Touch Without Contact

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  1. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    I love the way you "touch" me
    When we interact...
    Tingling sensations
    Without even coming in contact--
    And the way you react,
    When we enage in
    Deep converations,
    Is like making love
    Minus genital penetration...
    We can talk to kill time,
    Or just speak what's on your mind--
    Flow line for line,
    Or serenade each other with rhymes.
    It's sublime
    How we get intimate without the slightest touch,
    And without so much
    As a kiss
    We can share our passion
    Beyond our means,
    Or get intellectual
    And talk about meaningful things--
    And it seems
    As though we were meant for each other...
    I cherish these
    Intimate episodes without the slightest touch
    From one another.
    test
  2. Atmosphera

    Atmosphera New Member

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    Beautiful Descriptions I'm Aroused !!

    I Lived On This Feeling For 3 Years No Need For Physical As Mentally He Made Love To Me.

    I Was Really Flowing With This My Heart Pounded With Each Line So Creative Constructed With Excellent Experience

    OOooooweeee
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  3. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Say word, family. I'm in a relationship like that at this point in time, well not much a relationship, but the feeling is something not many feel. I can talk with her mentally, even though I want something physical, I can live without when I'm talking to her. She's amazing and this piece just got to me, kept my attention, put a smile on my face, as well had me relate completely. Loving the title, also. My blessings..
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  4. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    i love this
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  5. UFO the Phoenix

    UFO the Phoenix I DONT BELIEVE IN ALIENS!

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    oh wow I can feel you on this one

    its all about that mindsex yo thats when you can really find out if you are right for each other I think

    This was put together nicely and I like the topic alot

    Good poem

    PEACE AND GODBLESS
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  6. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    Thank you all for checking me out...I wrote this about 2 years ago...kinda steers away from my usual vibe.
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  7. ~S*T*A*R*M~

    ~S*T*A*R*M~ Goddess

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    [color=ffcc99]That was dope. :) By the fourth line, I was thinking about Dead Prez' "Mind Sex," and it put me into this nice little mood for the rest of the piece. I dug it. Well done.[/color]
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  8. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Are you ever on AIM, dawg? If so, let me get at your screen/name that you sometimes are on, wouldn't mind talking with you.
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  9. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    Yeah man I got AIM.....But we don't have it here at work, and when I'm at home I don't even wanna see a computer after frying my eyeballs for 8 hours looking at this thing. But my aim name is Trajic F8 holla at me if you happen to catch me on.
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  10. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    seems a lil different than your usuall pieces to
    me. but i still like it... nice to see some different stuff from you. and speaking of aim... i been trying to get at u myself.....and if u r wanna talk on it at work try aim express works without downloading and shit....mind sex..lol..woulda never thought to write bout no shit like this

    UP
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  11. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    mos def was feeling this piece.....dam two years ago u was on fire...lol........can i borrow your thoughts for a minute?....lol...on tha cool....this made me think of someone i know and how much they mean to me even though we are not together our spirits are touching......mmmmmmmmm...this was sexy as hell....


    ~def big ups~
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  12. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    lol man this did remind me of dead prez "mind sex". Intellectual mofo you. Good work man, glad you postin on the regular now

    one luv
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