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  1. LaWlEssMc

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  2. .The omen.

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    peepin... i'm feelin this beat, nyce piano melody... voice i am feelin... nite time line was coo. damn on some hip hop shyt ferreal... felt line is kinda played... this was tite tho man, i was feelin ya hip hop root presence...

    rtf if u get a chance... http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=898295
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  3. E_Spangler

    E_Spangler GHOstBuStaH

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    sup, beats ill, illmind has some hott shit.....aight, flow is pretty strate, u slip up occasionally....lyrics are good, nothin too special, but i dig the content...delivery was good, but try enunciatin ur words more, cuz u slur them at times.....overall, this was a pretty decent track, i think u could be ill in the future if u keep at it.....keep spittin...peace
    -EGON

    ayo, whenever u get a chance, peep my shit:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=898164
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  4. LaWlEssMc

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    returning..

    ahh beat is hot.. bassline is ill.. vocals r kinda high.. i'ld drop the reverb..

    but flow is on point.. got some nice lyrics.. good delivery as well.. u kinda slur some of ur words.. but thats all good.. waiting to see if theres a hook. o ya some of ur adlibs r way off.. just a tip.. i like the switch up.. ahh no hook.. tsk tsk..

    solid joint.. px.
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  6. LaWlEssMc

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    thanks..i know..i cant do addlibs.
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    wordplays cool your stuff rhymes pretty well but if you made your lyrics a lil more clear i gaurentee you'll get more replies, also try speaking up a lil with your delivery if you get those two things down i promise u'll be nasty

    keep droppin


    check this out
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=899634
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  13. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    aiight, lets see..........


    flow is hot shit but it falls off at times, u need to work on being more consistent with that

    i like this beat, sounds like some jay d shit


    other than those slight lapses in rhythm on a couple lines, this was solid work all together


    content was sickness, and fit the beat perfectly


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=914346

    check my new shit with storz and celph when u got some times on ur hands man, thanks
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  14. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    *listening*

    the beat is nice and smooth nice for story telling

    ya flow is cool..i like that night time punchline you used

    its like the flow keeps going up and down though..like you stop at weird spots to catch ya breath lol..

    i like this joint though ...real hiphop right der

    8/10

    return the love
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=914354
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