Topical Cypher

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  1. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    I used this picture before in the topical league...curious to see how this does here(the concept)

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    A child of freedom, laughing and breathing
    Jumping and screaming, imagination deceiving
    But their happy to be leaving, life now stressful
    Echos cover the walls, removing chills of death row
    Figured it was a test tho, but i couldn't interrupt the fun
    Sun now gone as they cheers become one


    continue :)
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  2. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    Our children sometimes have a bad habbit of scaring us,
    Jumpin up, into the sky, high on magic fairy dust,
    Their dreams take off, and our dreams go *poof*
    We just mad we got scammed and bought a house with no roof,
    Dad's busy in the kitchen getting something from the fridge,
    He has no idea Aliens are abducting his kids.
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  3. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    Still there ain’t no one jumpin on this thread
    Ta cypher bout these 4 kids jumpin on the bed,
    What you don’t see is one fell off and bumped his head,
    He was jumpin one minute, the next minute “thump” he’s dead,
    But the kid’s don’t notice, there too high in the air,
    Either that, or they’re all just too high ta care.
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  4. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    but one kid remains strapped in her sheet
    Hands spread abroad as the others kick their feet
    Fairy dust falls as she remembers her old freedom
    Clear skies with birds flying throughout the kingdom
    She appears happy despite her oncoming paralysis
    I could see her pain but only with deeper analysis
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  5. Sin-Razone

    Sin-Razone UnR3450n

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    ill post another one
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  6. Sin-Razone

    Sin-Razone UnR3450n

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    yo

    future is real/
    scenes of terminators stalking city streets/
    m 16's are your only forms of living/
    hope not to get shot on streets/
    protect your children your wife/
    theyre killing human beings/
    extinciton not caused by natural things/
    but firearms and robots immune to human screams
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  7. JASON ANTHONY

    JASON ANTHONY White Devil

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    They’re takin over the planet, panic, hi haters,
    You’re about ta be popped by an army a walkin vibrators,
    They all got guns, plus they‘ll make you cum,
    They’re most likely illegal depending on what state you from,
    Now a days we worry bout the little bitches who text boys,
    When 20 years from now we’ll be overthrown by sex toys,
    Manufactured by a nobody, just some guy,
    Go figure, the walkin dicks are only equipped with one eye,
    Don’t get “cocky,” there may only be a hand full,
    But they’ll leave your man hole the size of a manhole.
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  8. NOBLE SOLDIER

    NOBLE SOLDIER Fireball Kid

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    A child of war, fighting for freedom..
    Violently poor in this mindless kingdom..
    Wishing I was blind and deaf..
    So I couldnt see or hear this life of death..
    The guns are loud and the buildings are crumbled..
    Didnt see or hear the bullet coming till my knees were buckled..
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  9. Physt2Cuffs

    Physt2Cuffs gunshot inna de air

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    Shit, ever expansiveness
    The world couldn't hold me
    Never was able to put my creativity on paper
    So art teachers used to scold me
    The paper didn't move me nor could it hold
    The ethereal developments that permeate my soul
    So with a diddy bop, I hit the rap game A list
    With an automatic utterance to detract any playlist
    Forward thinking and a forbearing spirit
    Retracts my emotions and replaces it with something fearless
    Born of God to conquer space and time
    If they say it's out of my league, I say i'm gonna make it mine
    Adjacent with time, I lay in the shadows
    Until I perfect my mind, I lay into you with babble
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  10. Physt2Cuffs

    Physt2Cuffs gunshot inna de air

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    C3-PO looking fudder ruckers point cannons my way
    Armed tanks and missles try to penetrate my place
    Give me a rock and i'll make you regress
    This ain't a threat, on my turf you step
    So I unearth your breath
    Send your lifeforce to another plane
    Another contry invades, then we're doing them the same
    With no shame, I feel no pain
    I speak like this for I be ordained
    Developed for eons of time
    My new soul sat back until I was ready to rhyme
    Gave way to a new way of being
    Cause when you're locked in a cage
    You smell freedom
    But when you get it, it's like your life is complete
    I realized that i'm inoperable when war is obsolete
    Does that make me a mad man that now I seek death
    The only peace that could follow my Godly steps
    Towards a new way of being I seen enough here
    Regenerate my mind to love because I seen enough fear
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  11. Poetic Concept

