too hot...let em burn

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by miscreant, Nov 17, 2010.

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  1. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    gimme a beat so i can rock it,
    a street for makin profits
    and in time you'll find i'm the same kind
    as sacred prophets
    a messiah of sorts providin fire for thoughts
    leave you like the bitch u last fucked
    desirin more
    a lotta modern emcees r claimin more than they deserve
    servin sour rhymes when the fans
    ordered sweet dessert
    bitter pill to swallow knowin that tomorrow
    comes on borrowed time
    most of yall r ignorant u c a star
    and follow blind,
    that sun is history c its just a black hole now
    like a fien stuck on replay watchin
    the crack roll round,
    and round, and round the glass pipe
    dying happily if this has to be his last night
    still oblivious to past lies
    but shit man don't ask why
    just live fast die young and let the drama pass by,
    i gotta roll in my pocket about 10 large
    wages for the pen guard supplyin contra
    for my men God brothers doin 10 plus
    and u wonder why we feel the whole world against us,
    bitches thank God, gangstas thank fuck
    what up i got the pump bout to blow your mans up
    but fuck it no need for gun play
    lyrically i burn your ass like sun rays
    some day you'll realise the genius
    and when u say sorry muthafucka, u better mean it!
    test
  2. Radical Sun

    Radical Sun New Member

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    My feedback sucks but I liked those lines right there.
    test
  3. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    please read and follow the open mic forum rules. PM me when you've given feedback to 2 threads prior to posting your own and I'll open this back up.

    you know better. I know this. please follow the rules and don't make me be a dick. I have to be vigilant or else the forum will die. people never give feedback anymore
    test
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