VFTT RD2: retulen reactus \/ akademik

verses due 11:59pm eastern Tuesday
votes due 11:59am Saturday

topics

write a topical piece on one of the 5 topics shown here

1- hip-hop
2- eating disorder
3- the 4 seasons
4- study hall
5- joe millionaire

::line limit::

20 bars min :: 40 bars max

no more no less

there will be no extensions, bitching, or bull shit tolerated

if you want to win and think you can win, show up on time, follw the rules, and post a quotable verse

good luck to everyone​

hmm
i dont know which topic ill be using yet.

nor do i

eatin disorter





first 4 lines
and last 2 (the ones in bold) are very important

Looking deceptive my eyes gaze into my eyes direction
through times of correction i ponder if theres connection
I touch the mirror, the mirror touches me, how could this be
Are we part of eachother's anotomy, or is this just another tease
Preferbly, Ashley tells me to stop what im doin and come eat
"Am I fat" i ask? Sarah Lee please, you 5'7 and weigh 70
The table is set for dinner lit, but morsefully i wanted to skip it
Jenny said, cheerleaders are supposed to model a skinny fit
the turkey, and roast where layed, as we prepared a toast
I changed the subject though, hey sis, you think i can fit into ur clothes?
She nodded Sarah your 15, Im only eleven.................."so?"
After supper, lead to one question after another
Whispers cluster, she needs some help said mother
What where they talking about, i wanted to shout out loud
But kept my mouth shut, as if I where Nimrod in a clout
Hey daddy, what did mommy say? what is about me?
uh yes sweetie, we think you need some..well just try to eat
Oh, in the case, me and amber are gonna to the mall today
Im gonna try on some clothes, for my new pant size Ok?
She's Lost 30 pounds In 2 months tim, dont you see anything wrong
There has to be a reason why her and food, dont seem to get along
I know she needs some help, but Look at her she's delt
With far greater obscticles with her health
At age six, she put down the barbie shit, tried to commit suicide
Played with knifes, and with all the blood loss she almost died that night
I know I know, but these teenage years are cold
It's all about the perfect body....and the rest thats told
The next morning, I woke my daughter and said lets go
Pack your bags and importants....just take it slow though
Your not gonna be back for a while, she looked at me in denile
Your sending my away? Only until you get better I smiled
Get better from what daddy, whats wrong with me
Well incase you havet looked latley..you have a eatin disablility
I got the key's opened my jeep, kissed my wife goodbye
Lay my head against the steering wheel, and started to cry
"It'll be alright, she sighed..I hope so sarah i reall do
I just want you to know, that all we've beeen through I love you
The gate closed.. I waved...please honey it's for your best
Digest what your told to digest and..well you know the rest

I got home, after eating a huge breakfest I was exploited
Bending over in the bathroom...puking...into...the toilet...

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retulen wins...