Discussion in 'Beats/Producers' started by LCD Beats, Oct 16, 2004.
New joint from Taping Your Mouth Ent.
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this sounds too choppy, drums are ok... but its got no real melody goin... that piano IS grimy, but its not too excitin... and anyway its too raw.. needs to be mixed better and its sounds a little empy... vocals is a nice touch tho i gotta admit.... this is nuttin special but i'll give u this its GRIMY lol
lmao we peeped each others beats at the same time
Thanks for the feedback dawg... I know my mixing is shit, lol.
sup doggy.....returnin' that love....
melody is off the chains....drums are coo...i'm def feelin that piano melody in there....bass?? lol...well, this sounds fine even without it....would've liked to have heard a little more background atmosphere wise, just to take up the stereo field, but still, no biggy....this is a good beat, i'm feelin' the mix and all...i'd love to hear this ripped to hear the outcome....
keep em comin'
Haha... the lack of bass. I purposely didn't add bass to make sure the kick stands out. There is some sub-bass in the kick though. Thanks for checkin my shit out and the input.
I agree with you, your beat is grimey in a low budget generic PC midi style sounding way.
I liked the idea of this beat with the piano melody and the voice. I think you should add some bass though and maybe rework it a little.
Aight, im peepin
Intro is nice... Piano sample is real good, guess its the reverb, but its most def grimey. Drums is on point... The first verse is kind of empty, but that wont matter when a cat is rappin over it. The chorus and the choir is the highlight of the beat... Its good, next time just have a little bit more "instrumentation".
piano is coo.. but its a lil to loud.. the other elements u throw is a coo touch.. better mixing could be done.. possibily even a break down.. the vocal vox is cool.. not bad.. but man this diffinetly needs a bassline.. to fill in the emptiness..
return when u can.. px
yeah the drums dont bang like BANG BANG. and the Snare should sound like Gunshots if you grimey. you got everything else. it just sounds kinda empty on certain parts.
this was hot tho.
i'm feelin that piano
Thanks for the responses... let's keep em coming.
BASSSSSSSSSSSLINE....and this would be fire...turn down the piano and layer that snare with another one and turn em down.....otherwise ud have a banger here
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Looks like I'ma have to add a bassline, lol
piano on this beat, got that grimey feel to it, the drums are nice on this beat, this has a real raw feel to it
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Hmm...I think i know what you were going for, but this beat is pretty boring and tiresome to me. The low piano doesnt do anything for me, the synths that come in however add a lot of nice erie atmosphere, same with the choir...word...keep at it..
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