Token introspective verse (but it's, you know, good)

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  1. troubledwaters

    troubledwaters New Member

    Jul 21, 2010
    I can't help but disregard all the things I should fear
    I'm tired, if I was higher would this be a Good Year?
    Agnostic now, maybe I should have gone back to church
    All these years passed, still lying in my afterbirth
    Life's an invention, try to make the most of it 'til your patent's up
    'Cause hurt lasts like burnt glass, it can surpass the love
    What dirt have I done? More to me than towards the others
    Beliefs hold me down, my corpse's freedom forced to suffer
    Trying to prove myself 'til most of their assumptions are snuffed
    But I'm digging my own grave, so there's no one there to cover it up
    My insights can make me smile proud, but they're generally stupid shit
    Helps to break my life down, from the minerals to nutrients
    'Cause when I write my plights down, it seems simpler improving them
    But I know that deep inside, down, it's a mythical and foolish wish
    Internally roped and chained, I might as well reside by the docks
    Lately it's like I'm skating thin ice, this is my life on the rocks

    This is a result of constantly listening to the new Sadistik EP.
  2. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

    Sep 5, 2010
    good shit man some of the rhymes were a little off but it still worked kept with the theme and that last line was a dope ender
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