Tourney: Kill or be Killed: Ninth Wonder VS Dis-Honour

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  1. Un-SeeN

    Un-SeeN MIC IMMORTAL

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    Tourney: Kill or be Killed: Ninth Wonder VS Dis-Honor

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    - Matches will be posted Sunday (6-22-03) night.
    - Verses will be due 5pm estern time Tuesday (6-24-03)

    - battle verses will be 10 bars, no more no less... 1 bar under or over the limit will activate a DQ.


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  2. Ninth Wonder

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  4. castro'DAMUS

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    Shit, im destroying him dead
    especially when,
    his verses are the first fuckin word that I said
    He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
    so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment
    RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
    no matter how hard you try,
    battling me, kid your outta league like IV
    ‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
    easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
    but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead
    Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
    but im like naw,
    he just likes peepin the other dudes pic
    Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
    ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall


    Stay at your level aka dont play off my verse, thanks ever so much
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  5. Calculus

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    Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
    The reason?
    Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self
    Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
    When claimin you bang with thugs…
    ……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely
    On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
    That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
    ………………………it was one of your favorite moments
    I’ll win this fast,
    So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
    Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle
    And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
    You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms
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  6. cliche

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    vote 9th..

    shit was clear that 9th wanted this, came harder at DH and more creative punches and word play with cool flow.

    DH had a good verse, i didnt think 9th would top it till he dropped, he lacked alittle bit in his verse which was the downfall

    vote on me vs monster
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  7. Strike2

    Strike2 Man Meets Creator

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    well I actualy saw it different...iono if this ell count..cuz me and diss is fam...but I am pretty coo with both... let me break it down..



    Shit, im destroying him dead
    especially when,
    his verses are the first fuckin word that I said

    pretty creative..nice..

    He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
    so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment


    concernin the first line..makin a real verse pretty nice


    RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
    no matter how hard you try,
    battling me, kid your outta league like IV

    ok line..

    ‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
    easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
    but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead

    kinda played concept..

    Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
    but im like naw,
    he just likes peepin the other dudes pic

    lol nice line...

    Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
    ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall

    pretty coo line..

    Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
    The reason?
    Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self

    hmmm ionooo

    Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
    When claimin you bang with thugs…
    ……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely

    lol ok line...

    On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
    That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
    ………………………it was one of your favorite moments

    coo line

    I’ll win this fast,
    So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
    Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle

    naw...

    And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
    You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms

    pretty coo line...

    I jus felt dissy came harder..not that much better...
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  8. -Punchline-

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    DH's verse:

    Shit, im destroying him dead
    especially when,
    his verses are the first fuckin word that I said(nice)
    He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
    so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment(coo)
    RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
    no matter how hard you try,
    battling me, kid your outta league like IV(nice)
    ‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
    easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,(nice)
    but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead
    Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
    but im like naw,
    he just likes peepin the other dudes pic(lol)
    Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
    ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall
    (decent ending)

    your verse didnt have all the flow that I was expecting outta u DH but it had sum cool punches and mos def creativity..
    7.5/10 blood drops


    9th Wonder's verse:

    Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
    The reason?
    Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self(cool)
    Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
    When claimin you bang with thugs…
    ……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely(HAHA)
    On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
    That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
    ………………………it was one of your favorite moments(whoa!)
    I’ll win this fast,
    So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
    Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle(nice)
    And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
    You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms
    (decent ending)

    the flow was a bit better than DH's verse..but also I was feelin the punches of ur verse 9th..mos def a better overall verse..
    8.5/10

    Flow: 9th
    Creativity: DH
    Punches: 9th
    Personals: 9th

    vote: 9th

    **u all get reps!** nice verses by both..I hate when i read a battle and both verses suck..and I have to vote..I like giving breakdown votes when there is compitition...

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  9. solution!

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    uhhh..i got dissy winnin this at the moment..but i dunno if its jus coz im dissapointed with ninth for comin weaker than normal...so ima read the verses again later on..then vote..
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  10. storm-g

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    Shit, im destroying him dead
    especially when,
    his verses are the first fuckin word that I said
    shit.. funny

    He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
    so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment
    hittin him with the combo.. cool


    RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
    no matter how hard you try,
    battling me, kid your outta league like IV
    hah

    ‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
    easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
    but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead
    alright

    Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
    but im like naw,
    he just likes peepin the other dudes pic
    hahaha.. nice

    Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
    ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall
    good

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    overall im really impressed by this verse.. it was strong all the way through

    it seems you've gotten better after i destroyed you.. taught you a lesson maybe... heh

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    Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
    The reason?
    Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self
    second line.. nice

    Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
    When claimin you bang with thugs…
    ……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely
    aright


    On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
    That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
    ………………………it was one of your favorite moments
    haha.. u used it in your verse.. maybe its one of ur favorite moments


    I’ll win this fast,
    So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
    Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle
    no

    And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
    You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms
    didnt like it

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    good verse.. fresh read here as well..



    overall dishonour was better... he ripped shit


    just wittier


    VOTE- DISHONOUR
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  11. castro'DAMUS

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    Should be 3-2, Shock's thing was basically a vote for me....but hey 2-2 I guess.....I hope Shock votes Ninth now, LOL


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  12. Omen

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    Shit, im destroying him dead
    especially when,
    his verses are the first fuckin word that I said
    lol.. good opener

    He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
    so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment
    liked the relation with the opener..


    RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
    no matter how hard you try,
    battling me, kid your outta league like IV
    lol funny but not really to effective I felt

    ‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
    easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
    but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead
    Sorry Dissy but played like Strike commented on earlier

    Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
    but im like naw,
    he just likes peepin the other dudes pic
    lol. best part in the verse..

    Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
    ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall
    decent.. these gravestone lines were expected with that graph above..

    Your verse was nice.. few good punches.. flow was ok.. I can't catch i to well with this new style everyone is doing.. but you came good.. some creative lines in there



    Ninth Wonder

    Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
    The reason?
    Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self
    lol@ 2nd line.. enjoyed

    Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
    When claimin you bang with thugs…
    ……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely
    decent


    On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
    That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
    ………………………it was one of your favorite moments
    lol I remember when he said that shit.. lol..


    I’ll win this fast,
    So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
    Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle
    Played puzzle line

    And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
    You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms
    good closer

    you cam consistent with punches like DH.. I caught your flow a little easier.. overall some good content.. and nice lines..

    Both verses got some laugh out of me.. but none really stood out in my opinion.. I think both could of possibly came better.. this was a good match.. evenly done in my opinion.. but honestly.. I felt 9th was alittle more consistent.. thats what is the deciding facotr on my part.. DH I liked your verse.. you opened up nicely and then it seemd as if you started to trail just a tad.. I felt 9th was just a little more consitent with his verse.. but to me this battle could go either way I had a touch time deciding and read each verse more than once.. G'Luck to whoever wins..
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  14. LeeHarveyOswald

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    Mr. Dissy

    Shit, im destroying him dead
    especially when,
    his verses are the first fuckin word that I said

    lmao

    He’s not that sick, with his verses often bit
    so when I say 'you aint shit'....its not a compliment

    nice

    RSTL don’t respect you, RBL’s not your time, see….
    no matter how hard you try,
    battling me, kid your outta league like IV

    decent i spose

    ‘The only ‘Wonder’ dissy’s gonna eat is the bread’
    easy without a hunch you’ll be dead,
    but I want a close battle so I’ll feed you punches instead

    wonder....and bread...who didnt see that coming?

    Ninths a picture battling king some say he’s ruthless
    but im like naw,
    he just likes peepin the other dudes pic

    lmao@peepin the dudes pic...that was funny

    Sign the gravestone on your exit, first of all…
    ironic how im the first to drop, yet ninths the first to fall

    the sloser was killer dammmmnnn


    Mr. Ninth

    Dissy, too bad we had to battle, because I’m leavin with the title-belt
    The reason?
    Your punches are played like every time you see your little-self

    it's ok.....bragging lines arent my fav.....

    Beatin bookies, like fistin odds and even groupies
    When claimin you bang with thugs…
    ……………………….your not supposed to mean it loosely

    lmao...this was good

    On the real, stop trying to appeal, youre gay you know it,
    That’s why when Storm G said he's homo…
    ………………………it was one of your favorite moments

    storm punches lol....

    I’ll win this fast,
    So watch me rip this slut, smash up his jaw to split his muzzle
    Thinkin you hot, but the Jig Is Up… I just kicked your puzzle

    funny....

    And am I responding rudely, my sympathy has been done
    You have signs of having potential, let me pause the symptoms

    closer was decent


    Diss: nice flow and just funny shit all the way through, nicely planned punches, originality, just could work on the personals...i mean, hes been here since 01....you gotta know sumthin

    Ninth- funny, ill give you that, there just seems to be a couple lines of filler, not alot, just the bragging lines an shit, nice all the way through, good drop

    Vote= Dis Honour
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  15. Honey Boo

    Honey Boo ...MIA...

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    this was pretty close...

    dissy, not your best effort here, ive see u come alot harder(ie rbl tourney...lol)...this was an average verse, but u had a few nice punches...

    9th, u as well ive seen hit alot harder, u only had a couple of nice lines, tha rest was a bit blah...decent though...your thugs line was proly ya best...

    close...but i go with..

    vote = dissy
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  16. Un-SeeN

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    Final Votes.

    Ninth Wonder = 3 Votes
    Ð!§-HðñðuR = 4 Votes

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