Thug life crime pays muthafucka all day

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  1. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    why do we feel more alive during hard times
    searchin for a meanin to life that we cant find
    i never felt so much till i buried one i loved
    and finally realised the sacrifice of the son above
    i became aware of what i had when faced with the chance
    of losin everythin i accumulated as a man
    the prospect of prison no more lush livin
    forever prayin that all my sins will be forgiven
    listen i never meant to cause nobody harm
    never meant to pray to God with bloody palms
    i just played the hand that i was dealt
    and had to bluff the world when fightin foes by myself
    i stood my ground by myself
    found my feet gained knowledge from the street
    became a scholar so now all these younger students honour me
    honestly i seldom reminisce on good times
    when i drink i sit and think of who done took mine
    formulatin plans on revenge and shit
    makin up my mind on what to hang them with
    thug life crime pays muthafucka all day
    i'd rather stack a dolla than fuck with foreplay
    y'all say what you want with nothin to lose
    but walk a mile in my shoes and you'll be crazy too uh
    test
  2. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    this was pretty cool man. had the nice flow, lyrics, etc. really liked the closing line. keep it coming
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  3. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    good shit

    but credit tupac for that last line lol
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  4. Radical Sun

    Radical Sun New Member

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    My favorite part

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  5. Feerless

    Feerless Loves Sex w/Small Animals

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    pretty deep ish man, heard in through the writting means it hit man.
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  6. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    i liked this one but for future raps dont use other artist lines u can always come up with a different approach
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  7. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    thanks 4 the replies.

    yeh, I meant to credit pac for

    "walk a mile in my shoes and you'll be crazy too"

    but forgot.

    still, how many lines are repeated these days, should have pointed it out
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