TOne vs MISTA FREEZE(lol)

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by TONEofMUSIC, Dec 6, 2010.

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  1. TONEofMUSIC

    TONEofMUSIC New Member

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    Here the jumpoff drop when ready
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  2. Mista FREEZE 2001

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    *FREEZE walks into room where his Goons have a battered and beatened TONE tied to a chair*

    Freeze I'm sorry... I'm sorry... Call off the Goons.... Call of the Goons!!

    FREEZE SLAPS TONE RIGHT ACROSS THE FACE!

    BYTCH WATCH YOUR TONE WHEN TALKING TO ME!!!

    I smack crews so black and blue will be the TONE OF YOUR SKIN/
    Cause U can't a-TONE for your wackness or a-TONE for your sins/
    See I be fuckin broads DOGGY givin them the BONE in the end/
    While your battle verses are like your love life... U get a lot of GROANS FROM THE MEN/
    Tone supposed he could win/
    But he got dropped instead/
    See from the TONE of his MUSIC I see that hip hop is dead/
    Tones style has been known to lack flow, means and patterns/
    I slap guys so his black eyes will be called the rings of SATURN (Yeah I slap ALIENS too! I'm the WILL SMITH of RM boards)/
    Its true U get battered/
    Everytime that U rhyme boy/
    U're not the just the UNDERDOG in this battle. U're more like SHOE SHINE BOY/
    So I'm about to beat TONE LOC-o for not realizing I'm the WILD THANG/
    THE MAJOR LEAGUE who doesn't wreck joints.. I lyrically give them a MILD SPRAIN/
    My style reigns a life time/
    & I deliver tight rhymes/
    That has more flow than Oil from IRAQI PIPE LINES/
    So TONE best be careful when opposing this Man/
    Cause its no SECRET FREEZE sprays BYTCHES like DEODORANT CANS/
    So go ahead ask STEVE AUSTIN.. He'll tell U that FREEZE is the STONE best/
    While U can cut the ears off RUSSELL SIMMONS AND U STILL COULDN'T MAKE TONE DEF!!!

    *FREEZE slaps MUSIC again*

    I SAID WATCH YOUR TONE AND KEEP YOUR HANDS ON THE VEHICLE!!!

    Okay Kid U can post when U want... Let's see what U got.... If U impress me I will come back and smash U again...

    If not it's on to the NEXT!!!

    EITHER WAY FREEZE IZ THE GOD OF RM!!!

    THIS I COMMAND!!!
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  3. TONEofMUSIC

    TONEofMUSIC New Member

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    Maan, this dude is a Sitcom
    ---SIT CALM

    Yo, he wrote his verse out like a script/
    Your whole style is played out, So it fits,
    ---Take 6
    ANd I'm not being Coy when I say that your "Ill"
    I think its sick, your 36 and a textcee, Loser,
    Get a grip
    Lifes hard... I know
    Lifes like...What your verse like
    It SUx....
    and something always pops up/
    I'm telling you this, because I see potential
    unforturnaly, its not in rap/
    Your DOO>DOO
    So-GO and find some ass to get into...
    and stop the Crap/

    REaLLY
    edited for euthasiasm
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  4. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    vote= freeze

    freeze had more material and better punches and wordplay, although TONE's opener was cool with the take 6 line the rest was blah and he didn't have enough bars to match with mista freeze
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  5. Radical Sun

    Radical Sun New Member

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    Unfortunately I have to give this to Freeze.
    RaZpUTIN pretty much summed it up.
    He just had better punches overall better verse.

    Vote = Freeze
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  6. TONEofMUSIC

    TONEofMUSIC New Member

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    yeah, that was just a quick key-style. But yo freeze your verse was hott.
    wassup Raz? wassup Rad? whats poppin'
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  7. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Mista -

    See I be fuckin broads DOGGY givin them the BONE in the end/
    While your battle verses are like your love life... U get a lot of GROANS FROM THE MEN/


    first off, stop with the *slaps (name)* crap. this isnt a diss verse, this isnt a skit. its stupid. just reading that put me off of this verse. as far as the verse goes though, you have some work to do. i seen potential in your attempts on name flips. you need to work on making them into better insults. i liked you used his location. shows you tried to get personal, but the part about Will Smith kinda ruined the punchline. you had some nice multi's in there. that was good to see. just keep practicing. i see potential in you

    Tone -

    Yo, he wrote his verse out like a script/
    Your whole style is played out, So it fits,
    ---Take 6

    cool opener, then shit went straight downhill. those "lifes hard... life sucks...it sucks..." you had in there really hurt your verse. i dont know what you were trying to do/what you were thinking with those. but your join date shows that youre new to this (unless you're an alias) so my advice is keep working. work on ways to really try to insult your opponent. all the fancy word play and shit will come with practice. but find ways to jus burn the guy your against.

    vote- MIsta
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