    Poetic Concept New Member

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    Keystyle

    Mechanical animals
    consume fanatical warfare
    tactical bombs dive, holocaust was born there
    nothing survived, lives smoked like cannabis
    the land of the rich, damaging, disbanded
    and re manned with the mechanics of vision
    This was the premonition of artists,
    partly cause he was starving, and delusional
    Its usual to assume, he foreseen the doom we live
    where hope is broken, we co-exist on spoken bliss
    not even hope persist, only smoke and ash lift
    City of fallen angels, iron ore, ages,
    smeared faces, like paint on diluted pages,
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  12. Sir Bustalot

    Sir Bustalot I am Jesus

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    life... it is what it is
    a bucket of piss, duck the droids or hope they miss
    livin with the rats in the tunnels
    with broken wrists
    smashed against the mettle with smoking fists
    wasnt always like this when we had it all
    but with the way things were goin it had to fall
    the panic call
    but nobody is at the helm to answer
    we had a god but he fell of cancer
    the battle halls is where the weaker clamber
    now our mess is right and left
    and death is dealt at every cleft
    by robot demons
    our homes they heft
    and death is dealt at every cleft
    and death is dealt at every...
    we play the game like life and chess
    and hope humanity can come out best...
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  13. TruestPain

    TruestPain C.E.O of Rho' Wylin' Reco

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    Its 2012, you hungry as hell, but they invading
    Time to load up, cock it back, and spray strangas
    Heart pound with adrenaline, cranked in the mayhem
    Bullets and lazers, blastin at these gasoline guzzlin tankers
    Aim officials with eyes-closed, main missions survival
    Stay with-it or die-slow, taken'em all, tru suicidal
    Its getting real now, blood falling from tears now
    Man and Machine in the guantlet, gutter and geared-down
    A mechanical apacolypse, from somebodies subconciousness
    Whoever concocted this killed 3 billion and watched the shit
    Theres no tellin, no stailmate, neither side is not relenting
    Teflon vests on, but bullet repellent gives no ending
    Destructive offences oppress the off-spring of a nation
    Who once hated themselves, tryna redeemed through this awesome altercation
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  14. .GeeZus.

    .GeeZus. i'm dat GOOD.

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    good shit shadow...
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  15. Jace Abstract

    Jace Abstract Genevan Heathen

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    they got robotic optical vision, they using spyware
    they gonna find you at some point no need to hide there
    androids blending with the human race, camoflaged
    into what you hoped and envision, like a mirage
    the sentinals screwing their brain cells, on to stay well
    and they tell, stories of the new holocaust, a strange tale
    humans demolished under our own impoverished
    state of living that we can no longer live off this
    its monsterous, when you see your home reduced to
    a cubicle of loose screws, and they searching for you to
    checking your carbon footprint in the dust, its strange to us
    living in a neo wasteland thats full of dangers plus
    the shit on, it hits home, faster then a rocket launcher
    sinking the building you still on, you live in a kill-zone

    *edited some spelling
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  16. Jace Abstract

    Jace Abstract Genevan Heathen

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    haha ok let's see what y'all can do with this
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  17. Cronic315

    Cronic315 New Member

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    What makes us different than animals? Our fuckin brains mechanical
    Products of technology, controlled by goverment that's tyrannical
    Programmed to be cannibals, rapists, murderers, thieves and fiends
    Can't make our own choices, we're characters, if you get what I mean
    Created by a higher being, no control, have to do what we told
    No way to break the circuit, no way to gain control


    Pretty short, not too great. That picture doesn't make for a very good topic haha
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