Until I Die (Sample) **Drop Links!!**

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by kaveh, Jul 31, 2005.

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  1. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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  2. E_Spangler

    E_Spangler GHOstBuStaH

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    returnin the fav-

    beats pretty strate....i can barely hear the hook on lo fi....flow is ok, u need ride the beat better.....delivery is aight....lyrics are aight from what i could hear, vocals are too low it seems...overall, this is a pretty decent sample....u gots room to improve homey....keep spittin....oh yeah, are u persian?...just wonderin cuz of ur alias and light accent....peace
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  3. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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    haha yeh im persian.. ima upload a better version soon tho, i Re-recorded.. that one is pretty trash compared to this other one lol.. thanks for the feed!
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  4. exothermic

    exothermic Well-Known Member

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    i think this the first time hearing ya

    listening...

    beats cool..... qualitys iight.... its clean atleast....flows cool.. delivery amm too white sounding for me but yeh could sound dope if u polished it up.... like u wana make us feal ur pain alil more in ur delivery for this typa track.. hooks is only iight yeh wana rewrite that not too catchy or nething.... other than the hook this is a cool little sample


    return feedback plz
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12373812#post12373812
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  5. kaveh

    kaveh New Member

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    no doubt, thanks for the feed

    got the link now
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