Triumph ***New*** Kamikaze Lyricist Solo Track ***Hot ***Drop Links***

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  1. Priceless

    Priceless Like I'm doin it for TV

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    Beat is wild... u spittin a lot slower on this than I'd expect. I don't really like ur voice man but ur flow is nice. Delivery's not bad, sounds a bit forced IMO but it's not stretched. Not feelin the hook. Track's not bad just kinda hard to get into.
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  2. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    I appreciate the feed Priceless !!!
    upped .....
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  3. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  6. illusionMH

    illusionMH New Member

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    put together letters like hang man,

    nice

    beat is ill, u got a sick flow, creativity - check - originality - check delivery - check
    quality - check


    overall dope track man...
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  7. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx illusion I appreciate the feed next time leave a link Pz

    upped ....


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  8. Mellow Madness

    Mellow Madness aKa sTaTiK

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    beat is pretty nice.. mixed poorly tho.. but besides that.. u come on this nice.. delivery on point.. a lot of quotables.. waiting for hook...

    ahh not feelin the hook.. same akward..

    turn up the beat possibily..

    keep it coming.. px.
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  9. NyceQTV

    NyceQTV Grayscale

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    beat is pretty dope....i rememebr you from that tourney i think i ran or somethin....didnt really remember what you sounded like....but im feelin this.... emotion is pretty dope, like ya style.... flow is pretty dope...quality is on point too.... i think u the cat that was in that tourney...hook was pretty well put together, like the format of it, could have been a lil better, like how it flowed into the 2nd verse.... yea this is pretty dope....beat fit your style nice.... or might have just been how u dropped ya style on this track... either way nice shit..
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  10. Tha Q.

    Tha Q. FiVe SoUrCe CeO

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    beat is fine


    not tryna sound prejudiced...but ur delivery went from Str8 to "white boy"...seriously...wassup with all these Em-ish soundin cats


    ur flow is fine though

    good rhyming


    str8 track


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  11. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  12. Mr. Hollyhood

    Mr. Hollyhood New Member

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    whoa, another sick instrumental.

    Your flow reminds me of eminem the way u came off in the first verse.

    lol@the hook


    This was dope though, what part of the country are you from?




    leave me some feed when u get the chance:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=920294
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  13. Erattic

    Erattic New Member

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    wtf... i coulda swore that i left feed on this yestrday hehe

    anyway

    flow is dope im feelen it... lyrics are cool... an agresive type aproch on this im feelen it..

    nice delivery.... yep first verse was solid... i am feelen the hook jus the first time i heard it i didnt realy no where it ended.... made it kinda weird...

    2nd verse was coo.... pretty much the same all the way thru to the end of the track...

    u did ur thing.. keep it up

    return the favour:
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=919076
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  14. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    word I'll hit them links in a minute ... thanx for listenin
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  15. SpoonFull

    SpoonFull Lovely

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    thank you for the feed daaawg. I like the idea of the beat, but i wish the drums where harder. They sound a little stiff.

    Your delivery and emotion always been sick. I like your lyrics...they got better. But your flow improved like 100%. 4 REAL, that shit sounds much doper now. I like how you pronounce your shit out instead of trying to sound hood. The hook needs to be a tad thicker IMO. I would add layers to it.

    dope fucking drop though dawg!
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  16. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx spoonful .... upped
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  19. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    bump ... drop links
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  20. Ayem

    Ayem I Heart Myself

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    flow on this is on point...u ride'n this beat real nice...

    beat sounds like it can be a lil' higher, lyrics are clear, like'n this...damn...rhyme scheme is jus come'n mo' fierce as the track progresses, u nice wit it, fa'sho...good stuff...
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