Triumph ***New*** Kamikaze Lyricist Solo Track ***Hot ***Drop Links***

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  1. Paragraaaf

    Paragraaaf New Member

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    lol...ill return the favor once the link starts workin
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  2. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    its workin I jus clicked it lol thanx though
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  3. Sun Tzu

    Sun Tzu The War is On

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    this was Ok

    nothing i'd listen to again, but not wack
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  4. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    tru thanx for the feed ....
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  5. Aramis

    Aramis That Guy

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    this was aight...the structure on this was pretty weird...i dunno why...but listening to this...everything just sounded kinda off...its not really easy on the ears...it sounds like your trying to prounce yours words a little too clear...i agree with the dude that said it sounds unnatural...i dunno kaz...wasnt feelin this one that much...i think you can do a lot better than this....just keepin it real
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  6. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  7. RichY RiCh

    RichY RiCh f.C.k 4ever

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    the begining had a doppeee wordplay/rhyme scheme

    you're flows hott as fuck, deliverys nice, only problem i got with it is pronouncing them R's so strong.. a lot of dope lyrics, "I will see war for art, and paint it" hott track... props
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  8. Battlefields

    Battlefields Swaggin' On You

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  9. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for the feed I'll hit that link in a minute...
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  10. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    upped ..............
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  11. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    to the top .......
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  12. Unfidelz

    Unfidelz Tyrannical Productions

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    Still gettin hits off of that DZK diss, eh? Shameless... Anyway, sorry, man, still not feelin your music. Your beats outdo your vocals. You sound like Eminem on crack and your bars end prematurely and awkward. Keep workin on it. Peace.
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  13. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    suck my dick .... HAHAHAHA I listened to youre audios you have no room to even speak here I'd son you you sorry ass MC hahahahahaa .... upped....
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  14. Higher Rhymes

    Higher Rhymes Active Member

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    wow man thanks for reply, returnin the favor

    i actually listened to this track twice haha

    you got a really nice flow and delivery, beat and quality as well one of the few people who can actually RHYME ON BEAT hahahaha thank you for that really hype

    good job peace easy
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  15. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for the feed ...
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  16. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    When you started spelling out your name I thought you were going to flip your name in an acronym. You didn't. Silly me.

    Your flow throughout was on point and it sounded good from a technical standpoint. None of the lines jumped out at me but you definitely are not a slouch in that department. Solid drop. I'll be looking for the next one.

    Get at me
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12434271#post12434271
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  17. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx Skillz ...
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  18. J_S_Sense

    J_S_Sense New Member

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    Flow - is straight....delivery is nice, sum nice lines in there, lyrics are nice also, Hook needs more sumwhere tho, not enough 'impact' for me, beat is also nice, nice drop....my post is fixed, peep it out, 1.
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  19. Diztinkt

    Diztinkt New Member

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    Ya Flow Was On Point Sonn,,,,shit Was Pretty Coo, Lyrics Was Just Decent Though, Hook Was Ok. Ya Style Is Kinda Choppy, You Gotta Work On Smoothing Ya Flow Out a Little Bit, But Other Than That It's Not A Bad Joint,,,Keep Doing You.
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  20. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for the feed ....
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