last line about one big punch was a lie lol...maybe your other stuff is good...but cmon...really?
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    ha-haaaa New Member

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  12. Brother_Edward

    Brother_Edward Unregistered User

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    vote = fac3

    didnt like the either flow but fac3 had the better punches
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