Triumph ***New*** Kamikaze Lyricist Solo Track ***Hot ***Drop Links***

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  1. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    upped ........ bump drop links ....
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  2. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    beats pretty hot i like it, ya vocals a little loud maybe? ya flow at first i was gonna say ehh but its pretty solid i kinda like it, but it gets ehh at the recline line cause there was to less syllables in the line, its ight tho u caught it, ya delivery is good you got nice emotion and ya presence is right, i like some ya lyrics, do ya thing homie definately stay up
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  3. ^IT^

    ^IT^ MMC

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    my --- bad for takin so long...
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    beat is nice...
    --lyrics is nice..
    flow is real good too..
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    delivery is good you got a good delivery...

    everything is good mann..
    nothins wrong with this
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  4. killa_bone

    killa_bone New Member

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    cool track. rhyme scheme is quality...
    you got a good flow, checked out some other tracks - pretty good too
    keep it up
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  5. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    word thanx for the feed ...
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  6. ceson

    ceson ....Ceson Wordz

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    quality is sick...lol...really good..i'm dyin to get mine this clear...but n e way....flow is nice...delivery is nice...lyrics is nice..voice is different then i remember but its hot tho....this is nice..a few quoteables i caught...hook is ight..didnt catch it the first time but got the at the end...nothin really bad bout this track...nice...props on it...

    returned the veiw......
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  7. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for the feed ceson ....
    upped ......Drop feed and links ......
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  8. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  9. TheoReTiKaL

    TheoReTiKaL New Member

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    RETURNIN THE FAVOR............

    iunno, ya voice is not too much to my liking.... but this is kinda coo

    beat is pretty cracc, ya flo is good... lyrics is pretty coo man, ya mechanics is pretty good wit pronunciation n all..

    hook is not that tiite 2 c honest...

    overall, pretty coo tracc man, keep at it

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  10. Lenny Blaze

    Lenny Blaze New Member

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    listenin

    the beats nice, flow was pretty good and so was the lyrics, hook is decent maybe a lil more work, quality is good, overall it was good stuff just need better chorus, overall 8/10

    hit me back man
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=915584
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  11. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    yo this shit was pretty hot, I like how you started it out. I never peeped you before...but I'm impressed. I like that breathe part, yea you got ya style onpoint...My only complaint is the hook...Iono it's not bad, but it didn't really hit me hard you know? Besides that, this was a good listen...keep doing ya thing
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  12. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    Thanx Non$en$e I appreciate the feed .... upped
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  13. toos00

    toos00 New Member

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    The beat is tight, and your voice goes well with it.
    lyrics are pretty good.
    You ride the beat well also.
    overal nice track.
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  14. toos00

    toos00 New Member

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    The beat is tight and your voice goes well with it.
    You rode the beat well.
    Lyrics were on point.
    overal nice track.
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  15. toos00

    toos00 New Member

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    The beat is tight and your voice goes well with it.
    lyrics were on point
    good voice
    overal good track
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  16. toos00

    toos00 New Member

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    my bad I didnt think my post were working
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  17. Jkies1

    Jkies1 New Member

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    on that one part where you start off as "i am a leader..."
    reminds me a lot of eminem on Go To Sleep...

    I like it overall, chorus is decent, flow is pretty nice and such and such
    I'd give it a 6-7
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  18. Bad News™

    Bad News™ Bred.

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    sup my ³³³³³ kaz?
    damn...this beat is fire...WOOOOOOOOh
    u came in dope, realyl coming off dope on here, u changed ur style a bit,
    smoother, the rhyme sceme is nice mannnn, this verse is hot
    lucifer dad, im hell raisin....feeling this hook, that shit raw
    2nd verse, same shit as the 1st verse,felt th 1st a bit more,like u was 4'6 and i was 6'5.. feeling the whole track...
    this shit serious
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  19. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    yo thanx man stay up Pz
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  20. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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