Tourney: Kill or be Killed: solutions VS Drinking Sucks

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  1. Un-SeeN

    Un-SeeN MIC IMMORTAL

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    Verses:

    - Matches will be posted Wednesday (6-25-03)
    - Verses will be due Friday (6-27-03) before midnight.

    - battle verses will be 10 bars, no more no less... 1 bar under or over the limit will activate a DQ.


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  2. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    checkin in and dropping... i got bored

    ill edit it back in once you drop
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  3. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    Ill beat u quick, with out delays
    ull need the full extent
    just so u have time to search & flip more cliches
    i say, ill take this battle for what its worth
    and pass through LA
    faster then Manic Ds family movin up North
    shoulda been aborted at birth, village idiot
    watch u perform live
    ur a spitting image... of shit
    whats with it? i watched as u fell
    i thought u held guns?
    but it seems like Tek handled u in the RSTL
    got a Ace up ur sleeve kid? ima expose this bore
    cause from what ive heard
    ur nothin but a Queen behind closed doors

    try to drop tomorrow, goodluck
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  4. ShockMania

    ShockMania RSTL CHAMP

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    i wanna recycle sum lines from my last battle coz it no showed...coz im mad low on time..i only mean 1 or 2 lines..

    lemme know
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  5. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    tis cool
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  6. ShockMania

    ShockMania RSTL CHAMP

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    Ds'll bring forced punches..and whack rhymes i bet..
    followed by the 'shock' disses..he used last time we met..
    btw..i've thanked kaleef endless times..
    puttin me against you in rbl..i never knew he was a friend of mine..
    drinkin sucks? i'll try this fag for size n'..
    the herb joined milita..goodluck in advertisement..
    im'a use one syllable rhymin..like ds's ghost writer..
    im oon the road to success..and i dont take hitch hikers..
    thas why ya dont flow^^..ya rhymes are jus normal cousin..
    on his pic he got his hood up inside..coz there's always a storm above him..

    rushed..but im low on time

    goodluck
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  7. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    DS - wasn't a real strong verse. flow wasn't there all the time, and some disses weren't as hard hitting as expected...i didn't like how you did that abb style, or whatever they call it. stick to ab ab ab shit .. normal shit...haha

    Shock - had some decent disses, but it was very comedic. opener was nice btw, and that kaleef line had me laughing..overall, not bad man..

    vote - Shock
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  8. Residual

    Residual I'm Gay

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    hmm well...

    DS, of the past few verses I read of yours, I aint' been too impressed dude. You dropped flames on me man, but as of lately, stuff's been lackin'. Ya verse was ok...

    highlights to me:

    i say, ill take this battle for what its worth
    and pass through LA
    faster then Manic Ds family movin up North

    ``that's aight, pretty cooL``

    whats with it? i watched as u fell
    i thought u held guns?
    but it seems like Tek handled u in the RSTL

    ``cool, there's a solid line``

    got a Ace up ur sleeve kid? ima expose this bore
    cause from what ive heard
    ur nothin but a Queen behind closed doors

    ``yeah, that's aight closer, i see where ya goin', above average IMO``

    Decent verse, one of the better ones I peeped of you.


    Shock...verse was aight, you said you was short on time, kind of showed in ya verse dude. I know you elevated a lot in the past 6 months or so.

    highlights to me:

    Ds'll bring forced punches..and whack rhymes i bet..
    followed by the 'shock' disses..he used last time we met..

    ``haha, coo``

    drinkin sucks? i'll try this fag for size n'..
    the herb joined milita..goodluck in advertisement..

    ``yeah, that's aight...feelin' it a bit``

    eh...that's material i thought was pretty coo...um after that, kind of got shaky. Road to success lines don't impress unless they flipped mad nice, closer was mediocre.

    Close match up, peepworthy I'd say. Both had a few lines, DS prolly had punch of the battle, shock had the personal advantage IMO.

    Uh...hard to call for me, I'm gonna vote on this one 'cause it's the best battle in this tourney I seen so far...an' well, I'm gonna give the nod to Drinking Sucks by a bit here. Close match.

    VOTE=DS barely
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  9. Un-SeeN

    Un-SeeN MIC IMMORTAL

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    votein ends today at 10pm est.
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  10. -Punchline-

    -Punchline- New Member

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    ShockMania:

    Ds'll bring forced punches..and whack rhymes i bet..
    followed by the 'shock' disses..he used last time we met..(lol)
    btw..i've thanked kaleef endless times..
    puttin me against you in rbl..i never knew he was a friend of mine..(cool)
    drinkin sucks? i'll try this fag for size n'..
    the herb joined milita..goodluck in advertisement..(lmao)
    im'a use one syllable rhymin..like ds's ghost writer..
    im oon the road to success..and i dont take hitch hikers..(haha)
    thas why ya dont flow^^..ya rhymes are jus normal cousin..
    on his pic he got his hood up inside..coz there's always a storm above him..(nice ending)

    the verse had some good punches and personals..I liked the flow..and overall the verse was straight for a battle verse..

