Triumph ***New*** Kamikaze Lyricist Solo Track ***Hot ***Drop Links***

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  1. Dockz

    Dockz (- -)

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    ain't feelin kamikazee, sounds like a white eminem with weak passion n no lyrics, everyone else on your page comes real hot....good drops fellas
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  2. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    ya suck my dick you sorry ass fag...
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  3. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    -"I aint mad though I feel marvelous "
    JadaKiss lol
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  4. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    aint Eminem White NEways hahahahahahahaha thats my last response for real lmao
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  5. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    upped.................................
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  6. Act Shun

    Act Shun New Member

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    Nice, except you have that 'white' accent making the R's prominent..any ways 7/10.
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  7. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    ur sick son, i'm feelin this shit

    i like ur delivery, how u increase the energy and shit, good shit


    rhyme scheme is sickness


    good shit


    feelin this


    vocals sound a little too high for the beat tho



    check out my new shit when u got some time son


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=914346

    "Its Been a Long Time" ft Storz and Celph Centered
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  8. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    yo good look on the feed ....
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  9. FinesseNYC

    FinesseNYC FinessetheGreat

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    flows aight...its straight basically. lyrics are good...its different. not my cup of tea, but its still nice.
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  10. Dmista

    Dmista I Jack Beats cuz im BROKE

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    The beats pretty crazy

    your flows hot man, deliverys sweet, nice lines and some quoteables in this, pretty good.

    Im really not feeling the hook though, but overall this is pretty damn good
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  11. SKAVENJAH

    SKAVENJAH New Member

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    ok blazin and blazin it ...... this is dopeness....downloadin this madness..... i like when you shout out k a m i k a z e l y r i c i s t during rhyme....sounds sick!

    dope dun
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  12. Richie Griffin

    Richie Griffin Alcoholic Surgeon

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    i like the beat...you flo is working but the way your enunciating isnt really what im looking for...the lyrics are nice though...not exactly feelin the chorus...the hellraisin sounds slight korny to me...and the q1uality is a little below what it should be...but i like the verse there working for this nice....good shit bro
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  13. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx
    upped ...........
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  14. skipmartin

    skipmartin Real Soulful NC Hip Hop

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    the first thing I noticed about this track was that the hi's sound a little bit loud to me, the "s" got a lil too much zing on 'em. The vocals levels sound fine as far as I can tell. They could go down a little bit, but they sound good where they at. The beat is real krunk. Diggin the violins on the track. This is a dope drop over. 9.1 outta 10. Keep up the hustle.

    S. Boogie
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  15. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx yo and ya I gotta turn down the vocals ...
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  16. Vise

    Vise Ya Tu Sabes

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    been a minute since i checked out an audio of yours, lets see whats good with you these days....beat is cool, the flow sounds nice on this... the vocals do sound a lil too high, but shit ain't a bad look at all. rhyme scheme is pretty nice. got some nice multi syllables in this.... keep spittin



    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=912687

    ^^return that, 1
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  17. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for the feed I'll hit that in a minute ....
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  18. Neruk

    Neruk Runky Runky

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    yo this is tight man, beat is sickness.. im really feelin your flow and delivery, good hyped shit.. the chorus is alright thou.. but dosnt take away from the fact that this is good shit.. nice stuff you got man
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  19. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    thanx for listenin ....
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  20. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    listening.......the beat is gully im feeling the joint...ya flow is reallll polished one of the better one's i've heard on...i'm really feeling this man..9/10
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