This is what gets me closer to my dreams

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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    man i cant lie, i be gettin discouraged and shit, be wanting to give up

    like fucc rap and shit...

    but i love rap.. hip-hop is a way of life.. every time i turn my back, it stays their whsipering my name
    to come back.. i dont know about yawl but this shit is embeded into my essence..
    every sentence and every verse..i feel, my dreams are nearer then they appear..



    i woke up today, lit up a jay, wake n bake, then i logged on
    rapmusic . com,
    just to see what the haters hadda say, what the
    homees hadda say, can ya broadee away?

    any way, i see the same shit every day, i wanna get closer to my
    dreams in every way,

    so i persist to keep on writing, the struggle is
    a battle so i keep on fighting,
    i get some Nasty "blogments", its like clash
    of the titans, but this shits exciting, i cant wait, too see the the next
    comment,from my oponet i know my talent levels uncommon.. i be on it

    u put in some drake, fuck what the haters have to think, i be zoning to him right now im tryna celebrate..

    i get geared up,then i stear out
    mob to the liquor store with my mixtape,
    imm tryna clear out,
    sell em all then had back to the studio, roll up a dubi blow
    then drop the next verse for my single im tryna make a movie fo
    it seems like my advancements have been truelly slo, i get discouraged,

    but the top aint the place for every foo to go.

    this rapgames a challenge, u gotta have talent, u gotta have the best and the worsed,
    in order to keep a proper balance.

    id rather be in the between, then cold or hot, cause one day hot gone drop, and cold gone stop

    then the "inbetween" gone be the only one left to control the spot..
    and i know ima king, destined to reign supreme, holding on to my fantasy the only
    way ima get closer to my dreams.


    beat rides out....


    dreams can become shattered, nothing in the fast life matters.. its whats in ur heart and ur mind,
    its what is inside of you, that u hafta harness, all these material things all these social pressures, fucc em
    do you.. be you.. see you! then u can begin to do for other be there for others, and be able to actually see others...

    u have been blessed!
    test
  2. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    thats pretty cool man good flow nice multis a message of encouragement from the discouraged haha keep it up
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  3. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    thanks bruh man
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  4. dsp2k5

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    i liked it ... flow was right ... multi's was there ... good job
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  5. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    this was nice man. inspiring lol. but i feel you. theres been times i jus wanna be like fuck it and quit but i always come back. this was a dope drop. rhyme schemes was nice. flowed well. well done homie.
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  6. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Thanx t.a.c.

    U gotta be one of the normalest mods there is..
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  7. TACOMA253BRNRZD

    TACOMA253BRNRZD New Member

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    holy fucking shit batman this was such a interesting read! very good priest!
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