***update On The Storybook Series***

Discussion in 'Writer's Block' started by UFO the Phoenix, Oct 6, 2004.

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  1. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    **new Update**

    CHECK YOUR MAILBOX FOR THE 3 DIFFERENT TOPICS

    pick one and email me back your vote....dont post the topics in here...lets keep everything on the downlow until we set it off

    get at me

    I want all votes no later then Oct 16 (because DaJackal will start us out on Oct 17-23)...want to give him a full week to write...he'll post no later then Oct 23....and then the next poet takes the next week and so on and so on

    this is gonna be tight





    AND IF SOMEONE DOESNT MAKE IT OR IS A NO SHOW FOR WHATEVER REASON WE HAVE ALLNAKEY TO BE OUR BACK UP POET
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  2. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    I DID this is definitely going to be some interesting stuff man I can't wait....
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  3. 6ftground

    6ftground BLACKACE/GRIMREADER

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    Hell YEah!!!
    It's on.......
    A we all need to chip in and get this published when we're finished 4ril....
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  4. MC Radical

    MC Radical twitter.com/TheLastHero69

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    I'm still a little confused on the picked topic from the 3?
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  5. allnakey

    allnakey Sex is no fun by yourself

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    moving this to the intercourse
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  6. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    good deal

    Check yo emails for updates....hit me up for any questions


    lets set this off

    Good luck DaJackle....start us out
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  7. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

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    ok im lookin forward to this, mos def feelin the topic, this should be good.
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  8. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    anyone seen DaJackle?
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  9. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    i'm here, where do i post the thing?
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  10. DaJackle

    DaJackle ThoughtS ProcessinG

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    I don't know where to post this...so i'll post it here...
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    The ocean was angry that evening
    her roar whipped lightning chains
    chipped the veins of my ship
    clipped the dreams of my crew
    and the black wings of death rose from beneath
    the boiling blood of her under water currents
    while torrents of mermaid manifest before my eyes
    carressing my cheeks with rough, rigid palms
    until the salty winds gave me a breath of rebirth
    coughing watered lungs and loneliness tamed heart
    fooled my eyes to dilate with fear
    until my senses revived the feelings in my body
    and reality came back to me like a baby's first vision
    after swimming the harsh sea of its mother's womb

    Illusion soon eluded my third eye
    the sun's glares tricked my pupils with mirages
    day after day
    while time froze for me, i see ships fly into my hands
    when a shiny object blinded my dreamful eyes from the horizon
    a bottled ship, inside
    with a golden pen
    and a starched papyrus

    The cork was moldy and damped
    i opened the bottle and retrieved the pen
    gazing it behind the sillohuette of the dying sun
    freedom lies in its tip
    bleeding black blood but red on the papyrus
    I spit rescue and help like a lost child
    and spoke my dreams and visions within the barrier of starch
    as each letter changed race from black to crimson red
    as though each words were scorching on fire
    dancing its own rhythem manipulating the clouds

    the heavy air flew the papyrus out of my hands
    out to the darken nimbus, dancing with the wind
    till a switf lightning crashed the edges
    lighting it on fire
    It must have been the sirens singing to my brain
    as though the squared earth was spinning in circles
    and time has a wish of dying young
    while the rapid movement made my blood rushed
    till i collapse letting go of my hopes

    when i came about
    hell sounds like a busy market street
    foot steps every where with wild chatters and screams for deals
    my head was spinning inside out
    with the hard golden pen in my hand
    with the papyrus blank and clean
    with my face confused and sick
    when i stood up, a gust came like a rushing crowd
    making my treasure fly into the busy street
    "Get out of the way!" a cart driver yell
    losing sight of my saviors
    but
    gaining my freedom
    and another chance
    to live
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  11. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

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    okay, so whens my due date now? a week for his drop right?
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  12. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    ^Week 02 (Oct 24-30)-Poetickz

    woooord up....post chapter 2 on Oct 30 (this saturday....good luck....be creative take it where ever you want)
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  13. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

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    ok its posted, my apologies not doing it on sat, but family comes first right now. i thinkk yall will like this though. its got a nice twist to it, it gives the next writer to continue, some good ideas could be brought of followin this. apologies again.
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  14. Sole Sovereign

    Sole Sovereign Hungry But Never Starving

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    I emailed RealMS and asked to switch weeks since i'll be out of town. I don't know if she'll receive it, but i'll try to pm her on here too. I told her she could reply here or in that email and that i'm sure you wouldn't care UFO
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  15. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    if its cool with Realms then its cool with me....do yo thing

    I just know that one of you gotta post...if we start slacking the story will be lost

    holla
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  16. Poetickz

    Poetickz The Humble One

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    remember you always got allnakey, said somethi bout a fill in position? at least i think i remember seein that.
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  17. Sole Sovereign

    Sole Sovereign Hungry But Never Starving

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    Just waiting to hear from her
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  18. Sykda

    Sykda New Member

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    I can alwasy fill in for someone! :)...
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  19. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    ForWord!!!!!
    So sorry for not being around that often, but I'm still in this. And I tried emailing you but aol, well you know the rep it has, it said your account wasn't known. I couldn't PM you either, so I just wanna let you now (tho today is the last day) that it is cool with me. I'll be out of town that week 21-27 as well but if its possible I may have someone post my part for me. Thanks, and take care.
    -Much Love

    -and ain't no one taking my place, so back up! lol jp
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  20. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    ^LMAO!!!!

    thanks Realms for checking in and letting us know the status

    aight ForWord you have the OK to post ch 3 on sunday....drop it

    lets keep this moving ya'll
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