(~ Top 20 Countdown ~)

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  1. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    Hey guys.. Now I know im no IV when it comes to this top 20 countdown but hopefully u can get to appreciate it as much as when he did it. So without further ado, I give you your

    @#$%- Top 20 Countdown!!! -@#$%




    20. Headless Verseman vs. 21. 5 Starre

    Headless, coming off a tuff loss last week is more ready then
    ever to tear tha shit out of his next opponent to prove he knows
    how to write better then anyone if he wants to put in the
    effort. There’s only one problem.. he is facing not only a tuff
    competitor, but one of his fellow crewmates. 5 Starre has been
    making a name for himself as of late in the league showing he
    might have what it takes to get that number one spot. And soon.
    should be a dope match.


    18. Surface vs. 19. Idol dot Z

    now these two are names you might not know much about. I will
    start out by saying Idol is no newbee when it comes to writing
    stories.. the guy has won a fuckin championship title so to take
    him lightly would just be insane. Now Surface has a good
    record.. but is only in the 18 rank position because his opponent
    from last week insanity no showed an gave him the easy win.. so
    what does this mean? it means if Surface wants to get a name for
    himself in this league, he is going to have to step up his game an
    stomp out the comp.. Will he do it?


    16. Mc4Sight vs. 17. Wise Punchlines

    Mc4Sight is back in the league.. what? u don’t know who this guy
    is!!? oh hell no u didn’t just think that... this guy was taking
    the league by storm last time he was signed in.. u know that 5
    time champ peril eyes? well Mc4Sight stomped him when they crossed
    paths.. that just goes to show how hard Wise Punchline will have
    to come this week if he wants to move on in the ranks. Now Wise
    is one my favorite writers cuz he drops real emotion in his
    writing an I like that. I cant wait to see who come out on top
    in this one..


    14. Cereal Killer vs. 15. MisskeydaQueen

    I know a lot of you don’t know who daqueen is.. well let me tell
    you, she was in the league awhile back when we also had another
    great lady writer by the name of honey boo.. she was known for
    her creative stories an held her weight in the league fairly
    easily as her record shows. I really hope Cereal Killer doesn’t
    take this match lightly, because he might end up falling down in
    the ranks right before his eyes. Should be good.



    12. Harlequin vs. 13. Peril Eyes

    Harlequin is on a rampage stomping everyone who has come in his
    path as of late, but now he is faced with his most challenging
    match which will prove if he has what it takes to not just beat
    the newbs, but take out the big timers as well. Peril will be
    coming with his usual good stuff an is looking to revenge his
    loss from last week. I’m sure a lot of eyes will be on this match
    just due to the controversy peril brings with his presence, so
    anything can happen..


    10. Muti vs. 11. Anaphora

    Muti is on this up an down coaster Still, sneaking by baron mynd
    the other week an then losing to god extensions the following
    week. so now he is facing a mysterious new to the league person
    by the name of anaphora who has showed can write pretty good
    when put up against the test. both these writers are trying to
    move that one step closer to the belt an want nothing more then
    to win so keep your eyes out on this match.


    8. Richard Corey vs. 9. Doc Evil

    Richard Corey is a star in this league.. a lot of people were
    surprised to see the giant go down last week in what was a very
    emotional piece by this man. the champ match last week was too
    dam good to be voted on. both talent an RC came out of that
    winners in my book so now RC has to work his way back up the
    ladder, but this wont be easy seeing is how Doc Evil is racing
    to the top.. Doc was put on the test last week facing a vet by
    the name of headless an he managed to walk out of that match a
    winner.. his journey takes its next step this week an shall be
    one of his toughest yet.. good luck to both.


    6. Infinite Truth vs. 7. Atheist

    Both these guys faced off a couple weeks back.. now this is the
    match that has got Atheist on his total destruction path he has
    been putting on his opponents. he vowed to take the belt and soon
    an this is the perfect match to prove he isn’t just all talk..
    lets see if Atheist can put a hurting on the guy who drove him
    back away from his goals an end up making Truth see how that
    feels..


    ~Contendership Match~

    4. Jowelz vs. 5. God Extensions

    Yea yea.. Jowelz the famous storyteller who we all know, vs. God extensions, also known as trap the scrapper. I don’t need to sit here an hype these guys up.. I mean shit.. Everyone! knows these two an knows there a couple of the best dam writers in this league. Both are after that number one stop and are refusing to go out without a fight, for if they win, will be one match away from saying they run the league. this should be a HOT match!


    ***RSTL Championship match***

    1. Tha Talent vs. 2. Erykah Caine vs. 3. Desenuts

    Talent..comming off a Huge win over the peoples champ Richard
    Corey last week, Must be feeling great! right about now.. not
    only did he come with a dope monster/teddy story.. he has proven
    his worth by holding onto the belt. This Week he has his hands
    full though cuz not only does he have Erykah Caine to beat. But
    also the great writer by the name of desenuts. Yes, that’s right folks this three way
    should be one to see.. both Erykah an Dese are looking for their
    first belt, both have come a long way in this league, both really
    wanna win this match, and Talent wants to keep his belt. All Three
    Will be Dropping Fire!

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  2. A.S.K

    A.S.K ...

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    good shit

    some hella good matches this week
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  3. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    Yay... Title matches make me poop!.. YAY! ;)
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  4. Betty*Beretta

    Betty*Beretta New Member

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    yeah nice shit
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  5. Baron Mynd 2.0

    Baron Mynd 2.0 Topical Writer

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    Lol at saying Muti 'sneaked by' me ..
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  6. Atheist

    Atheist Storyteller

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    Dope as always.
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  7. Wise-Punchlines

    Wise-Punchlines Better THAN the game

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    good shit man keep shit running round here and thanx for the compliments
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  8. Muti

    Muti I just write

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    sneaked would be the word.....cuz I know you was going to drop fire....mr baron...

    as for this top 20...your defintley not IV but thanks for the time out to even put one up...Props for that and a cool read...

