**Vincent Lane - One Day It Will All Make Sense** (off idENTITY) prod. dskillz

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  1. Dskillz

    Dskillz aka MG The Future

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    haha @ DJcas thanks


    Rise.
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  2. J High

    J High **He's Still Got It**

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    beat is nice, emotion is nice, delivery is pretty good too, flow is really nice on this track, the chorus is aiight, not really feelin it as much as I feel the verses....verses def make this track what it is, if the chorus was a bit more then I would def download this....stay up
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  3. Vincent Lane

    Vincent Lane hip-hop simon cowell

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    thanks for the feed, i just hit ur shit

    i guess every thinks the hook is lacking, i honestly thought the hook would drive this song

    this is why i like getting feed back, how bout this, im getting love from Rm, never thoguht the day would come, but i fuck with RM for real,im here to stay........i love giving feed and getting solid critiques
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  4. Nick HaTT

    Nick HaTT New Member

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    this is ill..

    btw thanks for the love ..

    yeah that beat is on another level..
    the lyrics are that real talk ..
    definitaly feelin that ..
    word.. one day fam, lol.. stay up though, holla @ me somtime, i just sent u a comment the other day
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  5. Vincent Lane

    Vincent Lane hip-hop simon cowell

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    a comment, on what, the spizzle?
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  6. killa_bone

    killa_bone New Member

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    returning feed, thanks for that btw. Yeah im feeling this a lot, very nice indeed, prob gno download this, it grows on your really quick - very smooth shit, lovely beat, cool lyrics and flow. nice confident laid back delivered but deep. good stuff man.
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  7. Vincent Lane

    Vincent Lane hip-hop simon cowell

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    no doubt, good look fam!
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  8. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    thx on the feed yheah u should drop on that open verse cuzzin liked that new banga u got all was hot but this 1 here was on point fits beat perfect emotion was there keep em bangin and hit me back when u drop ur verse na mean -1
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  9. Dskillz

    Dskillz aka MG The Future

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  10. Cee YunG

    Cee YunG Legendary Status

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    alright listening.

    yeah this beat i'm feelin it. On some underground shit of course.

    Production:

    the production is Hot. studio quality. The vocals were exactly right on the volume part of it. The beat is hot. im feelin this kinda shit. And it' fits the topic perfectly. again quality is perfect. everything is on point

    production i give 9.7/10

    vocals

    YEAH this is some fuckin HOT SHIT. something i'd listen too when i'm blazed or when im layin down. because thats when i actually sit down and listen to lyrics in tracks. But yeah the vocals. DAMN the lyrics is Hot B and thats truth i love this topic. Imma be bumpin thjis for a while and thats whats good. the flow is on point. everything is on point

    vocals. 9.4/10

    this is a hot track. shit keep this shit up. I like hearing this kind of shit you know. mad props

    -Kon
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  11. Telling The Truth

    Telling The Truth DL My New CD

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    Im loving the beat. The whole track is ill. Im going to have to download it.

    Peace CP Sick
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  12. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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    listening... cool beat tight flow qualitys good not perfect but still good... nice emotion on this track, i like the chorus fits well.. second verse is cool stays on point... third verse a little bit more mellow but fits... yea overall this was a dope track... good shit havent heard anything from you in a minute, good to see your still goin... stay up...
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  13. Yung Keyz -3rd-

    Yung Keyz -3rd- R3 General

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    my man Vinny... chea! keep rockin

    Lore
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  14. Sick-Sense

    Sick-Sense the muthafin ruggratt!

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    im feeling it.

    the beat seats it off nicely. the lyrics are undeniably dope. it's not just straight deep, but you worded it nice. flows coo. the only thing im not really feeling is the chorus - it's definately going to have to grow. i actually think it's just the adlibs that clashes it.

    i really fucks with "give me a reason" - that jawn is fire my dude.

    keep making the real music. as soon as i saw what you're trying to do, i had to stop by and listen.
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  15. Vincent Lane

    Vincent Lane hip-hop simon cowell

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    good look kon.............ima be posting more in the coming weeks, also will post the album too

    aight cp, yeah i was diggin ur shit too, ur voice is ill


    thanks und..........

    thats real talk..............thanks, yeah i guess the consensus is the hook coulda been a bit better, thats good looks people

    and about give me a reason, i personally didnt think cats would feel that shit too too much, so i didnt even put that on the album.........i hope yall all like the album, cause im here to stay and yall gone have to get used to me

    dawg, i wouldnt mind hearing ur shit, ima look ofr one of ur threads..........

    (i see u too keyz, i aint even start writing for that jordan track, but i will soon, been busy with album promotion dawgy)
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  16. DavenportRepper

    DavenportRepper New Member

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    lryics are real good man, flows on point. enough said.. good music man
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  17. Vincent Lane

    Vincent Lane hip-hop simon cowell

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    good look mayne



    i was wondering how long it would take till i got me a hater........GOT ONE
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  18. Yung Keyz -3rd-

    Yung Keyz -3rd- R3 General

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    do what u do homie.. nothin but time.. i was taught.. can't rush perfection ;)

    holla at ya dude
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  19. Vincent Lane

    Vincent Lane hip-hop simon cowell

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    yessssssssssssssssssir
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  20. Amaze-UN

    Amaze-UN New Member

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    Listening...

    Dope hook, simple and to the point.

    The beat is good, seems like there's something missing, maybe somethine melodic.

    The first verse is sick, you drew a vivid picture at the same time spoke to the audience rhetorically.

    Second verse is real talk about this game.

    Third verse I was expecting more, but it was still dope.

    Overall, it's a peace track. I'm glad I check it out. NC got some spitters. Holla back.
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