Two classic, underground Eminem songs (which 1 is better).......

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  1. RedMaster

    RedMaster Epic Butt sucka

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    1st Track: We Shine
    Artist: Eminem, Verse One, Hush (Da Ruckus)
    Album: Off The Wall
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    Em's verse:
    My Smith and Wessen got you layin in some alley messy//
    Got your family lookin for your ass on Sally Jesse//
    We squash beef in the mo', when you ain't breathin no more//
    Leavin your skull split like Steven Seagal//
    Let the cat out, flat out, Detroit's a mad house//
    So I don't get offended when I hear my city badmouthed//
    We quick to pull the gat out and set it//
    And leave you with more shit missin than a Lil' Kim radio edit//
    Stick up kids be tryin to live paid//
    You get your grill sprayed with twenty-seven bullets in your ribcage//
    Get the guage, cock it back, empty your pockets, Jack//
    Or I'ma send you flyin like a rocketpack//
    Murder you for a bag of chips and a chocolate snack//
    Break into your crib still your shit and lock it back//
    Ten-year old kids be standin on the block with gats//
    Just for livin nowadays'll get you flocked with bats//
    Where I'm from...yaknow what'm sayin?, that's some old Detroit shit
    y'all wouldn't know about that shit, though. Less you come
    to my city, ya know what'm sayin? See where we live,
    cause we shine.....


    VERSUS......

    2nd Track: Watch Dees
    Artists: Eminem, DJ Spinna, Thirstin Howl III
    Album: DJ Spinna Presents: 'Rock' & 'Watch Dees'
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    Em's Verse:
    Who's arm is this?//
    I must have cut it off at the pharmacist//
    and refused to resume my severed prescription of Darvacets//
    I'm the old man who lives upstairs and starves his pets//
    and never leaves his house 'cause he thinks his car's possessed//
    I hate my life
    that's why I degrade my wife//
    grabbed a paper plate to make a sandwich
    and just ate the knife//
    my mother's screaming 'please heal him, take him straight to Christ'//
    meet you on the street and slap you just to break the ice//
    made a bomb threat with a fake device//
    strip you naked twice, pistol whip you and force you to take advice//
    and if you catch me bobbin' my head to some bullshit spittin'//
    I was probably just tryin to shake the lice//
    bugs fallin' out of my head
    I'm wishin' I was dead//
    while I'm crawlin out of my bed
    found it red//
    and my rash is returning//
    I feel the sensation of burning//
    occurring, usually during pain for release in my urine//
    screamin' at my shadow 'please quit followin' me'//
    these pills keep screamin' 'please quit swallowin' me'//
    the devil keeps screamin' 'please get down on one knee'//
    took the drugs before the cops ever found them on me//
    test
  2. Hardkore

    Hardkore Blunts@TheBeach

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    i've heard "watch dees" but not the other one.

    eminem had an album called "off the wall"?
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  3. ExodusIII

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    i think watch deez is actually wack

    with shit like

    grabbed a paper plate to make a sandwich
    and just ate the knife//

    he just says stupid shit for the sake of saying stupid shit without it being witty at all....if bizzare said that cats would be callin it wack

    made a bomb threat with a fake device//
    strip you naked twice, pistol whip you and force you to take advice//

    ^^ that was just plain garbage... strip u naked TWICE?? can u say forced multi syllable rhyming??... and then... force you to take advice...ummm, yeah, that was a real witty line

    and if you catch me bobbin' my head to some bullshit spittin'//
    I was probably just tryin to shake the lice//

    ^^ more stupid wack shit...

    the ending was aight tho

    but in eminems defence...this was written early in his career while his crazy lines we're still a little shaky n kinda corny...he improved greatly by the time he released sslp

    i haven't heard the 1st track but i read it n lyrically it's definitely better than his verse on watch deez


    My Smith and Wessen got you layin in some alley messy//
    Got your family lookin for your ass on Sally Jesse//
    We squash beef in the mo', when you ain't breathin no more//
    Leavin your skull split like Steven Seagal//

    ^^ that alone's better than watch deez

    i think neither of these tracks are underground classics...they're both weak imo
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  4. snowy

    snowy 39k Rap Song Music Folder

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    Dont know when it was made or where the verse is from cause im not a fanatic, but there is a song with eminem on first then one of Biggies Freestyle on second (the one where he censors himself) anyway that verse is one of my faves since it was the one that made me go out and get his other albums.
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  5. RedMaster

    RedMaster Epic Butt sucka

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    ^only track i've heard of with Em and Biggie was the 'Dead Wrong' remix, which was on the 'Off the wall' disc...
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  6. NinjaMic

    NinjaMic Brian Disease

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    I like Watch Dees better... We Shine is cool, but Watch Dees has that crazy ass grimey beat and Eminem's verse was sick. Thirstin Howl is better on it than Ruckus was on We Shine too...
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  7. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    Watch dees... not em's best but its better than we shine.
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  8. Butch Coolidge

    Butch Coolidge New Member

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    Watch Deez fo sho. That was ill
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