Ugly

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  1. Poetic Pain

    Poetic Pain I Am Hip Hop

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    Ugly

    Ugly, Ugly, and damn you Ugly
    Thats all I have been hearing my whole life
    These simple words cause me so much pain and strife
    I hate what I see in the mirror
    My reflection hates me back
    Girls ask me why you so damn black
    I will never be considered cute or fine
    I just know the letters U.G.L.Y really mess with my mind
    This one word has broken my heart in more than one way
    Every morning I wonder if I will get called ugly today
    This word has killed my confidence
    I can never ask a girl out
    Cause my low confidence always makes me feel down and out
    Besides I'm usually the ugliest in the room
    I once had a girl tell me I look like a racoon
    All these put downs make me feel like I ain't shit
    I'm startin to think, maybe their right
    Sometimes I have to cry myself to sleep at night
    Girls treat me like I got a disease
    Situations like these never let my mind be at ease
    So I'll probably be alone for the rest of my life
    Because the word ugly has killed my confidence, and gives me pain and strife
    I'm ugly
    test
  2. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    I DONT THINK I HAVE EVER READ ANY OF YOUR PIECES...BUT THIS WAS STRAIGHT....

    IT WAS DEEP...

    IT STUCK TO THE TITLE AND U WROTE IT WELL

    ~BIG UPS AND KEEP WRITING~
    test
  3. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    This was YOUR own voice, YOUR own delivery, YOUR own piece for your personal use to choose to show or not to. That's what I like about this one, you said what hurt you through your life. I see that you wrote this, because they've damaged your confidence so much to the point that you, yourself think your ugly. But, I liked it for the voice, deliverance, and the personal word usages and direct lines for yourself. My blessings..
    test
  4. *GeMiNeYeZ*

    *GeMiNeYeZ* ~§¤Sweet Shinobi¤§~

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    mmm... i know the feeling all too well. great job expressing these emotions whether they be true or no, it was great.
    test
  5. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    If this is true don't even worry about it, because once you hit your early 20's things change for the better dramatically.
    test
  6. e'S

    e'S sdrowkcab mi kool

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    i agree with the root
    but
    speaking off butt
    damn either you left out something like a nut sack growing of the side of your chin or you just look like golgotha
    just joking but damn you must have just tried to look at the extremely "hot chicks"
    test
  7. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    If this is true don't even worry about it, because once you hit your early 20's things change for the better dramatically.

    yeh, i agree with this, not that im 20 yet, haha, but its true, good things take time

    i liked the first line, the best: Ugly, Ugly, and damn you Ugly
    just because.
    test
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