    Muti out
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  9. Baron Mynd 2.0

    Baron Mynd 2.0 Topical Writer

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    ^ I dont know if you saw the verse i DID have waiting, i'll find it / edit it here so you can see. It was a little rushed, but i think i could of taken you ..
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  10. Baron Mynd 2.0

    Baron Mynd 2.0 Topical Writer

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    Muti:

    [​IMG]

    .. The Border Between Nepal & Tibet, Mt. Everest, 1953 ..

    Stood at the base of the mountain, they looked to the sky
    To the top of the thirty thousand foot sculpture of ice
    Carved by mother nature's hands, deep beneath the snow it seats
    Where a husband and wife team have long hoped to reach ..
    It's frozen peak .. stood upright & profound in place
    .. The couple took their first steps up the mountain face ..
    The air looked Haunted by Fog .. & heavy Snow Fell
    As both hoped all would Go well on their Jaunt To the Top
    Cold pierced the skin, a bitter wind made the struggle awkward
    But maintaining composure; the couple stumbled forward
    And fought against the elements .. to brave the weather
    .. Thinking they'd be safer if they both stayed together ..
    Side by side, holdin' hands - they'd covered a fair distance
    Snowfall impairing their vision, as they walked the frozen land
    The chosen path they'd taken then reached a sudden stop
    An enourmous gap in the glacier had formed; they couldnt cross
    Without a huge ammount of willpower, effort and strength
    .. They decided to set up camp for the night there & then ..
    .. And rest themselves .. Seeing as their limbs were hurting ..
    .. So they'd sleep till morning, then begin their journey ..
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    .. Overnight their train of thought run straight into a podium ..
    See, along with the pain, they'd bought a mild case of pneumonia
    Leaving them both weakened, bodies beginning to cease up
    But this was the oppourtunity that they'd always dreamed of
    A chance to conquer Everest, the highest peak on Earth
    .. A chance to ascend the mountain together, & be the first ..
    .. Couple to reach its summit .. To be a part of history ..
    .. To scale this freezing citadel, its giant Heart glistening ..
    As the couple bridged the gap, and continued forth
    Oxygen was scarce; the food supplies provided warmth
    .. Nearing the peak .. Another obstacle seemed to blossom ..
    .. But, already behind schedule .. they needed to cross it ..
    They'd come too far now to say they'd gave up hope
    So in a hurried attempt, they attached the safety ropes
    And began scaling the face, winters previous years tell
    .. As their foot hold gave way, and both mountaineers fell ..
    .. The safety ropes caught them, but both screamed in fright ..
    Their voices echoed thru the valley; both feared for their lives
    Suddenly the mountain roared with the most thunderous sound
    .. As several hundred tonn's of snow came plundering down ..
    .. The cliff face .. An avalanche had cleared the way ..
    .. The adventures buried alive, and never seen again ..
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    .. The Border Between Nepal & Tibet, Mt. Everest, 1973 ..

    .. Twenty years passed .. New explorers looked to the sky ..
    .. Hoping they too could stand atop the sculpture of ice ..
    A team lead by experts, looking to scale the mountains face
    .. Then return home to a heart-warming round of praise ..
    Nearing the mountains peak, A researchers observant eyes
    .. Discovered two human bodies had been preserved in ice ..
    .. And upon closer inspection; the male's frozen pocket ..
    .. Held photo's of the pair, encased in a golden locket ..
    He'd hoped to propose; thinking they'd reach the peak before dark
    But he never got the chance to really speak from his heart
    And that taught me a valuable lesson im building upon
    .. 'Cause You Dont Know What You've Got 'Til It's Gone ..
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    a little rushed, but ehh .. :^)



    Still positive you'd of won?
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  11. Doc` Evil

    Doc` Evil i'm back

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    is that your peice^ ?



    dope countdown, wheres the mag?

    peace
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  12. Atheist

    Atheist Storyteller

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    ^ Agreed. Mag?
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  13. Khôi NguJin

    Khôi NguJin faith.hope.love

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    word, lookin out for mag.....

    Baron that verse was dope as hell, everything was kinda beat until the last stanza though....that last section is touching man....the whole immortal technique thing...."you never know what you have, until it's gone" dope.....Props on that verse kid....imagery is your high point.
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  14. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    the mag is now up : )
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  15. Oracle3301

    Oracle3301 New Member

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  16. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    interesting

    I'm not in the leauge yet but hopefully I will be in next week. I hope to compete and get into countdowns like this. Nice read, looks like a lot of good competition in this leauge

    Baron your story is a very compelling story..not bad especially if its rushed. I hope to be one of the better ladies in this leauge. I see you have a couple.
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  17. Muti

    Muti I just write

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    Baron I never said I would have won....

    I said i sneaked by you... I was agreeing on that.. since you didnt post I did sneak by you...

    but its all good I know u got skill
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  18. LongStory Short

    LongStory Short The Unknown Writer

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    looks like some good matches this week
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  19. 5 Starre

    5 Starre Big Jaw Entertainemnt

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    dis gunna be a sick top 20 dis week.
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  20. Baron Mynd 2.0

    Baron Mynd 2.0 Topical Writer

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    Its cool Muti,

    i would of done the same if i was against me ;^)
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