To My Secret Admirer Live At NKCHS

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  1. Deficiency

    Deficiency True Poetical Emcee

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    this is a live performance I did at my high school on stage.. last week on Thursday December 4th, 2003'. The talent show was great. Overall it did really well.. I really really worked hard on this piece and put my heart into it and also in my live performance and delivery. Check it out..

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/justpoeticalmusic.htm
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  2. Dark_Angel

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    well you sounded like you did a great job. u had a clear voice and it all sounded good from what i hear, the poem was good and you had good rhythm. nice work
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  3. Deficiency

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  4. Oni Mag

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    damn, props for doin that, i wouldnt be able to, cuz i would be embarrassed to read my poems in front of people with emotion an stuff. SO props to u nice job.
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  5. Deficiency

    Deficiency True Poetical Emcee

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    Thanks man I appreciate that. See with me I don't get embarrassed because, I know I'm coming and speaking from my heart. So I see it as.. what is there to be affraid or scared of.. if I'm being real and true to myself? You know what I'm saying? It's always been my dream to get up on stage and resite my poetry. I love performing live on stage so much.. it's a passion for me. Again.. Thank you for the reply.
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  6. sagacious infant

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    that was cute...you should post the words...
    i say that because the rhythm you used made me expect all the words on the 4s to rhyme...and they might have! but i couldn't hear that well (deaf in one ear son...k, not really but my hearing isn't the greatest)

    very nice...was homegirl there that you were talking about?
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  7. Deficiency

    Deficiency True Poetical Emcee

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    yeah she was there.. but, she wasn't able to see my performance cuz, she came to the show late which sorta sux that she didn't see me.. but, it's all good. I posted this poem on the poetry realm in november sometime.. but, I changed the title of the poem to "To My Secret Admirer" it used to be called Sauphia Pt. II.. I might post up the words sometime soon.. I don't know though..
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  8. Oni Mag

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    or maybe she just dinnit wanna get called out by u...j/k
    NIce shit once again. Pz.
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  9. Deficiency

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    lol I heard she was scared to come watch my performance from one of my boys.. I'm pretty sure that's the reason why, she came late.
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  10. Arkanjal

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    pretty good stuff there man. pretty hard 2 here with all the "go justin's" but overall good shit. im not really a fan of love poems, but i liked the rhythm 2 it and some of the things you had said.
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  11. Deficiency

    Deficiency True Poetical Emcee

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    thanks i appreciate it
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  12. Oni Mag

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    Aiight then
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  13. Oni Mag

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    its all good in tha hood
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