Tourney: Kill or be Killed: Dis-Honour VS solution!

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  1. Un-SeeN

    Un-SeeN MIC IMMORTAL

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    Graphic Link:http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-6/245346/tourneyround3.GIF

    Verses:

    - Matches will be posted Sunday (6-29-03).
    - Verses will be due Tuesday (7-1-03) before midnight.

    - This round battle verses will be 16 bars, no more no less... 1 bar under or over the limit will activate a DQ.


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  2. Un-SeeN

    Un-SeeN MIC IMMORTAL

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    sry about the inconvenience, had to close the other threads cause some idiots deiced they wanted to freepost in it.
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  3. Neggativity

    Neggativity shock aka solution

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    yoyo

    truth is..i dont normally fight with my crew..
    but what choice do i have with trax ghostwritin for you..
    i got rbl ya kno..but spines? im dentin'em..
    ya like 2nd rate software..comin 2nd in line to pentium..
    tourny finals..and im givin this fake a lesson..
    this loss'll leave ya Few-min..like a 180 seconds..
    leave ya heart a mess..shit..dont start to test kid..
    bit so many times..
    ya pool of talents shark infested..
    truth is ya suck..and in this contest ya dead..
    wait for pentium to post against me..
    and use his name concepts instead..
    remembe dbd? but its true most of ya crews have nurtured..
    i'll gamble ya life..and lose on purpose..
    im sorry for this..for sendin this shit..
    its jus that ur not worth my time..and pentium is..
    i saw alot fo yuo..i aint impressed..and this kids a goner..
    'there's a shockin solution to this battle' - dishonor

    for those that dont get the pentium lines..im battlin pentium ninez in rbl this week..sooo..figure it out..

    10 mins key..i had like 2 ocncepts in my head already..

    plus its 2:30 am..lol
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  4. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    was that verse directed towards pentium or me? hmm ah well here we go....

    yeah i've peeped shock before many times and I gotta say...
    if your what everyone wants to be, the world is a modest place
    i'll hurt em' with game, right after I merk em' with flames
    the worlds built on lies,
    ...why else you think your mom would say you weren't a mistake?
    so yeah you bite punches, there's no curving in facts
    'the minds a terrible thing to waste'....you aint gotta worry bout that
    he can use other peoples lyrics, i'll still mangle this whore
    cause his rhymes dont ring a bell....they fuckin bang on the door
    shock's head is my desk.. and i'll whack the mallet
    all the newbies follow your lead....hence the lack of talent
    "Negative" was my gift to you, yet your still bitterly sweet
    how?, I made shock who he is today.....litterally
    kid says he cool with mad peeps, i'll laugh as I merk this...
    I take it thats the reason Storm features in half of his verses?
    he's living large but kids tryna front like he do it hard
    im like c'mon he aint street....he more like a boulevard
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  5. Neggativity

    Neggativity shock aka solution

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    why would it be directed at pentium..if im sayin he's worth my time and your not.

    stop swayin.
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  6. BiggRic

    BiggRic Doin Bigg Thangs

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    aight no beef sock for real though..

    I understood the whole pentium is worth your time bit.. it was cool... you got skillz son, I would have liked to battle you...

    Shock
    flow=8
    punches=7
    personals=7
    fuck all the other categories cause they really dont matter..

    Dis
    flow=7
    punches=8
    personals=8

    shock=22
    dis=23
    vote-dis

    this was a good battle. both came nice.. this is one of those where you really dont want noone to lose...
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  7. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    I revoted. .
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  8. Apogee

    Apogee Ill Since '00

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    really nice battle

    shock - pucnhes were nice i udnerstood the lines, and i liked how u changed ur style up and shit inbetween very nice, flow was nice and on point, punches were to but thye started to fall a lil.., but overall niceness

    joey - personals were killer very nice lol the "i made him litterly" line had me rollen and flow was on structure killer

    vote = joe joe bean
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  9. cliche

    cliche New Member

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    Damn this was nice..

    shock... there was alot of pentium disses, it got repeditive after a while and made your verse fall, you had about 3 good lines, i liked the verse it was funny.

    DH... you definately took the win with good personals and funny word play and it was directed right at him, this is why you took the win

    vote = DH
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  10. Neggativity

    Neggativity shock aka solution

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    ah well...i keyed it in 10 minutes at 2 20 in the mornin..

    and i know other stuff aswell ya kno..but i aint about to start bitchin..
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  11. Neggativity

    Neggativity shock aka solution

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    if u read the verses correctly..it was me who had a shark infested line..
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  12. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Word, My fault. WEll, that's a played line. Sorry for that. I must've read the verses too fast or something..

    Shock - Decent verse. Flow was there, and you are using that style nicely. Didn't have many stand-out lines tho, 'cept that shark infested line. And it's quite played.

    DH - I liked your verse. You kept coming with the disses. You were consistant, and that's the key to a successful battle verse. Flow was there. Good shit

    vote - DH

    There, revoted when i was awake..
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  13. Un-SeeN

    Un-SeeN MIC IMMORTAL

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    Ð!§-HðñðuR Wins!

    As A Prize He Asked For Some Free Graphics, So That He Will Get!!

    DH - Hit Me Up And Time With What You Want On The Graphic And You Got It!

    CONGRATS!!
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