"- THIS SUMMER -" Long Awaited FULL VERSION to my SOLO Track... check this out yall..

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  1. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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  2. .The omen.

    .The omen. Member

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    love tha beat, did u produce it urself? flow is sick, santa claus line was coo, ive heard that handle bars line so many times but u spittin mad fast its hard too catch everylines sickness chorus is pretty cool, just on that simple get it done nycely tip i like wen u talk about the soldiers, alot of ppl do it but u do it properly .. i'd say this is tha best flow i've heard u deliver b4 tho dog... damn lookin at the length of tha track i thought there would b a third verse, but yea ima have to cop ya album, looks like it'll be sick.... o wait, now another verse comes in, but it duznt sound like u, this dude is pretty good tho, reminds me of that dude that duz some appearances on the clipse album.. yea keep this shit comin, n let me know when tha album drops
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  3. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    beat is hot...your flow was smooth throughout the whole track. The two main things I have a problem with is that some times when you put too many words in one bar you start to slur words, and it's hard to understand some of the shit you say. The second thing is that you should shorten up some bars cause when you rhyme in a constant line it's hard for people to feel your rhythm. My suggestion is to make it as concise as possible, but not to the point where you're jeopardizing your lyricism nah mean? I think if you perfect those two things, you'll be deadly...cause your lyrics & concepts are hot...I respect that....beats are hot too...anyways keep elevating man I think you're a tight mc.


    Check me out when you got time
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=911487
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  4. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    This Shits Fire Nim

    "Another Summers Coming, Its My 22nd, Any Second This Could Be Over An Im Already Prepping"

    Nim The Gawd
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  5. BTruth

    BTruth Guest

    I knew as soon as I heard the intro that it would be hot as fuck and i was right.

    Love this song, about to get a download.
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  6. Mellow Madness

    Mellow Madness aKa sTaTiK

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    nice track

    like the beat as well.
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  7. J-One

    J-One SMELL ME !?!?

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    very nice beat, I love this track ..


    -J-One
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  8. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    thanks pal
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  9. Celph Centered

    Celph Centered Detroit's Voice

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    CHEA! Nim nasty for real
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  10. Neyedus

    Neyedus Active Member

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    this shit is real nice. Emotion and flow are crazy. Looking forward to the album bro...
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  11. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  12. Phene

    Phene High Off Life, LLC.

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    Beat is incredible.

    I mean, Whats the point in a break down.

    I'm really feelin' what you about with your music. Shit is Real.

    This is Sick.
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  13. Logic

    Logic IDP Ya Herr'd?

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    this shit is hot my dude..

    what your sayin is just whats poppin.. nahean haha


    also worked nicely for the intro for ya site


    scream at me nigguh, we got 'a get on something..


    oh, and peep the shit i dropped.. i don't got the link offhand tho lol
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  14. 4Dbling

    4Dbling Smoking weed > Shooting H

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    Started out like bam! love that

    Feeling the beat good shit

    damn getting wild on the hook shit! distortion haha

    Feeling this track alot...short as fuck though

    first time I heard you and feeling it
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  15. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    Watchn out for the remix with me and my partna e l 7


    Chessss
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  16. Hard Target

    Hard Target eshbat

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    your a talented dude...id def like to work with homey...on some real shit.

    this beat, the hook, the verses are all very very solid.

    Seem to be a dope lyricst and dope song writer, both combined is serious...

    get @ me on some real shit...peep my link in the siggy

    aim: emptycansagain
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  17. Mazzive Terror

    Mazzive Terror Substance Of Vanguard

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    I agree with Phene...

    On the real, i only got two words for you: Quality Music.
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  18. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    Watchn out for the remix with me and my partna e l 7


    Chessss
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  19. ExPrEzzIoNz

    ExPrEzzIoNz AkA ItZ a WrAp

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    shits real nice man...real shit na mean...keep doin ya thing homie...

    -Ex
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  20. this is dopeness...
    downloaded it..
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