Tourney: Kill or be Killed: Drinking Sucks VS stickman

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  1. Un-SeeN

    Un-SeeN MIC IMMORTAL

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    - Matches will be posted Sunday (6-22-03) night.
    - Verses will be due 5pm estern time Tuesday (6-24-03)

    - battle verses will be 10 bars, no more no less... 1 bar under or over the limit will activate a DQ.


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  2. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    Niiiiiiiiiiice, Checkin In!
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  3. stickman

    stickman music entrepreneur

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    i'll post tomorrow or tuesday, i got that work
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  4. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    Robbed himself, hes his own crook
    short bitch..
    stand up to me & get of those phone books
    if looks could kill, u must be a vampire dood
    cant see urself in mirrors
    cause ur own reflections scared of you
    duke i dont buy it, dont lie now
    beat me again?
    ur skull must be as thick as ur eyebrows
    ur ego dies now, how can he be proud
    i heard u rock shows
    & by the looks of u, u stage dive in empty crowds
    how'd u get so ugly, ur pictures a shame
    i only gave u respect
    cause ur photo lives up to ur name


    try to drop by tonight or tomorrow morning, if you cant its cool, i know how work goes... goodluck
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  5. stickman

    stickman music entrepreneur

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    I really hate this geek… on the net tryna fake the heat
    he was like “please” n’ “may I?” when I made him take a seat
    was gonna take it easy, but I don’t give leeway to fucks
    ya name should be Drinking, Skillwise & My Creativity Sucks
    check the tombstones, ya bout to get ya name engraved duke
    ‘cause after I ‘rip you’ …Seeny will do the same to you
    “RM Champion” that’s not you, little kid …forget it
    n’ after I win the belt …I’ma come back to whip you with it
    look -> “you suck n’ at this point I’m past tryin” \/
    I’ll beat you ‘right down’ …like the arrows in that last line
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  6. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    Drinking- punches and personals were nice. flow was kinda off, rhyme scheme was good, although some might say it was hard to read (not me so dont worry) overall a nice drop

    Fav Line: ur skull must be as thick as ur eyebrows

    bwghahahahahhaah omg


    Monster- Niceness, you seemed angrier than usual in this battle, good creativity and original punches.
    Fav Line: ya name should be Drinking, Skillwise & My Creativity Sucks


    Closeness



    Vote= Monster
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  7. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    got damn, how the fuck... up
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  8. Entrensical

    Entrensical still EXS and STC

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    good battle...


    i thought drinking took this

    his verse made me laugh more


    stick was dope, but i thought drinking edged this one
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  9. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Good battle.

    Drinking - You had me laughing throughout your verse, and that eyebrow line was funny as shit..flow was there, had some multies in the end-bar rhyme scheme with that abb aba style .. that's coo' .. overall, nice verse. disses were there...

    Monster - One thing, I know you can come better than you did. Flow was there, had some multies here and there. Disses weren't as strong. You basically said you'll be champion and he's not most of the time. Decent verse. I didn't like your closer tho.

    vote - Drinking
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  10. Strike2

    Strike2 Man Meets Creator

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    Drinkins verse wuz hillarious.... I'm sorry monster..but you didnt try hard enough....thass real..you had 2 lines I really liked..but the rest wuz mediocre...and against someone who wanted your head that bad...you jus lost..
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  11. Unbreakable Rec

    Unbreakable Rec "I Am What I Am"

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    i read both verse twice...

    and i have to say, monster had a better flow and stronger punches then his opponent..


    vote = monster
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  12. ShockMania

    ShockMania RSTL CHAMP

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    uhhhhhhh..hard to battle to vote on..

    but i gotta vote - DS

    i was expectin alot more form monster..this is the worst verse i seen from him since i came back..notihn really made me laugh..no real stand out lines..a few decent ones..DS came pretty good..jus a few funny lines made him get my vote..apart from that it was completely equal..the closer was nice..and the eyebrows line..and i was also feelin the stage divin line..funny shit..
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  13. Calculus

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    Vote - Drinking Sucks

    His verse had some funny lines and nice personals,, Had me laughing throughout it.. But he seemed like he wanted this match more.. Monster came nice but just not enough to win.. I liked the whip you with the belt line and the opener but those are the only ones I felt stood out.. DS edged this one out.. with more punches that his slightly more..

    Pz
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  14. Orbit

    Orbit new face

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    drinkings verse was real personal
    i shat myself reading it

    monster your verse was good, but i thought youd come way better to tell ya the truth

    vote-drinking
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  15. -Punchline-

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    Monster's verse:

    I really hate this geek… on the net tryna fake the heat
    he was like “please” n’ “may I?” when I made him take a seat(decent opener)
    was gonna take it easy, but I don’t give leeway to fucks
    ya name should be Drinking, Skillwise & My Creativity Sucks(nice)
    check the tombstones, ya bout to get ya name engraved duke
    ‘cause after I ‘rip you’ …Seeny will do the same to you(decent)
    “RM Champion” that’s not you, little kid …forget it
    n’ after I win the belt …I’ma come back to whip you with it(nice)
    look -> “you suck n’ at this point I’m past tryin” \/
    I’ll beat you ‘right down’ …like the arrows in that last line
    (nice creativity wit the last line)

    the verse has sum cool punches and nice creativity..but i wasnt really feelin ur energy..Ive read a few of ur verses and this isnt ur best work..dont get me wrong..this was a decent battle verse..i just expected more from u...
    8/10 blood drops

    Drinking Sucks:

    Robbed himself, hes his own crook
    short bitch..
    stand up to me & get of those phone books(LMAO!)
    if looks could kill, u must be a vampire dood
    cant see urself in mirrors
    cause ur own reflections scared of you(decent)
    duke i dont buy it, dont lie now
    beat me again?
    ur skull must be as thick as ur eyebrows(lol)
    ur ego dies now, how can he be proud
    i heard u rock shows
    & by the looks of u, u stage dive in empty crowds(hahaha)
    how'd u get so ugly, ur pictures a shame
    i only gave u respect
    cause ur photo lives up to ur name(nice ending)

    the punches were straight up direct!..i liked the verse..the phone book line was my fav...also i was feelin the ending..
    8.5/10

    fav lines:

    Monster:

    was gonna take it easy, but I don’t give leeway to fucks//
    ya name should be Drinking, Skillwise & My Creativity Sucks//

    Drinking Sucks:

    Robbed himself, hes his own crook//
    short bitch, stand up to me & get of those phone books//

    vote: drinkin..
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  16. KonviKt

    KonviKt Jonny Punchline

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    Vote=DS

    Both of you came pretty good. I expected monster to come much better but he didn't. I believe if he would have, he could've won. But DS had a nice flow, and nice punches and came out better than Monster.

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  17. vengeance

    vengeance shockgod

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    Vote- Monster

    he came nicer without the pic, even though DS had some lines, i dont think he would have done as well without the pic. Still an entertaining battle.
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  18. cliche

    cliche New Member

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  19. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    Basically, I agree with Vengeance.

    Drinking no offense but you woulda got handled if you didn't use the pic, using peeps pictures shouldn't be allowd in the tourny in my opinion, but Monster still had a better flow and some nice punches, both came good....But Monster didnt resort to using a pic, so ima go with Monster on this one

    Nice battle fellaz

    vote = monster
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  20. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    he has my picture, he should hae used it, votes shouldnt count if you are voting against me for using a pic, thats fucked up

    kid did this in like 5 of his battles, even went to a different site and got storms pic to use.

    fuck em
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