    8.4/10 blood drops


    DS:

    Ill beat u quick, with out delays
    ull need the full extent
    just so u have time to search & flip more cliches
    i say, ill take this battle for what its worth
    and pass through LA
    faster then Manic Ds family movin up North(lol)
    shoulda been aborted at birth, village idiot
    watch u perform live
    ur a spitting image... of shit(aight)
    whats with it? i watched as u fell
    i thought u held guns?
    but it seems like Tek handled u in the RSTL(nice)
    got a Ace up ur sleeve kid? ima expose this bore
    cause from what ive heard
    ur nothin but a Queen behind closed doors(decent ending)

    i didnt like how u opened up the rhyme but the flow and the punches were cool after the first two lines...I liked how the verse was set-up...had some creativity...nice verse..

    8.3/10 blood drops

    this one was close...

    vote: shock(by a inch)
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  11. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    damn, i really wish this could have got more votes.. it was a cool battle

    goodluck with DH shock, fuck em up
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  12. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    lol @ fuck em up

    guess its clear who he wants to win
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  13. ShockMania

    ShockMania RSTL CHAMP

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    i guess this is over now then..

    we gotta battle again soon drinkin..this didnt get enuff votes..
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  14. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    i know, i was upset, i thought voting might of ended too soon. but its chill.

    DH im just jokin mayne.
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  15. Un-SeeN

    Un-SeeN MIC IMMORTAL

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    this battle didnt get enough votes - votin will end monday 6-30-03 3pm est
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  16. castro'DAMUS

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    Vote: Shock

    Better verse, both had different styles that both worked, shock I felt had more hard hitting punches that connected more so then DS's shit. nice battle but shock got this win...not easily though.
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  17. Supaman_EBT

    Supaman_EBT Don't Call It a Comeback.

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    DS - nothin personal but I HATE that style..It didn't flow well through the whole verse, the punches..I was honestly excpecting something more hard hitting..they weren't bad tho. coulda been better

    fav. lines
    whats with it? i watched as u fell
    i thought u held guns?
    but it seems like Tek handled u in the RSTL

    Shock - nice verse. The punches were pretty good and it flowed better. The Kaleef line was nice.

    fav. lines
    btw..i've thanked kaleef endless times..
    puttin me against you in rbl..i never knew he was a friend of mine..

    vote - Shock
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  18. cliche

    cliche New Member

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  19. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    DS

    Ill beat u quick, with out delays
    ull need the full extent
    just so u have time to search & flip more cliches
    ok
    i say, ill take this battle for what its worth
    and pass through LA
    faster then Manic Ds family movin up North
    lol, ok
    shoulda been aborted at birth, village idiot
    watch u perform live
    ur a spitting image... of shit
    umm...ok
    whats with it? i watched as u fell
    i thought u held guns?
    but it seems like Tek handled u in the RSTL
    lol, nice
    got a Ace up ur sleeve kid? ima expose this bore
    cause from what ive heard
    ur nothin but a Queen behind closed doors
    decent closer

    Shock

    Ds'll bring forced punches..and whack rhymes i bet..
    followed by the 'shock' disses..he used last time we met..
    decent opener
    btw..i've thanked kaleef endless times..
    puttin me against you in rbl..i never knew he was a friend of mine..
    haha...nice
    drinkin sucks? i'll try this fag for size n'..
    the herb joined milita..goodluck in advertisement..
    lol, nice
    im'a use one syllable rhymin..like ds's ghost writer..
    im oon the road to success..and i dont take hitch hikers..
    lol, ok
    thas why ya dont flow^^..ya rhymes are jus normal cousin..
    on his pic he got his hood up inside..coz there's always a storm above him..
    haha, nice ender

    DS-u had a pretty good verse....some pretty funny punches, and a nice flow

    Shock-nice verse, some funny punches, and also a good flow...

    this was a really close battle, but shock edged it out with his punches...

    vote-shock
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  20. White-Eyez

    White-Eyez Breed of iLLness

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    shock- nice verse, flow was good punches were solid, creativity and personals could have beeen better, mutlies were ontact overall a
    good verse 9/10

    ds- had some nice punches, flow was nice, personals and the creatvity of your pucnhes is what you where lacking.. not a bad verse i just thought shock came better
    8/10
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