Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by LaWlEssMc, Jun 17, 2005.
illmind on the beat
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peepin... i'm feelin this beat, nyce piano melody... voice i am feelin... nite time line was coo. damn on some hip hop shyt ferreal... felt line is kinda played... this was tite tho man, i was feelin ya hip hop root presence...
rtf if u get a chance... http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=898295
sup, beats ill, illmind has some hott shit.....aight, flow is pretty strate, u slip up occasionally....lyrics are good, nothin too special, but i dig the content...delivery was good, but try enunciatin ur words more, cuz u slur them at times.....overall, this was a pretty decent track, i think u could be ill in the future if u keep at it.....keep spittin...peace
ayo, whenever u get a chance, peep my shit:
ahh beat is hot.. bassline is ill.. vocals r kinda high.. i'ld drop the reverb..
but flow is on point.. got some nice lyrics.. good delivery as well.. u kinda slur some of ur words.. but thats all good.. waiting to see if theres a hook. o ya some of ur adlibs r way off.. just a tip.. i like the switch up.. ahh no hook.. tsk tsk..
solid joint.. px.
thanks..i know..i cant do addlibs.
Ok, flow is ok....Vocab could be better but its not the worst. Lines go together nice. Overall a nice 'free=verse' or whatever. Oh yea, I would kill that beat to ha ha ha.
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wordplays cool your stuff rhymes pretty well but if you made your lyrics a lil more clear i gaurentee you'll get more replies, also try speaking up a lil with your delivery if you get those two things down i promise u'll be nasty
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aiight, lets see..........
flow is hot shit but it falls off at times, u need to work on being more consistent with that
i like this beat, sounds like some jay d shit
other than those slight lapses in rhythm on a couple lines, this was solid work all together
content was sickness, and fit the beat perfectly
check my new shit with storz and celph when u got some times on ur hands man, thanks
the beat is nice and smooth nice for story telling
ya flow is cool..i like that night time punchline you used
its like the flow keeps going up and down though..like you stop at weird spots to catch ya breath lol..
i like this joint though ...real hiphop right der
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