Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by KamikazeLyricist, Jul 30, 2005.
lol...ill return the favor once the link starts workin
its workin I jus clicked it lol thanx though
this was Ok
nothing i'd listen to again, but not wack
tru thanx for the feed ....
this was aight...the structure on this was pretty weird...i dunno why...but listening to this...everything just sounded kinda off...its not really easy on the ears...it sounds like your trying to prounce yours words a little too clear...i agree with the dude that said it sounds unnatural...i dunno kaz...wasnt feelin this one that much...i think you can do a lot better than this....just keepin it real
the begining had a doppeee wordplay/rhyme scheme
you're flows hott as fuck, deliverys nice, only problem i got with it is pronouncing them R's so strong.. a lot of dope lyrics, "I will see war for art, and paint it" hott track... props
Im feeling your flow alot shits sick, nice enunciation and delivery and nice lyrics
Qualitys ill too mang, keep doing your thing homie
thanx for the feed I'll hit that link in a minute...
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Still gettin hits off of that DZK diss, eh? Shameless... Anyway, sorry, man, still not feelin your music. Your beats outdo your vocals. You sound like Eminem on crack and your bars end prematurely and awkward. Keep workin on it. Peace.
suck my dick .... HAHAHAHA I listened to youre audios you have no room to even speak here I'd son you you sorry ass MC hahahahahaa .... upped....
wow man thanks for reply, returnin the favor
i actually listened to this track twice haha
you got a really nice flow and delivery, beat and quality as well one of the few people who can actually RHYME ON BEAT hahahaha thank you for that really hype
good job peace easy
thanx for the feed ...
When you started spelling out your name I thought you were going to flip your name in an acronym. You didn't. Silly me.
Your flow throughout was on point and it sounded good from a technical standpoint. None of the lines jumped out at me but you definitely are not a slouch in that department. Solid drop. I'll be looking for the next one.
Get at me
thanx Skillz ...
Flow - is straight....delivery is nice, sum nice lines in there, lyrics are nice also, Hook needs more sumwhere tho, not enough 'impact' for me, beat is also nice, nice drop....my post is fixed, peep it out, 1.
Ya Flow Was On Point Sonn,,,,shit Was Pretty Coo, Lyrics Was Just Decent Though, Hook Was Ok. Ya Style Is Kinda Choppy, You Gotta Work On Smoothing Ya Flow Out a Little Bit, But Other Than That It's Not A Bad Joint,,,Keep Doing You.
thanx for the feed ....
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