Vengeance VS 5 Starre

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  1. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    10-20 lines
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  2. 5 Starre

    5 Starre Big Jaw Entertainemnt

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    3 - 0 KO
    5 to win
    no crew, hate, swayed, dick riddin votes
    150 posts to vote
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  3. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    ima post tommorow...doin 16-20

    good luck
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  4. 5 Starre

    5 Starre Big Jaw Entertainemnt

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    this kids been torn so much...in order to rip him i gotta unearth his body//
    hes only 14..still puts candles on his cake at his Birthday Party//
    Ok lil Ven..its time for school so make sure you kiss mommy goodbye//
    dont wanna make her mad or she wont tuck you in..and sing your lulabye//
    your mom said you were an accident, your existance fits you..it dumb luck//
    you joined a crew to feel cool, maybe get some bitches but..your 2 young to fuck//
    kid claims he hot, claims hes nice...i ripped u apart 3 times in Open Mic//
    8K posts, startin online beefs...seriously its time for you to get a life//
    y hate me..dont i love you..dont you love me..isnt that what your learning from Barney?//
    u still watch that shit wit the lil pal, while im out wit da big boyz, drunk off some Bracardi//
    this kids still a minor, im 20..if i hit u wit too many punchlines it could be a crime//
    why am i even battlin you..so young im surprised they already taught u how ta rhyme//
    how can you be gangsta..i saw u the otha day..a passenger in moms mini van//
    not the only thing mini bout u..your a child..havnt hit puberty..n go to mini camp//
    and kid dont bore me with you verse..i dont wanna see any more of those whack lines//
    ya couldnt even post by tonight, ya ma made you go to bed cuz it was past nine//

    there ya go lil man, read up n rip ur shit
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  5. *Da FuTuRe*

    *Da FuTuRe* ReCoRd 10-1(4 k.o's)

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    lmao nice starre
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  6. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    at school now, ima post up later today...and future, dont clog the thread yet, sir
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  7. Infonation

    Infonation Info for the Nation

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    Vengence is at school now, that's kinda ironic.
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  8. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    ^kind of..

    anway bout to post
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  9. Willy LongJohn

    Willy LongJohn The Text Jesus

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    5's verse was horrible....
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  10. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    i hate to do this, and by this i mean, argue with a fool
    "you know your'e a newbie if.." he broke the first 3 rules
    let me tell you now, shitty open mic disses don't bring net fame
    this is strike three against you, get outta the game
    why is it, when i talk on battles, you start to fall back
    and why do all your "disses" remind me of eminem tracks?
    he records in a studio! he MUST be the best!
    but if i audio dissed him, he'd reply with text
    he gets pissed over the net, his heart is fragile
    he's 20 years old... and he still text battles
    i've KO'd him twice, and he still pops shit
    ...not to mention he reps a label that dont exist
    dissing someone doesnt qualify them as "ripped"
    check the dictionary...or just check look at this
    simple rhymes flood ya vocab, ya style lacks spine
    i remember the first time you peeped my text
    "vengeance i wanna collab wit you sometime"
    and i can see the outcome of this, another open mic "diss"
    and we'll battle again, and for the 4th time, you can lose to a "kid"

    and yeah, i did have to go to sleep last night
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  11. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    i didnt drop too good of a verse..

    uppin anyway
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  12. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    and dont hate on my moms mini van
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  13. White-Eyez

    White-Eyez Breed of iLLness

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    vote- vengeance

    vengeance- had nice punches, personals could have been better, nice flow overall 8.0/10

    5starre- lines were a lil strecthed,, flow was alright but i didnt feel ya punches 7.0
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  14. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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  15. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    this kid fucking sucks
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  16. Dizasta_HHW

    Dizasta_HHW The Horror

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    Vote=5 Starre

    This battle was pretty close. I gotta go wit 5 Star tho. His personals and punches seemed to hit harder to me. Vengeance had better flow, but just couldn't overwhelm him wit punches. If Vengaence would have gone on longer, he might have edged up on him. But as it stands, I think 5 Star was the better man in this battle.

    Return the favor - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=585822

    Ill battle ya'll, keep doin ya thing...
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  17. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    ^idiot, and 20 lines was the max
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  18. natural high

    natural high my little eye

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    vengeance had nice punches and consistant flow...some good wordplay..all in all this was a pretty good verse

    5 starre u need to work on ur flow..it was horrible...eh punches were weak n so was wordplay..keep elevating

    vote: vengeance
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  19. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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  20. Your Phobia

    Your Phobia aka frank dot

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    i don't have to compare them lines because 5's were completely whacked man... you suck! as for ven, i have seen you come harder then this and now i see why you didn't come harder! so my....

    Vote=Ven
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